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FLAMES OF DESIRE #10
 
 
A gentle brush of his fingers,
Sending shivers down my spine.
In the love I see in his eyes,
Is a love that equals mine.

He greets me with a smile,
And leaves me with a kiss.
If he were to ever leave me,
I couldn't imagine what I'd miss.

Maybe it's his touch,
Or the way he makes me feel.
But whatever it is,
I'm head over heels.
 
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~EmbarrassedA SNEAK PEEK-ABOUT WHATS STORE IN FUTUREEmbarrassed~
 

What is this, if not passion
The feeling of something unusual
Waiting to be caressed, wanting to explode,
What if I get that heavenly touch
For which my body has been aching
Will I remain what I am
Or will the entwining of the bodies
Lead me to something ethereal
I am confused, do not know how to react
But what I know is that I yearn for that touch
A soothing touch of caress
And a wild sensation of fulfillment.

                                          ~GEET HANDA~
 
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"We lie in each other's arms eyes shut and fingers open and all the colors of the world pass through our bodies like strings of fire."
 
(thank u so much cute-aly for this beautiful banner) 
 
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins nowEmbarrassed)
 
 
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~MY OTHER WORK~
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
 
 
 
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First just wana say sorry...for walking away like this...but now i am back with this new thread for ur beloved ff FLAMES OF DESIRE...my god we reached 10 thread...I am so happy guys...thank u so much for ur love n support for all my work...without u i am nothing...n i really mean itBig smile...
 
pls shower ur comments n likes as u do always...and belive me i love reading them...will update SR n FOL tommorow...followed by SBL...
 
pls add me if u want pm's...and stay tuned as i said flames of desire begins nowEmbarrassed...
 
aur ha dont miss the sneak peak...woh thik se read karo toh future pata chalegaWink
 
love u lots,
varshaSmile
 
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THANK U SO MUCH GUYS FOR ALL THE LOVE N SUPPORT...
 

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FLAMES OF DESIRE

 
~Big smilethank u so much cute-aly for this amazing bannerBig smile~
 
 
(This update is specially dedicated to MY ROCKSTAR GURMEET N FOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO VOTED FOR HIM TO WINBig smileClap)
 
 
NOTE
 
Guys i am just taking u litle time...pls don't skip this note...sweeties i wanted to know this from all of you...as u know there is a burning topic discussed in our geet forum this days...abt intimacy, rape n dark love stories...As u know my i have not showed any rape or dark love story till now...but my ff's do have intimacy in it...So i just wanted to know from my readers, that are you ok wid my style of writing or you feel akward wen u read this stuff...PLS LET ME KNOW AS ITS IMPORTANT FOR ME...TO KNOW UR VIEW...
 
DO I NEED TO LOW DOWN THE INTENSITY OF INTIMACY IN MY UPDATES?
 
WILL YOU READ MY FUTURE STORIES, IF IT HAS ANY DARK CHARACTER OR LOVE STORY????
 
WILL YOU SUPPPORT ME WID MY STORY IF I SHOW ANY RAPE SCENE IN IT?????
 
N LASTLY DO U PEOPLE BELIVE IN ME N MY WRITING??
 
 
THIS ARE MY FOUR QUESTION FOR YOU...PLS LET ME KNOW...SO THAT I CAN WORK ON MY FUTURE PROJECTS MORE FREELY...JUST BECOZ OF THIS ISSUE I HAVE KEPT MY ONE OS LOCKED IN MY WORD FILE...
 
 
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~EmbarrassedA SNEAK PEEK-ABOUT WHATS STORE IN FUTUREEmbarrassed~
 

What is this, if not passion
The feeling of something unusual
Waiting to be caressed, wanting to explode,
What if I get that heavenly touch
For which my body has been aching
Will I remain what I am
Or will the entwining of the bodies
Lead me to something ethereal
I am confused, do not know how to react
But what I know is that I yearn for that touch
A soothing touch of caress
And a wild sensation of fulfillment.

