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MANVEER SS " KOI THUMSA NAHI " CHP 26 pg 91( kushi (Page 5)

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adorable_rana

Superb Puggy...Uday jealous and M getting attracted towards her...too goodThumbs Up

Looking forward to read moreDay Dreaming

Update soon and do pm meHug

        Thank u ... I'll update in 2 days ...it try to pm u because I have some prob wit this ...sorry for that ...I'll leave note about wen am gonna update...thanks dear
           Uday will realize his love for her in coming chapters ...some small twists...manyatah also will love him but it takes time...


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gr8 update dear...loved the SS...it was beautifully writtenClap n felt as if iam seeing all these in realSmile...update soon dear

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gr8 update dear...loved the SS...it was beautifully writtenClap n felt as if iam seeing all these in realSmile...update soon dear

THANKS A LOT krishna ... ur praising ...am so happy ...thanks for liking ... ill update in 3 days ...thank u
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

Originally posted by snowdream

gr8 update dear...loved the SS...it was beautifully writtenClap n felt as if iam seeing all these in realSmile...update soon dear

THANKS A LOT krishna ... ur praising ...am so happy ...thanks for liking ... ill update in 3 days ...thank u
this was awesome dear...and it needs a lot of appreciation

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                                            CHAPTER 4

UDAY - it's Friday morning . He wakes up wit a smile. Gets up and soon gets ready and finds out from PA that manyatha is coming to meet him in da office by 11 ... He goes into his room and change his shirt from formals to casual. He wears a navy blue shirt .in that his arms wit muscle is clearly visible. He opens his shirt first 3 buttons . His mighty clean shaved chest is visible now .he is taking much care about his dressing today . " uday what is this y ur behaving like a typical teenage guy who is going for his first date" he is smiling and wearing shoes.

UNNATHI - dada wer r u going? 

UDAY - as usual office ...y ur asking me today ? Do u hav some work wit me?

UNNATHI - even if I have u will leave today ...after all ur going to meet ur princess manyatha

UDAY - chotiii now how u know this? Mera jaasusi karahiho kya ? 

UNNATHI - I heard it wen u were talking to ur PAWink

UDAY - k choti am leaving , will meet u in da evening .he will kiss unnathi on forehead and leave for office. Unnathi will b giggling at uday Wen he is leaving.

MANYATHA - she got ready . She is checking out herself in mirror.meanwhile ANANYA barges into her room.

ANANYA - u idiot , bloody dog , bitch ."..bla bla ...Yuvraj uday ke saath kaam kar rahi ho and u dint even tell me about it 

MANYATHA - I was about to tell u anu but was busy as I ... ANANYA doesn't allow her to speak

ANANYA - u devil as soon as u saw a hot guy forgot about ur childhood best friend . U know he is my long time crush n din even tell . Manyatah interrupts her pleads her to give a chance to explain . K mannu tell me wat made u to cheat on me 

MANYATHA - ooy drama queen cheating an all...for ur kind information am not interested in that play boy ...k leave it ...nidhi's father met wit a minor accident on da party day n next day v were busy in hospital ... So din get time to tell u

ANANYA - wat!!!! How is uncle now? In which hospital ,I'll go n c

MANYATHA - nidhi and family went to Delhi .will return after a week .uncle is perfectly fine. A minor accident. K now I hav to go to office to give this file ...am getting late so meet u in da evening darling

ANNANYA - wat!!! Going to  uday :-) pls take me also 

MANYATHA - wat??!!!!  R u mad? How can I ? 

ANANYA - don forget that even am an architect ...Arjun bhai went to Australia so am looking aft his business otherwise even I would join u n nidhi ...daily would c my hottipie ...

MANYATHA - k whatever first get in car wit me . V will discuss in car ...u knw am punctual ...

ANANYA - k  v will tell him that as nidhi is not gonna come for a week am helping u bolke

MANYATHA - wah anu all criminal ideas ... K darling anything for u ... Then look at this file and have a glance ...u should at least know about wat u helped me rite Wink

ANANYA - ya that's true ...I'll go through 

        They both reach office and go to uday's cabin.

