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SwaRon OS by Kritid3lover (Page 2)

_Deepika_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
res Smile

AmRiTa_S IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Lovely stuff Kriti...SwaRon are engaged and fighting over dere pet dogs LOL

This is so hilarious...god i am still laughing 

" kaash, mein kutta hota!" a very disgusting voice behind me remarked. 

" tum kutte hi ho.." i retorted.

Can't believe that the Swayam and Sharon we know can talk like this..this is so much fun. D3 main they are so intense and i love them for that but at times i seriously crave to see them fight and talk like this and not intensely. The Kiss was so sweet, Sharon blaming Swayam for seducing her LOL Wink super cute stuff.

P.S Thnx fr the PM Rosh Smile

Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 03 October 2012 at 3:46pm

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uhs313 Goldie

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
fantabulous os just loved it Heart

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Snowey IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
An awesome and amusing OS.
Loved their conversation from the very beginning while they talk about their pets, as the plot moved ahead i loved the pace and how Swayam was looking at Sharon and how she was loosing her self to him. The kiss and how it happened was amazing to know they are engaged to be married soon and to see their teasing continue was a pleasure read. 
Thanks for the PM Rosh and Kriti Smile

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_bellaSwan_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
An awesome one I loved it der r fighting like a kid and der romance was really good . I loved ur os

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neeliyer Senior Member

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS .. loved it to its core ..  both of them arguing abt sheila and neo was hilarious ROFL .. the character sketch of both swayam and sharon was too perfect just like the final kiss .. great writing .. 

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MirageSwaron IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Kriti u were awsum with this one, luved this aspect of ur writing, u handle humor very well, enjoyed this one thoroughly, & Rosh thank u for making her do this...we bechare Swaronians need this dose more often!!!!

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Sukanya... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
A light hearted comedy but it goes a long way into our hearts. Kriti dear you have done a damn good job yaar, not mushy mushy at all but super sweet lighthearted one in that respect. Poora thakan mittgaye meri, whatever sadness tha thinking swaron it is over for me after reading this one. Hahahaha I never thought they are engagedLOL, not even a single hint about that. Well hats of to you for bringing a smile on to our faces. Loved it kriti and you are a damn good writer.Clap The whole thing Neo and sheila was super sweetHeart Swayam tho mast attitude and shaorn too very naughtyDay Dreaming You have done a fantastic job!!!!!!!

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