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The Most Creative Propsal Contest

enrique IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged

Do not res or comment on this post first read the rules

Description: This contest is held to know how "CREATIVELY" you can write and express  and show case your talent  in describing a proposal between your favorite "COUPLE"..either it is our romantic "KRIYANSH" or sensuous "SWARON" or  our new couple "TAREY"so lets see how well you write it.


Rules t be kept in mind '.

1: No need for specific description about when they met and how they met'. or with whose help they met

2: No need to describe the past'.but it should have a title which denotes a particular post and the title must be in size 6 so that it is easily visible  and mention in brackets on whom it is'...

3: Only the proposal part should be mentioned ,it can have a particular place . Or on an event..its up to you'.

4: It should not be more than 600 words..and no combine work 'it must be single member work'AND AN OS WITHOUT ANY PARTS

5: No spamming or commenting on this post it should have only the stories of our contestants..

6: Apart from 600 words you can add  pics ..but not song as it might create a confusion ..but u can mention the YouTube link of the song you want for your proposal

7: If you want to comment on any story ...   There is another link provided for that on which you can compliment the writer by denoting the title and the writer's name or writer's ID link and

8:No bashing and targeting the writer's story on commenting thread '.

9: No reserving places on Proposal thread . directly post ur content .

u have to post your stories in this thread only ..

10: The proposal part should be on Kriyansh, Swaron, Tarey   only.



Any 3 lucky writer will be given the title of  " Most Creative Writer" whose story will have the perfect and the most creative way of proposal... 

Now the last day of submitting your proposal  is .25-10-2012


You have time till 25-10-2012 to submit your works 'After that there will be a pole in which you(readers) have to vote for the best selected post  from all submitted stories '..

and who's will get more votes will win 


I hope you all will have a real fun time while participating in this and will write a really good ,creative proposal  posts '.

The rules must be followed and cannot be ignored ..and for the commenting thread scroll down 

For any further details and help please feel free to ask and do enjoy it '.

 The reward for 1 who win will be a title which will be disclosed later

Edited by enrique - 07 October 2012 at 3:56am

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enrique IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged

Here you go with the commenting thread 

Note:for the last time no reserving place for posting your stories
directly post ur work

Edited by enrique - 03 October 2012 at 3:19am

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-CRJ- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
res for notes

Edited by abhiyakreya - 03 October 2012 at 3:44am
bluelashes IF-Sizzlerz

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ok m first yeee
ok lets start 

a beautiful proposal  infront of hwa mehal (kriyaansh)...
...rey : get up my sleeping beauty ...
kriya : please i wanna sleep only 5 min ...
rey " its already to late batcutter ...
kriya ; to kya hua only 5 min ... *but as soon as she realise  that some one call her batcutter she wake up with alarm nd shout tum i mean app yha kesey ...
rey : tum yha nahi hum yha batcutter look around first ...
kriya look around nd find her self in between water in a boat completely decorated ... nd they r infront of hwa mehal ... its look beautiful ... kriya open her mouth in "o" shape ... nd look at rey 
kriya ; hum yha kesey aye rey main to ghar per thi na or ye sab kya hey hum kar kya rhey hey ...yha tell me rey or mom ...
rey ; areyyy(yaad hey rey or ajs dono kesey areyy boltey hey i love it )...saans to ley lo pehley ..nd first tumhey yha lana bohat easy hey ... kyu ki tum sleeping beauty hoo ... like abhi tumhey utha rha tha ...tum uth nahi rhi thi to easy tha na nd doosri baat tumhari mom unko maney poosh iya hey teesri baat hum yha kyu hey wo b pta chal jayega thora wait kro ...
kriya : huh u call me sleeping beauty ... mujey abhi ghar jana hey ,...abhi k abhi ...
rey : arey listen to me na  ... ghar b chali jaana meri baat to suno ...
kriya : nahi ...
rey ;  ok I LOVE U ...(close his eyes...)
kriya : -----
rey : yes i love u miss kriya ghai ... u know maney pehli baar tumhey dehradune main dekha tha tabhi mujey tum sey pyaar ho gya tha ...phir maney scoha ki hum kabhi nahi milegey ... lekin hum phir mile hamari itni fights hui phir b hum pehley dost , phir achey  dost , phir bohat achey dost . or phir dost sey kuj jada baney but wo dost sey kuj jada  jo boltey hey hamesha wo nahi bta paye tum kabhi b nahi bolti mujey ye pta tha ... phir destiny hamey alag kar diya ... maney to scoh liya tha ki ab hum kabhi nahi milegey but again destiny ney hamey milwa diya ... or is baar main nahi chahta ki destiny hamey again alag krey ... is liye main tumhey poori trha sey apna bnana chahta hoo ... main apni har morning afternoon , evening night means har second tumharey saath bitana chahta hoo ... main tumhey hamesha apney pass rakhna chahta hoo main chahta hoo ki jab main morning main utho to tumhara chehra dekho tumhey peacefully apni bhao main sota hua dekho ... har raat tumhara chehra dekh kar sou ... jindgi ki happiness , sadness sab tumharey saath share kroo ... or is k liye mujey tumhari haa chahiye ... main tumhey duniya ki har hapiness dena chahta hoo ... tum meri angel hoo ... meri baby ho kya tum mera better half banogi kya tum meri MRS kriya reyaansh singhania bnagi ... will u b mine forever ... will u merry me ???...

