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Nice update. As i said earlier i think Manav n Raj r long lost twin brothers. While reading this chapter i m remembering film Judwa. Waiting for Archana's entry.

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Superb update. plot, charecter sketch & all z just awsm. Continue & if possible den plz PM me.

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ClapClapClapVry nyc update. Thumbs Up I lovd the charecter sketch. Plz plz plz PM me.

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Awesome update Soumya!

Loved the sketch. I too have a feeling that both Manav n Raj are identical twins s they can feel and sense when something happens to either of them.

So our dear Manav is going to meet his dream girl in the temple...I feel it's ArchanaSmile. Cant wait for that moment. Am so excitedTongue its a beautiful bonding between Raj and Sanjana. Like the part where Raj falls in love with Sanjana's sis, London return ah...

Waiting for your next update. Do con't soon.


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Sry 4 late. Actually m busy in smwhr. So hr we go.


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Chapter - 4(a)




Manav z walking up the stairs nd goes to pray.
He z asking God that whn will he find her?? It was de 1st time he told some1 abt his dream girl and hope his Aai'll find her.

He tells his siss, he z going to wait for dem dwnstairs nd leaves from there.
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While putting on his shoes a grl who drops her taali z abt to fall but Manav catches her. Her hair z blowing into her face.
Manav who z mesmerized, just glazing at her.
Her dupatta goes onto Manav's face and she remvs it off.

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Aftr a gd 5 minutes he let got of her. Her sis Varsha runs after her asking her if she z ok. Manav's sis also comes and recognizes Varsha nd both tell there sis and bro that they r gd friends on Fb.
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Den both introduce Manav and Archana and both leave diff ways.
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Manav z still standing there looking at Archana who is walking but turns around to see Manav nd,
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Khulti fizayen khulti ghatayen,
sar pe naya hai asmaan...
Teri ore Teri ore
plays

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A grl wearing western short dress z waiting for som1 at airport but no1 has arrived. She gets mad.
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On the other hand Raj and Sanjana r still shopping.
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De grl waits for a little while more and ends up tkng cab nd ask her 2 go Mallhotra mansion nd he takes her.
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Sanjana realizes dat she z late nd tells Raj to hurry up.
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They reach to de airport to find out dat de flight 4m London has arrived nd evry passenger has left. Both Sanjana and Raj think Naina has arrived home. Sanjana is worried as she knows Naina's anger. Raj tells her to relax.
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The girl z in the cab. Bt suddenly the cab stops in mid. She goes to see what is prblm nd see's Manav who z in the mid of the road fixing his bike and Naina gets mad.
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Both Naina and manav get at it. Naina just walks off.
One of Manav's friends ask who she was?? Manav tells him she z a rich spoilt brat and we hv nthng to do wid and dey leaves.
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Naina sits in the cab telling her self what type of people there are in India!!
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Archana drops her sist off and goes to work. While walking in the office she drops some files nd bend down 2 pick it up.
Suddenly a hand cms 2 help her.
It is her boss!!
Then he ask her how she z and Archana rply him dat she is fine nd leaves. Her boss smiles lovingly 4m back.
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One of Archana's colleague who z also a gd frnd of her, ask her abt going to the movies bt Archana denies 1st.
Bt later hwevr they convince her.
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Naina reaches at the Mallhotra Mansion. She z walking in whn all of the servants r staring at her. She goes into the house and see Amitav nd Gayatri. She 1st introduce herself dat she z Naina nd hugs dem. Her parents are also there and she hugs them 2.
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Sanjana reached home and see Naina who seams mad at her. Sanjana explains to her that it wasn't her fault but her devar's.
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Naina tells Sanjana, she zn't mad at her but at some1 else. Some idiots who she met on the streets. Sanjana calm her down by hugging her.
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Raj is walking and ends up stumbling on Naina's luggages nd 1 of the servants who was walking in wid petals of flowers ends up falling to nd all of de flowers fall onto Naina.
Raj looks up and see her who is talking wid Sanjana. He got mesmorized, thinks he has just see an angel, while looking at her,

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Pehli nazar main kaisa jadu kardia,
tera gun behta hai mera jiya...
Plays
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Sanjana z asking Naina abt who the guy was??
Naina z telling Sanjana dat de guy was really rude.
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Raj cms to introduce himself. But Naina start to yell at him wht de hell he z doing here and Raj gets confused. Naina tells Sanjana that this is the guy.
Bt Sanjana thinks Naina has gone nuts and takes her to her room nd Naina tells herself that Raj was fooling wid her she wont forgive him.
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Manav is at his garage thinking about Archana. One of the workers z asking him for a tool but he isn't paying attention to him until Manav ends up dropping a tool on his leg.
His colleague ask him wht did he think abt nd Manav tells him noting.
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Precap: Manav is driving his bike on the road nd Archana sits behind him. She hesitates 2 hold him bt due 2 a sudden break c falls on him nd they hv a eye lock. ************************************

So hw ew lyk it plz let me knw through ewr lyk nd feed backs.


Edited by Soumya02 - 22 October 2012 at 10:58pm

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very interesting..keep writing

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