UDAY - it's already 11 , wer is princess... I came at 10 only and waiting like hutch dog for her ... He will find manyatah coming toward his cabin ...his adrenaline levels rise but he finds ANANYA beside her, he is confused now. K let them come . Why am I getting so impatient . This girl is making me go crazy ... O girl " koi Thumsa nahi " 

ANANYA and MANYATHA - they enter da cabin n uday asks them to take their seats 

UDAY - so rajkumari ANANYA ur here wit manyatha !!!  By da way hello ...how r u?

ANANYA - am good ...thanks ... Actually as nidhi VERMA is not gonna come for a week am assisting manyatah , v r classmates , childhood friends

UDAY - that's so nice ... So think u must b having hard time managing Yuvraj Arjun's work and helping princess I mean manyatah

ANANYA - no that's not even that tough ...90% of da work is done by mannu ...me - like a helping hand that's it 

MANYATHA - uday here r da new plans pls check it n ya I left da last part ... I want to have a glance of construction site and proceed further

UDAY - ya surely princess :-) v shall go now to sight ,y to delay ...only if ur ok wit it ...wat say? So ANANYA is that ok for u? ANANYA gets a call n excuses them

MANYATHA - k no prob v will go , even I don like to delay work 

ANANYA - hey sorry guys I hav to go ...dad called ...some work ... I'll join u from tomorrow ...bye uday ...bye mannu ...she kisses on manyatha's cheek and leaves.

UDAY - he laughs at da girls act of kissing . Girls too girly ... How lucky ANANYA is nicely kissed my princess ... Thank god now only v both ...kash this nidhi and ANANYA never joins us ...

MANYATHA - k uday I'll wait for u at da site k ... But pls can u tell me da exact location

UDAY - y don v go together ...same destinationWink he smirks , I mean to say even u donno da location clearly , will go together princess ...wat say? 

MANYATHA - k then let us go 

UDAY - he gets up ... After u young lady ...  They both go down ...uday opens car door for her .both of them sit in da car . Will b going to site. They have casual talk. Manyatha phone rings.

MANYATHA - excuse me , hi Arjun ...idiot ur still awake , wat ur doing in da midnight ...Wink Naya girl friend kya . ( uday opens his mouth to c manyatha talking like that ,as she looks decent and behaves classily wit him .he doesn't know its Yuvraj Arjun ,thinks mite b her cousin or friend .this time he takes it lite as he had already experienced Samar and manyatha incident that day ) common Arjun always work work . I'll do one thing , I'll get u married to ur laptop aur thum office ka jamaisa banjaa ...like thAt for 5 min casual talk goes on and she cuts da phone telling that  she would call  him later .

UDAY - he stares at manyatha for her colourfull language and naughtiness . She is so jovial . Wit everyone she will b like that ...wen it comes to me so normal ... She jus knows me ... It takes time for us to become buddies.
         They reach da site . 

MANYATHA - such a good choice uday ...I love it . 

UDAY - he stares at manyatha , she wears a blue  jeans skirt wit a white top ...he stares at her ,mesmerized by natural beauty .. Thanks princess , u liked it am happy . Next project is wit ur bro Samar ,think u know it

MANYATHA - I donno dada never discusses business issues wit me , that's really nice uday, u n dada together . I know u both r business partners . K shall v go inside n c

UDAY -  surely princess , both go and look all over and discuss da plan .its been  two hours almost .

PA - pa comes and informs uday that civil engeneer would come aft 2 hours to discuss wit architect as he is in some meeting , also it's unplanned sir so he asked for ur apology

UDAY - that's k ya it's unplanned, v came suddenly . No prob . Fix it , u can leave . Jus a min pa ... princess shall I fix it or u hav some work 

MANYATHA - no its k ...v will complete it off today 

UDAY - k mr raamu fix it ,ask engeneer to come to uday nivas restaurant , v will discuss there . U can leave now ... So princess its lunch time ,shall v hav lunch in uday nivas and continue wit work? Engeneer will come n join us .. 