                                          ~GEET HANDA~
 
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PART-39
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins nowEmbarrassed)
 
 
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
   
 
After some time dadi just left to her room, securely tucking her inside the spread...and locked the door bolting it together...
It was quite midnight, when geet got up, crying, screaming for maan...She looked all around, finding herself in his room...But where is he...did he left her all alone...Was the thought that pierced her heart...
"maan" she cried, covering her face with her palm...Then giving up just laid down, clutching the spread close to her chest...She was crying her heart out, craving for someone to soothe her...then just closed her eyes, consuming her own hiccups...But her pain was short lived as she heard him speak "jaan"...and the next moment felt his arms snacking her waist tucking her closer to him...
 

 
"I was right here jaan" he whispered on her shoulder, intervening their fingers together...He pulled her more closer almost spooning her with his body...It was more of a intimate position, but with geniune needs...Maan knew she will wake up and then would get scared not finding him around...so he just waited for dadi to leave and then climbed from the adjacent balcony and entered his room...
Geet pulled their intervened hands upwards towards her chest...then pressed it below her chin, into her neck...
"mai dar gayi thi" she cried with her shivering voice...
"ummm but i was right here na" he nuzzled his face on her cheek...feeling the velvety smoothness of her chubby cheek...
"aap jhooth mat bolo...mujhe pata hai aap nahi the" she cribbed with her watery hazels...
"woh I was in washroom" he lied making a sorry face...then briskily turned her around making her lie on her back...Geet looked at him still making a sad baby face...then closed her eyes, snorting her disapproval..."mujhe sona hai"
"acha" he said teasingly, then leaned over her...almost hovering over her body...
"ummm" she twisted her lips still keeping her eyes closed...then turned her face to the other side..."aap bohat bure ho...mujhe chod ke chale gaye the" she stubbornly said but then realised him moving away...
 

 
Chillness ran through her spine, as he lifted himself off her body...and laid on the other side...He was already fighting with his own emotions and still was trying to keep his calm around her...But then her unintentionally accusing him, just pricked his heart...taunting him for the mistake he did by letting her go to hoshiyapur...
Geet panicked as she opened her eyes and found him laying on the other side...away from her...Fresh tears formed in her swollen red eyes...and the next moment she crawled back into his arms...possessively hugging him around his torso...
"I am your wife na...then why you sleeping away" a painfull moan escaped her lips...as she gave away her insecurities..."aap chaho toh gussa karlo par mujhase dur mat jao" she whimpered with her hiccups...
 
Maan kept looking at her face, stunned with her impeccable love for him...
"you will always stay with me na" he cried with the pain building in his heart...His dadi didn't believed him, then how can he expect her family to let her live with him...
"aur kaha jaungi...we are married na" her innocent words filled his heart with overwhelming pleasure...He hugged her more tightly, then slowly placed her on bed...and came on top of her, softly pressing her down...
 

 
Geet blinked her eyes, analysing his move...then smiled uncomfortably feeling his complete weight on her...He intimately leaned his head in the curve on her neck...intervening there hands together...He paissonately kissed the creamy flesh of her shoulder...pinning her hands above her head...
"maan" geet moaned pressing her face on his...getting tickled with the erotic sensation...then felt him nipping her skin, then followed by thorough sucking to soothe the pain with his sweetness...
 
Pleasure was running down their bodies as maan knowingly followed the path towards her lips...and finally captured them with his own...He looked in her eyes despaerately awaiting her approval...but then simply pecked her lips moving off her body...He closed his eyes, keeping his calm...he could guess, she was not ready and he have to low down his passion...which was increasing exponentially with time...
Geet pouted looking at him again moving away...then twisted her lips, hitting his chest...
"ouchhh geet lagta hai" maan screamed in low tone, then raised his eyebrows looking at her cute threatening anger...He was about to laugh but then got stunned...as she swiftly climbed on his body...straddling his waist...Maan was already loosing his patience with her being around...and now her this move made him graon in sheer frustration...
"geet utho waha se" he moaned feeling her soft smoothy legs caressing the side of his waist...
"nahi...aap har baar dur jaate ho...mai nahi uthungi" she was admant this time and irritated with his changing mood..."pehale waise karte ho fir dur jaate ho" and she slept on his chest, putting her arms around his neck...Her softness was pressing on his hard form...making him shiver with the wild thoughts running in his mind...
 

