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Sorry for the delay on my feedback. Such a sweet post. I loved the whole scenario. Thinking of past memories between Manav and Archana which is being missed.

Please update soon. Smile

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Edited by Soumya02 - 31 October 2012 at 6:13am

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GUYS I maynt able 2 updt my all post 4 a long while aftr dis week. So m trying 2 updt it at hurried manner. Plz 4gv me 4 dis.
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Chapter-5
PART-1
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Archana: i am getting late. Varsha z is waiting for her at de movies, while looking 4 a auto in the rain wid an umbrella whn a car stops infront of her nd Archana gets really scared.
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Manav who is wid his sister nd Varsha r waiting 4 Archana. Archana who z scared as she doesn't knw who it might be, the person rolls down his window nd archana is relieved 2 see her boss Ajit.
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Archana: Sir, Aap
Ajit: Hah, Mein. actually i just cm back 4m a meet nd was just heading home and he saw her walking.
Archana: actually Sir, i was looking for a cab, as she has to go smwhr becoze her sister z waiting for her.
Ajit: den i'll drop u and i'll nt tk no 4 an answer as he'll nt allow her 2 be out in de dark alone.
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Archana knew dat she'll feel safe with her boss nd agrees, while driving Ajit z just staring at Archana but whn Archana looks at him, Ajit looks away.
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Ajit: where were u heading Archana
Archana: sir, i was heading to the movies as I had promised my sister Varsha dat I would watch a movie wid her.
Ajit: I see, dat's nyc. next time if u need a ride home den please do let me knw as he doesn't want her to be going out dis late at nyt alone.
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Dey reach 2 de movies nd Archana thanks him nd she leaves. while Archana z walking Ajit is looking at her while smiling at the same time.
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Manav is standing wid his sister nd Varsha who is thnkng in his head why Archana hasn't shown up yet.
Manav: why hasn't Archana shown up yet, i hope she z cmng becoze if she zn't den wht z de point of him here.
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Archana walks in nd Manav z happy to see her. Archana see's Manav nd gets really shy. Jyoti nd Varsha cn see de way both look at each other nd think dat smthng is up nd dey all get in.
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While watching de movie, Manav ends up sitting by Archana. seeing smthng scary on screen Archana holds onto Manav's hand, Manav looks at her but den Archana takes her hand off aftr realizing what she z doing.
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On de other hand 6 rows dwn Raj, Prem, Sanjana & Naina heer and r sitting watching de movie. Raj keeps on trying 2 mk moves on Naina. Naina gets mad nd pinches Raj on his arm nd Raj says ouch, nd so does manav.
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Manav thinks Archana must of gotten mad nd decided nt to bug her anymore. Aftr de movies ended all strated 2 walk out. Manav nd Raj end up bumping into each other bt don't see each other as bfr Manav could turn around to see him Jyoti took him along.
Both Raj nd Manav could feel a connection.
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Later dat night
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Both Manav nd Archana were thnkng abt each other. Jyoti and Rani go into there Dada's room to see him glazing into the sky, nd Varsha & Vaishalli go into Archana's room to see her singing and hugging her teady bear which she has kept with her for 21 years.
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Meher went to the mall wid a couple of friends she tries on a nyc lengha whch she likes as Karva Chaut z coming up smthng she has nvr seen in her life but was told by her sister that it'll be a big celebration tom and as she doesn't have any Indian clothes she went to do sm shopping, as she saw a really nyc lengha.
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Archana who has cm wid 2 of her friends r also looking at lengha's. Archana didn't want to cm as it z a big mall 4 rich high people bt was forced by her friends.
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Both Naina nd Archana endup wearing the sm lengha which dey both lyk. Naina decides 2 buy it bt Arcahna seeing de price decides 2 put it back. Naina see's it and feels bad so she decides to buy it nd tells de lady to lower de price nd tells her its nt for 600 but 250 in which Archana gets happy nd buys it.
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While walking Archana hears 2 of de casher talking abt Naina gvng money to her nd Arcahna goes to ask her who it was. Den Arcahna follows Naina.
Naina who is having problems carrying her bag ends up dropping de bags nd Arcahna helps her, Naina see's her.
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Naina: 10q s Archana: No I should be de 1 to be saying thanks Naina z looking all puzzled Archana: de lengha nd paying for it. Naina: oh yeah its noting
Archana: it's noting u paid 4 my lengha that's a lot for people lyk us. I need to pay u back.
Naina: no its okay, I don't want any money bt how about we become friends nd whn evr I need favor I'll ask for it.
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Archana: sounds gd, Hi m Archana Karanjkar
Naina: Hi I am Naina Bharaduaj nd I just came 4m London nd m living with my sister in her in laws house, hw abt I drop you home nd bfr dat hw about we get sm coffee.
Archana: sure why nt dat would be nyc.
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4 a while both Archana nd Naina started to see each other nd got to know each other much better. 1 day Archana came over 2 de Mallhotra's house.
Raj who was comng down de stairs was abt see Archana bt Naina tk Archana wid her.
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Precap: Both Naina nd Archana cm out 4m deir houses in sm lehenga looking inhitialy beautiful.

