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...navina...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 3:48am | IP Logged

Interesting beginning.

Hope this is  not gonna be a Manyata/Arjun love-story. Confused   Better let me know nowAngry...You know how I love ManveerEmbarrassed.
 
Anisha...IN FUTURE:
don't make a seperate thread for each chapter. Keep all parts in the thread you started last night with the prologue...it's easier for the readers to find.
Also...u have a lot of dialogue in the chapter; u have to leave a line between each persons speech...it will lessen the strain on the eyes.
 
Other than those small technicalities,
u have made a good startThumbs Up...
Continue soon!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Puggy. Nice update yaar.Clap Clap
Precap was really interesting. I think that guy was UV.Wink
Thanks for the beautiful update.Smile But Pls make an index on first page for the all the parts n don't use different-2 thread. Put all the updates  in one thread.So it's easy for readers to find updates.Smile
Do update soon dear.Hug

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adorable_rana

Very Nice dear.Thumbs Up

and M and Arjun share a close friendship but in the end princi will take away the princess...rightWinkLOL

Do continue and pm me when you will updateHug

     Ya uv will take away manyatha

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Interesting beginning.

Hope this is  not gonna be a Manyata/Arjun love-story. Confused   Better let me know nowAngry...You know how I love ManveerEmbarrassed.
 
Anisha...IN FUTURE:
don't make a seperate thread for each chapter. Keep all parts in the thread you started last night with the prologue...it's easier for the readers to find.
Also...u have a lot of dialogue in the chapter; u have to leave a line between each persons speech...it will lessen the strain on the eyes.
 
Other than those small technicalities,
u have made a good startThumbs Up...

Continue soon!
                  Thank u navina...pls tell me how to continue in da same thread ...I was asking about it...hey it's manveer love story...I love manveer to core...can't even imagine about Arjun n manyatha...u will know it in coming chapters...love story mien twist chahiye an ...isliye arjun

...navina...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

Originally posted by ...navina...

Interesting beginning.

Hope this is  not gonna be a Manyata/Arjun love-story. Confused   Better let me know nowAngry...You know how I love ManveerEmbarrassed.
 
Anisha...IN FUTURE:
don't make a seperate thread for each chapter. Keep all parts in the thread you started last night with the prologue...it's easier for the readers to find.
Also...u have a lot of dialogue in the chapter; u have to leave a line between each persons speech...it will lessen the strain on the eyes.
 
Other than those small technicalities,
u have made a good startThumbs Up...

Continue soon!
                  Thank u navina...pls tell me how to continue in da same thread ...I was asking about it...hey it's manveer love story...I love manveer to core...can't even imagine about Arjun n manyatha...u will know it in coming chapters...love story mien twist chahiye an ...isliye arjun
 
 
Anisha...I pmd u the details of how to keep it in 1 thread,
...HOPE IT HELPS!!!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
great start sweety Arjun and manyata shares great bond i guess uday will enter in next chappy. Do update fast

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by puggyy

Originally posted by ...navina...

Interesting beginning.

Hope this is  not gonna be a Manyata/Arjun love-story. Confused   Better let me know nowAngry...You know how I love ManveerEmbarrassed.
 
Anisha...IN FUTURE:
don't make a seperate thread for each chapter. Keep all parts in the thread you started last night with the prologue...it's easier for the readers to find.
Also...u have a lot of dialogue in the chapter; u have to leave a line between each persons speech...it will lessen the strain on the eyes.
 
Other than those small technicalities,
u have made a good startThumbs Up...

Continue soon!
                  Thank u navina...pls tell me how to continue in da same thread ...I was asking about it...hey it's manveer love story...I love manveer to core...can't even imagine about Arjun n manyatha...u will know it in coming chapters...love story mien twist chahiye an ...isliye arjun
 
 
Anisha...I pmd u the details of how to keep it in 1 thread,
...HOPE IT HELPS!!!
   Thanks navina it really helped...I'll continue in this 2nd thread wer I updated 1st n 2 nd chapter... I'll try to put character sketch in this thread one only ... How to insert that character sketch link in my thread 2 near that first chapter... Thanks a lot

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

great start sweety Arjun and manyata shares great bond i guess uday will enter in next chappy. Do update fast
   Thank u ...I updated da 2nd part pls check it out...it's in da 2nd thread ... 

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