 
"mai dadi ko bolungi...you don't treat me as your wife" maan's eyes widened in shock, hearing her cribbing...what is she saying..."yeh jarur mujhe marwayegi"
"jaan please its our private thing na...so don't tell this to anyone" he pleaded making a baby face...still hugging her in his arms...
"ummm ok I won't...but you have to treat me as your wife" she looked in his eys, cupping his cheeks...then blinked her hazels, while innocently staring at his lips...
"umm then how am i suppose to treat you woh bhi bata do" maan tried diverting her mind from his lips...knowing its just her innocent act...
"woh suhagraat..." her words died as she deeply looked into his eyes...then shied, moving away...
 
Maan blushed looking away...smiling at her thoughts...He knew she didn't meant the physical thing but her thoughts where enough to make him go wild...He could feel her slowly lifting her self above him...then looked at her, and found her sleeping, facing her back to him...
 

 
Her smoothy white skin shined with the pricking goosebumps...He could guess the extent of her arousal...He sensuously moved his finger on her visible bare back...then teasingly tugged his index finger on the knot of her dori...which was holding her choli on place...
"maan" she moaned in pleasure, and hugged herself closely...The feel of his fingers caressing her back made her tremble in anticipation...Maan masterfully swept his fingers all around her hot burning skin...stimulating her with his expertise...Geet unintentionally leaned herself back, craving for more...Maan smiled at her cute gesture and then giving up on his teasing...just hugged her from back...carnally embracing her closer...
"now sleep...aaj ke liye itna suhagraat kafi hai" maan sensuously whispered, bitting her cheek...Geet tucked her flat stomach in, as his hands tantalizingly squeezed her waist...making her blush cutely with her red cheeks...
 

 
Geet closed her eyes more in her shyness...then hugged his arms and slept feeling his contented smile on her cheek...
It was quite early morning, when maan stirred in his sleep...realising some pain in his arms...
"ahhh" a moan escaped from his lips, as he forcefully opened his drowsy eyes...Then blinked his lashes adujsting himself to his surrounding...He looked around and found the source of his pain...His mishty was cutely sleeping on his arm, keeping it below her head...A smile formed on his lips, looking at her petite form which was cuddled right besides his length...His morning was never this beautiful as it is now...Intentionally he leaned forward, and pulled her to himself...making her sleep on his chest...His hands caressed her messy hair, as she comfortably slept on his taut chest...He could not stop himself from admiring her beauty, as she looked no less then a angel even in that sleeping form...Slowly he pulled her up, levelling her with his face...then pulled a spread over them, cocooning her in his warm embrace...He was not able to stop himself from feeling her, caressing her, assuring himself of her presence right in his arms...
 

 
Maan was finding it difficult to divert his mind from geet...The fear on her face, the trauma she went through was still very much alive in his mind...He knew it would be very much difficult for him to tell this truth to everyone...He was too involved in his own reveries...thinking how will he break the news of their sudden marraige to all the elders...will they understand under what circumtances he did this...or will they blame him for claiming her this way...
"maan" geet moaned in her sleep...making him jerk in surprise...He was stunned, but then slowly kept her on the bed and kept looking at her if she was awake...
"geet" he kept caressing her arm...waking her up...then realised she is still asleep..."jaan" he called out stubbornly, as he wanted to spend this litle time with his wify...knowing his own family will keep him away from her, as soon as they realise her presence in there house...He laughed imagining how aniee and vicky will pounce on her, with all there cribbing...
"wify please wake up yaar...later on you won't even get time for me" he cribbed realising how well she gels up with everyone in his house...
"ummm" she lazily moaned with her closed eyes, and pulled him over her by putting her arms around his neck...
"jaan agar tum aise karogi...then how am i suppose to stop myself" he huskily whispered on her face, keeping his eyes on her juicy lips...
"jaan utho na" he brushed his lips on her...while caressing his nose with hers..."kitna soti ho tum" he cribbed, dryly biting the flesh oh her lower lip...Then kept looking at her, thinking of new ways to wake this lazy bones...
 