MANYATHA - ya surely uday y not ... Even am hungry ,I forgot to have my breakfast  as I didn't have time

UDAY - princess u should have had it n come to office...what's  da big deal if u get late ... K come v will go .

MANYATHA - she looks at uday clearly in sunlight . He is like  greek god . Oh my god he is looking dam sexy ... Look at his chest ...it's too yummy ...chi manyatha y ur getting all vulgar thoughts...its not u actually ...staying wit this flirt ur becoming like him and getting all such thoughts ... They reach restaurant .

UDAY - he takes her near da pool side ...no one will b there ,it's private cabin . Whenever he comes he eats there. He asks manyatha to order food. 

MANYATHA - wow uday it's so cool ...I mean da interiors and all da stuff ... Like kid she is getting excited , uday enjoys it .looks at her wit intense passion . I must say uday u have a great choice

UDAY - thank u princess , so u like da place . U can come here whenever u want .

MANYATHA - I think it's ur private place . I came to this hotel many times but since it's a private place never saw it .its so nice

UDAY - ya it's private place . But  not for u ,ur  always welcome . I'll tell manager . This is ur place from now onwards

MANYATHA - hey uday that's k ..thanks for it. Food comes and they both have lunch .

UDAY - he gets a call . Huh choti ...  He talks to her . He gives da phone to manyatha as she wants to talk to her 

MANYATHA - hi unnathi darling!!! So wassup ? ( uday laughs at der conversation thinking girls r too much ... Crazy ) ya that day v cancelled plan due to that incident . K v shall plan it in this week . I'll ask ANANYA and meera if they r free.

UNNATHI - I already spoke to them baby , this Sunday sleep over .

MANYATHA - k done :-) 

UNNATHI - small change in plan ...sleep over is at my place 

MANYATHA - y .? V planned it at devgad mahal rite

UNNATHI - many times v did there , so now for a Change at my place .k mannu ? 

MANYATHA - she tells ok  n cuts off da phone

UNNATHI - hmm mannu now ur coming to ur future Inlaws place Wink Mission success. I'll create situations to get my dada and mannu together . I should first discuss about this wit meera and make a good plan . 

MANYATHA - she goes near pool side and dips her legs in it and sit there. Uday also comes and sits beside her .they talk casually .manyatha gets up .she looses her balance and about to fall in da pool .

UDAY - he tries to catch her and both end up falling into da pool .
They both laugh at each other and come out . Manyatah apologizes uday. Uday tells " princess thats k pls no formalities " uday looks at manyatah awfully . She looks dam hot . Her white shirt almost became transperant, he avoids to look . If it was an other girl I wud take advantage , now it's diff y am I feeling protective about her.

MANYATHA - realizes her situation and gets embarrassed .

UDAY - manyatha u can come to my personal suit and change ur dress . Don worry I'll ask my assistant to get a dress for u .

MANYATHA - thanks uday . Am so worried thinking how to go out . Thanks u saved me

UDAY - y to worry wen uday is here . Do u think am gonna let u go out like this.. K come v will go . They go to their suit . He offers her his shirt and a track to wear till she gets her dress from boutique

MANYATHA - no uday that's k I'll wait ... She sneezes

UDAY - see princess u already caught cold , so pls listen to me n wear it.

MANYATHA - thanks uday ...both change dresses and come out .

UDAY - he wears a black shirt n a jeans . He looks at manyatha wit his eyes opened wide . She looks smoking hot wit wet hair and his loose white silk shirt till her knees . And. Loose track .

MANYATHA - am looking like a clown in ur dress uday

UDAY - then from now onwards am gonna love clowns ... Hey never mind it's k...ur dress is on da way

MANYATHA - k thanks . Someone knocks door and uday opens.