kriya : rey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
rey open his eyes found kriya in water ...
rey : kriya tum wha ...pani main kesey giri tum 
kriya : rey itna bra shock diya mujey galti sey gir gyi ...
rey jump into water ...
rey : kriya tum na scah main baby ho agar kuj ho jata to ..
kriya : rey hum abhi b water main hey ...
rey ; oh sorry rey about to lift kriya when kriya speak  : wait 
rey : what happen ..
kriya : i love u too nd yes i merry u ...
rey : i love u batcutter u finally mine forever ...chalo boat main wapis ...
kriya : ha ...
rey : wait ...
kriya ; ab kya ...
rey : ring ...
kriya ; oh ...
then rey slip ring in kriya's hand ... nd give a small pack on her cheek 

hope u guys like it Wink
love kriyaansh/arsha
vesey yeh wala scene main yo novel likh rhi hoo arsha k upar us main tha to maney thorey changes kar k yha daal diya 

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 10 October 2012 at 8:42am

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ajaved IF-Sizzlerz

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Taarey: bas chahiya saath tumara

guys its my first time : hope its okay

Tanni: Yeh sab meri
waja se hua hain jabse mein rey ki zindagi mein aye hoon unki life sab kuch
karaab ho raha hain. mujse yeh baat pehle hi samaj le ni chaye thi.

Some knock on taanis window tanni is shocked to see rey

Tanni: Rey app yahah
kaise aye app plz yahah see jao bhai bhi ghar pe hain unho ne agar app ko dekl
liya to app phir se meri waja se problem mein par jaye ge. >

Rey :Tanni mein ajj tumse baat kiya bagar nahi jaonga

Tanni: Rey app please
jao plz waise bhi humare beech kuch baath karne ke liya kuch
bacha nahi hain

Tanni: Tumhe hamesha yeh hi lagta hain ke humare
beech kuch baath karne ke liya kuch nahi
hain lakin mere pass toh bhoth sawal
hian jis ke jawab sirf tum de sakti ho
ajj mere apne sarre sawalo ke
jawab ke kar jaonga

Rey mein ap se pehle bhi kak chiki hoon ke har sawal ka
jawab dena zaroori nahi hota Waise bhi
app mujse kis haq se yeh sawal poch na
chate hain.plz mujse wapis jane de kisi ko bhi mere zarorat yaha nahi hain mein
sirf app sab ko zada proplem mein dalo
gi. App ke zindagi mein meri kaya hasayat hain app muje bhoot phele bhata dia ( both remember scene episode where rey
rejects taani)

Rey :Mujey tumari zaroorat hain taani. Tumhe pata hain jab
kria muje chor kar gaye to muje laga ke mein phir kabi kise ke payarr nahi
karpaonga likin phir tum meri zindagi
mein aye mein nahi janta ke kya hua kab
hua job hi hua muje tumse piya hogaya

Tanni turns around shocked

Mujey nahin pata tanni mein tumko kaise patano bhoot dar tak
to mein apni feelings to le kar bhooth confused that or ab mein manta hoon ke
jab tum shivam ke saath fake
relationship ka natak ki to mein bhooth jealous tab muje tumari ahmiayat ke
ehsaas meri zindagi mein hua . Lakin ajj mein tumse yeh hi kahne ayah on muje
pata hain ki tum thodi pagal ho cute ho kabhi kabhi bhooth zidi ho or thori
wired ho likin tum sirf meri ho