 
A mischievous smile formed on his lips...as he leaned besides her, closely moving his lips to her ear...But then his breath caught in his throat, as he found himself drowning in the milky white skin of her neck...Leaving aside his temptation, he sensuously whispered in her ear...
"wake up sweetheart" but then could not stop himself from biting her earlobe...
"maan jao na" she moaned facing the other side...She was in her half sleep and could feel him breathing on her skin...Maan snacked his hands around her waist, and started drawing pattern...tenderly arousing her in her sleep..."mujhe sone do" she scremed loudly pushing his hands away...surprising him with her rudeness...
Anger swept through his senses, as he felt this insulting...He was simply trying to tease her...and here she is showing her attitude...
"kya kaha tumne" he angrily pinned her under him...giving his warning glare to her...While geet got scared so closed her eyes...biting her own lips in torment...
"speak up...will you" he threatened her with his big anger filled eyes...
"woh...mujhe sona tha" she started stammering...with tears forming in her eyes...
 

 
Maan just closed his eyes for again loosing his sanity...I always end up hurting her, he thought...He moved off her body and stood besides there bed..."ok you sleep...dadi will come to wake you up" and he started walking back towards the door...
"aap kaha ja rahe ho" she panicked looking at him walking away...then ran behind him, hugging him from..."I am sorry...mujhe nahi sona...aap please mat jao" she almost cried clutching him tightly...then went infront of him, blocking his path..."I am your wife you can't leave me" she threatened him with her cute anger...But then maan was out of his mind...mentally dealing with numerous things all alone...
"wife...do you even know what it means" maan mocked...
"ha pata hai...now we will stay together, as we are married...I will prepare food for you then will wait for you to come back from office...Then in bedroom i will remove your cloths...maan's eyes grew bigger with her every word...as he stopped her inbetween in panic..."you will remove my cloths?????"
"ha baba cupboards se...aapko change bhi karna hoga na office se aane ke baad...then we will sleep together, you will kiss me...and we will also have kids...just like naintara bhabi and dev bhai"
"what" maan was stunned with her defination of wife...was she mad thinking about there life like a typical daily soap...
 

 
"geet i think you need sleep...just go and sleep there" he sternly ordered her...then tried moving her off his path...
"nahi mujhe aapke saath hi sona hai...aap bhi chalo" she was admant...
"I said go and sleep" he was final with his decision...
"nahi matlab nahi" she retorted again...
"geet" he literal shouted on her getting irked with her childlike act...
"aap hamesha aise karte ho...pehale pyar aur phir gussa...jao i don't want to talk to you...aap bure ho...dusht danav" geet ran towards there bed...dropping herself on it...crying bitterly, hiding her face away from him...
Maan closed his eyes in grief, for giving her pain...then dragged himself close to their bed...and sat their besides her...
"I am sorry jaan" he forcefully pulled her arm, making her look at him...Then harshly grabbed her shoulder, keeping her intact in his arms..."yeh kya natak laga rakha tumne"
 

 
Geet just throws herself in his arms...hugging his neck...Maan tries to pray off her hold, but then finds it difficult with her tightening fist...
She pulls him above her, and slowly lays on bed...with him on her...Maan closes his eyes, smiply giving in her demands...and hugs her back...plastering her completely with his weight...
"now sleep" he huskily whispers, dropping his face in the crook of her neck...finally calming her soul...
Both of them slept for a while in each others arms...for some more time, without realising the morning sun was brimming over their head...
 

