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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
I'm a little bit unsure about this SS.. please do let me know if I should continue or not. I had wrote this story for Arnav & Khushi similarly on my other a/c..thought of editing it for Arjun..I still haven't completed it over there so thought if you guys like and encourage me then I would complete it at both places.. Hope you guys like it...and comment toooBig smile
Thanks to Fiza for suggesting the Title name...Hug
 

**Introduction**

Riya is getting married to Arnav (a childhood friend who she always knew and liked a lot). she's a really big fan of Devi Maiya (Goddess)

Anjali - married to Rathore & is Riya's bestfriend & Arjun's sister

Sameer Rathore - Arjun's Bestfriend & brother-in-law and the Chief of ETF

Payal - Riya's sister

ASR (Arjun Suryakant Raute)- the meanest side of him

Arjun - the softest and most pleasing side of ASR

Riya was the P.A (personal Assistant) of ASR and also worked for the ETF team as a Research specialist.

 

**PART ONE**

Arjun looking out of the window to his poolside talking to himself loudly and said,"It is her wedding tomorrow, I hope she is enjoying all her the moments of her bachelorhood."

*Rathore entered and said who are you talking about?

Arjun: when did you enter?

Rathore: Tell me first who are you talking about?

Arjun: Ohh voh hai na pagal ladki Riya my P.A!! Forget her I forgot to tell you that kal mai subhe ke flight se New Zealand ja raha hu!!

Rathore: aarey par tum Riya ki shaadi nahi attend karoge? You have been invited yaar everyone's invited. Aarey she was your "P.A" na yaar you should go I think.!

ASR: I don't attend middle class families ki so called "shaadi".

*Meanwhile*

Riya : Hume kuch theek nahi lag raha hai jiji she spoke as she broke the silence of the room to her sister(Payal).

*Anjali entered saying haan hume pta hai aap hume miss kar rahi ho. Both hugged each other in joy & sadness of separation.

Payal: Ohhooo abh tum dono rone lagoge toh humara kya hoga sa

Riya saw OP standing behind with loads of gifts, so she asked ye kya hai?? Pura shehar(city) utha laye ho kya?? Laughing at Anji.

(Anjali had brought couple of gifts for Riya from which one was indirectly sent by Arjun, one deliberately by his "ASR side" and others from my family members.)

Anji: aarey nahi baba, ye toh bas choti is bheet hai tumhare liye. *whispering to Riya & Payal* isme jyada tar gift Chote ne hi bheje hai inke like...Tongue Payal and Anji laughed while Riya had a serious face of OMG.. What the hell???

Riya: suddenly changing the topic, kal tum aogi na?? I'm really scared yaar mujhe ye bahot galat aur bahot jaldi lag raha hai ye shaadi vaadi.

Anji: Ohooo bina baat ke pareshaan mat ho tum, yaar haad hai. Then Anji said shayad tumhe kuch waqt akele rehna chahiye, mai aur payal humare (jija ji) se milke ate hai if you don't mind ;)

Laughing at Riya and making her grin forcefully.

As soon as they left the room Riya locked herself from inside and was looking at the gifts that Anji brought.

****

1st she opened the gift that said ASR.

The first taught that came to her mind is "What The" and stood up as if ASR had challegend her for racing, then she sighed loudly saying ufff...

There was a Card saying Happy Married Life from ETF signed by some idiot Manager she said. Khud kabhi kuch kaam nhi kar sakta hai, at least mere liye bhi nahi huh Laad Sahab hai na voh! Then she saw a letter attached to it, she opened it. It read like this:

To Ms.Riya, (To be Mrs. Riya)

RE: Happy Married Life(HML) in Advance.

Riya you have been a great employee, we would miss you but we all from ETF Team wish you a HML in Advance from all the employees. (Template letter from office she thought)

Handwritten:

Thank God ohh no not God but your DM, dhanyawaad karte hai hum ki apne mere company ke employees ko pagal hone se baacha liya aur aise khud garz ladki ki shaadi karva rahe ho aap. I'm glad that you would be leaving us Riya Mukherjee. Hope not to see your face ever again.

Mr. Arjun Suryakant Raute( ASR)

 

A tear rolled out of her eyes in happiness that indirectly he is giving her so much of importanceby writing out his sign of disbelief of me leaving!!

****

Next she opened the gift that had Arjun in big letters on it.

Riya opened the gift and it had a DM Idol in the box and a letter placed exactly on DM's foot. Riya freaked out and said aur ek letter, raising her eyebrows and her eyes looked totally shocked.

She ran towards the mirror to see the flow of her eyes it was like khud ganga maiyya was rolling down her eyes, her heart beat was fast as ever, yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai DM. Kya voh rakshas aa rha hai?? Aise kyu lag raha hai ki koi humare bahot hi kareeb hai she said. While holding the letter from Arjun, that she didn't noticed was in her hands. She talked to herself thinking ye khadoos kya chahta hai mujhse???

Suddenly something struck and she said, "Do do letters bhej ne ka kya matlab hai. Riya kept quite just staring at Devi Maiyaa's murthy thinking what's happening to her, she mumbled DM it did looked personal. Before she opened she stupidly sniffed the cover of the letter "What The" she said Arjun ji ka khusbooo, she was feeling nervous and thought as if it was a love letter she laughed at herself.

But her legs felt wiggling and funny like so she sat on the bed, then she put on a serious face and opened the letter and was shocked while she said yaha toh kuch nahi bahot kuch Choot raha hai she mummed.

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Forgive my mistakes... please let me know if I should continue or not?

Edited by funkylicious - 16 October 2012 at 10:55pm

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*INDEX*

 
Part 1 - Pg 1
 
Promo 1 - Pg 2


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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
wow

its totally  IPKND type

i like it

thanks for the pm... waiting for the next part 

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow

its totally  IPKND type

i like it

thanks for the pm... waiting for the next part 
 
Ya it was for Arnav and Khushi... I just played around with the Character's here!! heheTongue
 
Thanks for the comment..Smile I thought it has turned out as I expected...glad someone commentedBig smile

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by funkylicious

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow

its totally  IPKND type

i like it

thanks for the pm... waiting for the next part 
 
Ya it was for Arnav and Khushi... I just played around with the Character's here!! heheTongue
 
Thanks for the comment..Smile I thought it has turned out as I expected...glad someone commentedBig smile

this is so interesting u have update next part ASAP

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
great start,please update soonSmile

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Hey I liked it.. Its got the original flavor of IPK with an added tadka of Ariya.. Please write more soon.. 

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Nyc 1
 
 
Plz continue.
 
 
Pm me.

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