Tanni just stood there frozen didn't know how to react what
to say rey walk upto tanni hold her hand

Tanni mujme app itni himmat nahi hain ke meinn abb
tumko bhi gane do agar tum chali
gaye toh mein maygao ga. (taani puts her hand on reys moth

Main tumse sirf ek promise le na chata ho ke tum muje kabhi
chor kar nahi jaogi zindagi bhar ke liya or sari zindagi ke liya tum mere ho
kar raho gi . (tanni still doesn't know
she can't say anthing because of the shock
after a long hawa hawa scene ) taani manages to put her both hands in
reys hands ( rey realise that tanni just approved her love and said yes to her

Tanni: rey'. Appp ...woohh' mein (rey puts hin fingers on tanni
lips )

Rey :mujey mere jawab milgya hain.

Rey starts to walk to the window n starts to climb down

Tanni: rey app ko lag gaye geee app darwaze se jao bhar koi nahi hain bhai
apne kamre mein hain.

Rey: nahi ab kaam baki hain ab sirf hon wali biwi koi bataya
hain bhi ja ke ho wale sale sale ki bhi
seva karne hain humare baat jo karne hain.










Edited by ajaved - 03 October 2012 at 11:18am

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my OS on pg 7 (Chemistry ne bana di jodi)

Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 17 October 2012 at 11:23pm

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Rey organized a party for his group. He said his party plan to everyone but not Kria. Kria was already upset with his behavior as they had a fight yesterday, but somewhere in her heart she knew that he was sorry about that. The whole gang agreed and they were ready at Rey's home early in the morning for the fun. As Kria didn't knew about his plans she asked everyone.

Kria: "Why are we here so early morning? Aren't we suppose to party in the night? I mean who party's up so early in the morning?" she said irritatingly looking at Rey.

Rey: "I party in the early mornings. Its my unique style you know?" he said smirking at her.

She knew something bad was coming in her way, but was not sure of what.

They all divided themselves and sat in two different cars. Swayam manipulated everyone's seats so that he can make Kria sit next to Rey and Sharon next to him. They all drove away out of the city. Very soon they reached the place. The board of the place read "Sunrise Sky diving center."

Oh God! Kria thought. She was already scared of heights and now this one more thing. Everyone got pretty excited and went in except Rey and Kria.

Kria: "No freaking way. I am not going in." she said backing away.

Rey: "So you are scared huh?" he smirked. And just to prove him that she was not scared though she was she agreed to join them.

Soon they all were in plane. First Swayam and Sharon jumped, next Vicky and Neha, next Amar , Nilesh, Simi and Rini, next Vishaka and Bharat now only Rey and Kria were left.

She was still very scared. After half an hour Rey was on the edge and he held Kria's wrist and they both jumped.

Kria panicked so much that she was not leaving Rey's shirt. She hid her face in Rey's chest. After couple of minutes she departed and was about to open her parachute only when to her horror the key of her parachute got stuck. When Rey saw Kria's scared face he was scared too.

She nodded her head saying him that her parachute key was stuck up. They were nearing the ground just couple of hundreds of feet above the ground. Rey moved in her direction and held her from her waist. Kria got scared.

Rey: "I love You baathcutter. Tumhe kaise kuch hone desakta hu? Tumhari jaan se zyada kuch important nahi hai"

His eyes were moistened up.

Kria saw this. She saw the love in his eyes.

Rey: "Jaldi kaho baathcutter do you love me too or not?

Kria was thinking for a moment. She thought that dragging a fight would only lead to more problems. She nodded shyly but was scared now as they were reaching ground very fast.

She screamed and Rey suddenly pulled the key. The parachute shot opened up with a jerking motion.

And they both went up a couple of heights above.

She looked deeply into his eyes and they both hugged each other.

Rey: "Kaha tha na tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga." he smirked again.

Kria smiled shyly.

Rey: "Tumne kaha nahi." he nudged the topic again.

Kria: "Yeh baathcutter hamesha tumhari rahegi.

Edited by Rozyln - 03 October 2012 at 10:47am

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