Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Hey frnds.. I m new to this forum nd gonna start new story about ariya... I was a silent reader.. Bt now after reading ur views about ariya.. I m gonna write a new story.. Hope u all like it.. I will use the ideas of the old posts by the members.. So plzz sont mind it.. Nd plzz.. Leave comments nd suggestions...
Main characters are...
ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE : A rebellious super cop. Everything in extreme wth him. He is good at heart. Bt haunted by the death of his beloved wife ROSHNI. She was brutally stabed by SIKANDAR. He joined ETF wth the motive of killing sikandar..
RIYA SHARMA : a sweetheart, cute, charming, confident, daring, strong ETF officer. She was working on reaserach desk bt now was moved to the main etf core team.. She belonged to dehradun. Was alone daughter of her parents. Her father was a very rich bussinessman of dehradun. She had been the topper of her school nd was very intelligent. She was a doctr nd had done mbbs after tht she was appointed in etf. She was the apple of her parents eyes. She is a cleaning freak nd is very obssesed about hyigene. Shree , chotu ns sneha r her best frnds. She was expert at gun shooting, martial arts nd never missed her target..
SHREEKANT SEN : popularly known as shree.. He is an iT freak.. He jst love gadgets nd handles technical work of ETF.. His best frnd riya nd chotu.
SAMEER RATHOD : chief of ETF team. Caring bt strict. In relation wth sneha, love of his life. Gonna get married soon. He is a prince of one place at rajastha.
SNEHA SINGH: cute, chirripy, nd totally girlish on. She is a forensic lab expert of ETF. She , riya ns shree are college best frnds. She is love interest of sameer.. She loves him a lot too..
CHOTTU: muscle man of the ETF. He is the commando. He is tough outside and a senti nd sweet person inside. His best frnds are riya nd shree..
Its one year now when Riya nd Arjun joined ETF.. In starting Riya used to hate Arjun due to his behaviour nd him lecturing her at every small things. Bt she being Riya love challenger nd targets given by him to her.. She everytime proves herself correct. Nd somewhwere Arjun now respectes her. Bt never shows. He started to feel some special bonding between him nd Riya. Riya too developes feelings bt is unable to understand wat r they..
Here we go..
CHAPTER : 1
In ETF office one fine morning..
Rathod : Hey guys we have a case. Some girl named sukanya is raped nd murdered at hotel purple ocket. So team get ready in 5 min. We have to leave..
Everyone : yes sir..
In next half hour everyone was in the hotel. Nd searching fr clues. Finally at eveng they all get clue nd hv found out tht the real culprit in a pub RG's..
Rathod : we can't go in pub like this. We have to be disguised..
Riya : sir us pub me sirf couples ki hi entery hai..
Rathod : wat.. Kya pagalpan hai yeh sab. Yeh aajkal ki generation bhi na..
Sneha : wat aaj ki generation. Tum hamesha gussa hi kyu karte rehte ho..?
Rathod : nhi sneha uts nt like tht. Okk.. We will nt fight okk..?? Lets think who have to go there.. (he thinks fr a while nd then say)
sneha nd i will go wth arjun nd riya. Shree u will stay back in suv at the parking lot of pub wth chotu.. M i clear myself..??..
Everyone : yes sir..
Rathod : okk.. Then its 7:30 now. Go everone nd get ready till 9. Raute u will pick up riya nd meet us at the pub only iin ur private car. Nd i will pick up sneha. Shree nd chotu tum dono jao nd abhi se pub se sare entry nd exits par cameras fit kardo. Nd phn calls tap karo.. Now move.. Fast..
At riya's cabin.. Sneha comes nd slightly elbows riya in a naughty tone. As she knws vry well tht they both r slowly falling fr each other.. So she is a cupid allong wth shree nd chotu..
Sneha : so ri.. Happy na.. Tujhe tere arjun sir ke satg couple ban ke jana hai.. Hmmm..??
Riya (irritaed) : kya sneha tu bhi na.. Tu janti hai na aisa kuch nhi then why u tease me like this yar..??
Sneha (serious nd happy) : ri jo hai na vo tu abhi samjh nhi paa rhi hai. Bt i wish tum dono jaldi hi samajh jao.. She winks at her.. Nd now come on lets go..
At parking lot.. Riya was jst gonna sit in her car. Arjun calls her..
Riya : yes sir..
Arjun: get reay till 8:30. I will call u when i will reach ur appartment. Okk..?
Riya : okk sir.
Nd they all left..
At riya's house..
Riya thinking to herself.. Yeh kya ho rha hai mjhe.. Kya jo sunny (pet name of sneha) kehti hai wo sach hai..?? Do i m really falling fr him..??.. Then she shrugs her shoulder nd say.. Nhi riyu.. Tu bhi pagal hai.. Chal ab jaldi ready hoja isse pehle ki vo aake horn bajane lage nd phir se lamba lectue sunnae.. She smiles to herself nd move towards her closet.. Ammm... Kya pehnu..??? Haan.. Yeh black short dress achi rahegi itne tym se pehnne ka mauka hi nhi mila.. Sirf office formals hi use ho pate hai.. (Suddenly her phn rings...)
Riya : hello papa..
Riya's dad : hi mera beta.. Kaisa hai tu..??
Edited by Cutiedv - 04 October 2012 at 7:30am
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