Edited by Soumya02 - 31 October 2012 at 6:30am

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REALLY NICE...and its really sad to know that u can't be updating ur stories...Hope to get ur update soon n pls pm me if u update the next one..will wait for it... Smile

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There z a big dhamaka cming up in my next updt whch will mk ew speechless!! So don't miss any1.

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Originally posted by Soumya02

There z a big dhamaka cming up in my next updt whch will mk ew speechless!! So don't miss any1.

can't wait for it..Please if possible update soon...Please...

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Chapter-5
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NEXT DAY
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Naina at de chawl waiting 4 Archana, as c got out of the car, pple around de chawl r shocked 2 see her as c z wearing short western clothes. Naina is walking nd all de guys of de chawl r just staring at her nd sm are even getting beaten by there wives 4 staring at her!!
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Naina gets into the house nd drags Archana out of de house as she z walking out. Archana's Aai cms and tell both 2 tk there Aarti nd both do nd leave. Half way driving Archana tells Naina 2 stop by her office as she has some important files 2 pick up nd Naina agrees.
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While waiting Naina gets thirsty nd decides to get sm water. C realizes c doesn't hv a bottle wid her so c goes 2 de small little store right beside de office to get bottle of water. While getting sm water, 2 guys come nd start to harass her.
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Naina tells dem to back off bt dey don't listen. Until Archana cms nd tells dem get lost bfr c calls de cops, nd both of de goons leave.
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Naina: 10x
Arcahan: no problems, bt it wasn't dere fault.
Naina: what do u mean
Archana: I mean if u wear clothes lyk these den guys here'll harass you. Dis isn't London bt India
Naina: but I have nvr in my life weared Indian clothes I mean I hv always weared western clothes.
Archana: but I hv Indian clothes, lets do a mk over
Naina: Huh
Archana: cm wid me
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She takes Naina's hand nd dey both go back 2 Archana's house and mks Naina sit. while Arcahna, Varsha nd Vaishali gve her a mk over. All look at her bt she isn't shown yet. Aai see's her nd says Kisike Nazar na lage.
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Naina looks at herself nd thinks if it is really her nd Archana tells her it is her nd Naina leaves 4m there.
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Back at home
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Every1 is waiting for her, Raj z talking on the phone, Sanjana z giving tea 2 every1 nd prem z drinking tea.
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As Naina who is walking in, her hair down straightened as payals on her leg, wearing a nice fitted pink suit wid a very deep back and is tied wid a ribbon.
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Naina who is trying to handle her is walking in nd Sanjana ends up dropping all of the tea, prem drops his cup, every1 is just shocked as what dey are seeing nd Raj who z talking on the phone nd just has a wide mouth open. All of the servants stop what dey are doing nd Naina who z handling her hair is shown as she is walking in nd everyone is just looking at her. Raj is juts mesmerized seeing her nd can imagine dem married funny little scene.
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Sanjana: is that really you.
Naina: com'on Di of course it is me, how do I look.
Gayatri: lyk a pari
Naina: 10qs
Naina goes to Prem who is telling her she is looking nyc. Raj is just following her when Sanjana pulls his ears telling him to cm wid her.
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Next morning
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Naina calls Archana up, thankng her for her new look nd Archana tells her it is okay as she did it for her. Archana realizes she is late 4 work nd tells Naina dat she'll talk 2 her later on.
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Archana is leaving de house whn a big silver car cms in front of de basti. Archana goes nd is puzzled as she doesn't knw who might be in de car nd what it is doing here. A guy in a white suit, who looks lyk a driver cms out nd tells Archana dat dis car z 4m de company as 4m now on every employee'll be getting picked up 4m there house to work. Archana smiles nd thinks abt Ajit nd hw wonderful he is!! nd she leaves.
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She gets 2 work and starts 2 work, while working on sm papers. Ajit is looking at her 4m his cabin.
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He thinks 2 himself she is de 1 nd also dat it has been 2 years nd still he hasn't been able to tell her hw he feels.
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Archana is invited 4 lunch by Ajit. Dey both go 2 a restaurant. Ajit orders Aloo Chaat wid Puri's which is Arcahana's favourite.
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Archana: sir you lyk Aloo Chaat too, dis is my favourite.
Ajit: I know dat is why I ordered it.
Archana: bt hw did you know that??
Ajit: I heard you telling it to Roshni last time
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Both smile at each other and start to eat.
Manav who is dropping a customers car dat way see's dem both nd gets really mad nd kind of jelous.
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Tym get passed nd both grls devloping feelings 2wards deir soulmets. Naina nw always get looked in Indian dress up. Finaly Karwa Chaut cms.
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Morning
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Prem z sleeping nd starts 2 hear bajhan, which annoys him nd thinks its Sanjana again, until he finds Sanjana sleeping next 2 him nd den both realize who z singing. Along wid de other, Raj also wakes up thnkng who z singing so early in de morning.
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All get out of there rooms nd start to walk towards de puja room. Dey all see Sanjana getting out of de room nd think who might be singing.
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When the girl turns around nd all see it is Naina, Raj smiles, nd Gayatri z shock nd thinks abt how much Naina has changed 4m de day she cm to now.
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Naina goes to Raj for to tk his arti. Sanjana see's dem both nd thinks in her head dat dey r just made 4 each other.
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Part 2 z in below...

Edited by Soumya02 - 01 November 2012 at 5:21am

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