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nice update

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Luvd it a lot nd waiting 4 next 1.

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Clap Clap Gd work Soumya. Keep it up

Edited by Attitudeboy - 23 October 2012 at 5:36am

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Well written soumya. Looking 4ward 4 u'r next updt.

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Beautiful update...Smile...pls PM me the next one...

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Chapter-4(b)

Archana goes 2 de movies wid her colleagues. Dere car gets stuck half way nd Archana starts 2 cry thnkng hw will she get home on tym.
Her friends tell her 2 relax dey will get home on time.
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Manav who 2 driving spots de car goes 2 dem askng dem if dey need any help nt seeing Archana until he turns around nd see's her. Dey ask for help nd Manav helps dem out bt tells dem dat dey need 2 leave de car here. Dey should cm nd pick it up tom nd drop it at his garage, he gives his card.
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He z abt 2 leave whn he hears Archana cryng tellng her frnds hw'll c get home until Manav offers her a ride. Archana knew c couldn't say no so c went wid him.
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Archana z hesitating 2 hold Manav nd just sits behind him bt ends up holding him as c was abt 2 fall. Manav tells her nt 2 be scared as he'll mk sure c doesn't fall.
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Manav drops Archana near de galley so no1 cn see her wid a guy. C starts 2 walk bt her dupatta gets stuck. C turns around 2 see, her dupatta z stuck; on Manav's watch. C stares at him bt also stares at herself as her dupatta has fallen off her. C stands dere kind of scared nd z crying.
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Manav takes her dupatta out of his watch goes 2 her nd wraps de dupatta around her. Archana stares at him nd so his Manav. Manav tells her not be sad nd to leave nd c does.
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Manav stares at her telling himself wht z it dat makes him more closer to her.
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Raj comes in2 Naina's room 2 talk 2 her bt see's c z not around. Naina cms out of de bathroom nd Raj hides behind de blinds. Naina cms out in a purple silky longdress, drying her hair. Raj stands behind blinds staring at her.
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Naina seeing no1 z around puts sm music on nd starts 2 dance on Zara Zara Touch Me 4m Race. Raj z kind of mesmerized bt also feeling really uneasy as he thinks he should leave bt cant as he can't take his eyes off her.
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Naina z still dancing until c see's some feets and thinks it's a theft. C z abt 2 scream whn Raj covers her mouth telling it is him.
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C gets mad nd tells him 2 get out. Raj tells Naina he cm in2 talk 2 her. Naina tells him if he is crazy nd how long he has been in here 4. Raj tells her long enough 2 see her dance.
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Naina gets embarrassed bt gets mad nd kicks him out bt ends up kicking him in the bum nd Raj runs out.
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Raj tells himself dat 2day c hates him bt he'll make sure he'll win her.
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Naina is walking dwn de stairs nd c ends up tripping whn some1 catches her.
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Guy: r ew ok while smiling at her, bt face is nt shown.
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Naina: yeah m f9 nd 10q ew, as if ew didn't catch me den i would of broken smthng.
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Guy: It's alright. While talking Raj see's dem nd kind of gets jealous.
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Jaswant calls Naina nd he see's the guy.
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Jaswant: Tum!!
Guy: yes me, I was called by Amitav uncle.
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Jaswant tells de guy dat Amitav z at de breakfast table nd they all go. Naina is still mesmerized by the guy, bt Raj 4m de corner z nt happy.
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All at de breakfast table. Amitav see's de guy,
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Amitav: Rahul, Beta ew hv cm.
Rahul: ( Face is shown) i hv 2 uncle, as ew called me.
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Amitav makes dem all sit nd Naina tells dem all she has 2 leave 4 college. Sanjana thinks disz a grt opportunity 4 Naina 2 solve her prblms wid Raj.
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Sanjana: Raj, ew tk Naina 2 college. Raj is smiling.
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Naina: Di, it's okay i'll go on my own. Bt Sanjana doesn't agree nd Naina z forced 2 go wid Raj.
Raj winks nd thanks Sanjana nd Sanjana just smiles.
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Manav z in his room thinking abt Archana while layed on his bed. His sister cms in talking abt sm prblms dat happened at college bt Manav z 2 busy thinking abt Archana.
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Jyoti: Dada, Dada , DAAADDDAAA
Manav: Huh, Jyoti, Tum, whn did ew cm.
Jyoti: Dada r ew ok. I hv been sitting hr nd talking 2 ew 4 lyk 20 mins non stop nd ew didn't knw dat i was in de room!!
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Manav: Oh Sry, I didn't knw dat ew were talking 2 me.
Jyoti: Dada, I wanted sm money as in de evenining me, Varsha nd Vrasha's sister Archana r going 2 see Ajab Prem Ki Gajab Kahani in de evening.
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Hearing Arcahana's name Manav gets excited.
Manav: Archana z coming!!
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Jyoti: Hah, seeing her brother's excitement Jyoti could feel dat smthng z up nd she suggest dat Manav should cm wid dem 2.
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Manav who wanted 2 go bt didn't want 2 mk it look so obvious.
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Manav: No its ok.
Jyoti: Nahi Dada, ew hv 2 cm wid me.
Manav smiles nd agree bt thnkng in his head dat he'll be able 2 meet Archana.
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Naina nd Raj at college.
Naina leaves widout saying anythng 2 Raj.
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Raj: hello I gv u a ride nd u didn't evn 10q me.
Naina: i o9ly 10qs pple who do favours 4 me nd gvng her a lift wasn't a favour as c refused, nd c leaves from dere.
Raj: koi baat nahi.
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(Later dat night)
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Archana z walking in de dark looking 4 a taxi or a auto as she is getting late 4 de movies. Suddenly a car stops in front of her nd she gets scared.
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Precap: Naina nd Archana shown hving fun at a cafe.

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Plz Lyk nd leave ewr feedbacks.

Edited by Soumya02 - 30 October 2012 at 3:36am

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sweet

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
nice...do continue...looking forward for next update n pls pm me to...

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