UDAY - mr khana ( engineer ) ,pls come in . Sometimes uday and mr khanna used to discuss in his personal suit .so he came there not knowing that manyatha is there. Khanna pls be seated

Mr kHANNA - he looks manyatah from far ...he can c her from this visitors room were he is sitting . She is in da bedroom . He donno who she is but saw a girl in uday's shirt . He knows that his boss is a play boy and spends wit a new girl daily . So he doesn't care much.

UDAY - assistant comes and gives da dress. Uday gives file to kHANNA and ask him to have a glance and he goes to manyatha to give da dress

MANYATHA - it's a beautiful white anarkali dress . She wears it and come out

UDAY AND MR KHANNA - both look at her wit shocked expression

UDAY - she is perfectly like an angel from heaven, like monalisa sister . She is killing me . 

MR KHANNA - she is princess manyatha ..samar sir's sister . Wat is she doing here wit uday sir. So she is da gal whom I saw few minutes before . So she must b uday sirs another day stand . O my god uday sir is killer really ...dint even leave Samar sir'  sister and a princess. I must say she is beautifull.

UDAY - now he realises wat mr kHANNA is thinking . ." nothing happened n this guy is imagining something .wish it really happens . Not once daily for my life time "  
         then he tells manyatha to join them .in order to remove da impression he wantedly tells manyatah " c princess u came first time to my personal cabin n fell in da pool and all da mess happened , sorry for da trouble " 

MANYATHA  - that's k uday no prob am fine . Thanks for lending ur dress n  saved me from catching cold and also this beautifully dress 


KHANNA  - now he gets to know wat happened . They all discuss da plans .

MANYATHA - k uday I'll leave then it's already 6 ... 

UDAY - k princess, I'll drop u near office come. U forgot I think ur car is there 

MANYATHA - ya I forgot . Still it's k because am going to home directly from here .

UDAY - whAt !!! How ? I'll drop u common 

MANYATHA - dada is coming to pick me up .he is coming from this way . He jus called me n told. Meanwhile Samar comes to uday's suit . 

UDAY - hey Samar hai ...pls come ... 

SAMAR - hi uday ... So how u find ur new architects  work? 

UDAY - she is awesome ...a brilliant work !!!! 

SAMAR - really !!! Thanks . Even mannu told that she liked da project . Mannu wat is this ,u dint wear this dress in da morning as far as I remember

MANYATHA - yes dada ...she explains all da fiasco ... So shall v leave dada , ananaya will b waiting for me . She will not spare me if I get late

UDAY - pls manyatha Samar is my guest , at least A coffe pls, matter of 5 min . Hope that doesn't matter? 

MANYATHA and  SAMAR - ya surely 

UDAY - thanks , my pleasure 

     They hav coffe n some casual talk . Then they leave .

         Precap : 
        Manyatha meera and ananaya sleepover at jaigad mansion. 
   
UDAY - he opens da door and gets surprised to c manaytah 

MANYATHA - hi udayyy  --------------------





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itsss soo suprbb!!!!!! that misundrstnding,nidhi,jealoousy,angel in whte dress,princess!!!!!!! evrythng wa ssoo prfct!!!!!!!!! plzz do cntinuee ssooon and pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!Smile
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

itsss soo suprbb!!!!!! that misundrstnding,nidhi,jealoousy,angel in whte dress,princess!!!!!!! evrythng wa ssoo prfct!!!!!!!!! plzz do cntinuee ssooon and pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!Smile
 Thanks a lot ... I posted ...pls check it out ...I can't pm sorry for thAt ...some technical prob ...thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
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gr8 update dear...loved the SS...it was beautifully writtenClap n felt as if iam seeing all these in realSmile...update soon dear

THANKS A LOT krishna ... ur praising ...am so happy ...thanks for liking ... ill update in 3 days ...thank u
this was awesome dear...and it needs a lot of appreciation
 Thanks Krishna , am so happy to hear this from my favorite writer

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