 
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Dadi was setting the dinning table when realised that handa's will be here any time soon...She called them early in the morning...inviting them for breakfast...As she wanted all this matter to get clear as soon as possible...Dadi was in her own thoughts when naintara and dev came into the hall greeting her...
"good morning dadi" they said in union...almost matching their tone...
"good morning beta" dadi blessed dev and kissed naintara's forehead...
Soon aniee and vicky followed, chirpily greeting everyone...taking their respective seats...
"dadi maan bhai aur geet aa gaye" aniee asked playing with a spoon infront...
"ha woh kal raat ko hi aaye hai" dadi hestitated a litle, as the images of yesterday nights chaos came flashing...She was still confused thinking why maan behaved that way...
"dadi I will go and wake her up then" aniee moved off her seats and started walking upstairs...
"nahi bete you let it be...mai usse uthati hu" dadi stopped her...realising geet could blurt anything infront of her...
"par dadi mujhe bhi aana hai" aniee was admant...as she wanted to see geet...and this would be after so many days...
"dadi aap rehne do mai hi jata hu princess ko uthane" vicky intervened...
"vicky chup chap yaha breakfast karo...aniee you come with me" dadi finally agreed to take aniee with her...as she thought she can handle geet from blurting out anything...
 

 
Both aniee and dadi walked towards maan's room...
"dadi hum maan bhai ke room mai kyu ja rahe hai...hume toh geet ko uthana hai na" aniee was confused...
"beta geet is sleeping in maan's room" dadi clarified...
"ohhh aur maan bhai????" was the next sudden question that came to her mind...
"In guest room" dadi smiled shaking her head looking at her curiosity...
"ohhh ok" aniee smiled and both of them entered maan's room...getting stunned with the scene infront of them...
Aniee blinked her lashes, rubbing her eyes...while dadi's eyes almost popped out looking at them like this...
Maan was possessively hugging geet close to his body...while geet's face was placed in the crook of his neck...It looked lot more intimate for any outsider...
 
 
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Precap :- Maan claiming geet infront of everyoneEmbarrassed and ofcoures facing the familyShocked
 
 
Hello sweeties...finally our rockstar won jdj...and just giving you treat from myside with full on maanet scene wala update...
I hope u will like it...will include all the precap in my next one for sure...for now just wanted them to spend some time together...
 
I hope u people will understand geet here...i tried keeping her innocence intact bt then it wud be difficult for maan to bear her antics every time...Still will try to show how they adjust with each other...
 
Next update wud be litle difficult, as maan's aggression will be shown in it...while he convince everyone...n ofcoures a litle twist is involved too...
 
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firstly ..


4 new thread ..

NOW BHANGRA TIME ..
MAAN JEET GAYE ..


MSK ...KO HARANA MUSHKIL HI NAHI NAMUMKIN HAI ..
chahe kitni hi gymnastic queen kyun na aajaye ..


wooo di THREAD 10 ...
just see how much we love u ..
chalo abhi geet wali smile doo ..
see we gave u ur 10th house ..whr u made place 4 us as well ...
after all FOD thread FOD member ke bina kaisi lage gi ...LOL


now about ur questions ..

just wanna say we started reading ur work coz we liked n loved it the way u write it all ..the way u narrate every scene ..Star

about DARK STORY ..
if ill like the consept i will defo read it as for me every relation n specially love has a dark side of its own kind its reality ..n people who dont like dark stories should straight away avoid reading them instead of creating un-required fuzz over it ..Ouch
just 4 grabbing some attention ..


Intimacy ..
as many writer i have read ..every writer has always kept a 18+ warning in every update like this so its on readers again if they wanna read it or not ,...writers r not forcing u to read it ..
how come u say that showing it is any kind of abuse for teenagers ..as we all put 18+ warning n even then if people read them its totally thr wish writer cant help it AT ALL ..

n as far as i have observed i never found it unnecessary any whr in ur stories di ...situation or stories whr always like that ...Smile

Rapist character ..
well no one has a second thought that its a crime which no one can forgive EVER ..
but for god sake its a fan FICTION ..not reality here we potray wht we want not at all based on reality ..
so we should really not take it to that level ...read it as a story ONLY

ABOUT UR WRITING STYLE ..
i beg of u plzzz yrr dont chage a single inch ..COZ I LOVE IT THE WAY IT IS ..
people having problem should leave ...y the hell should we suffer ..

SEE GEET BHI TENSION MIEN AAGAYI ..


n now buhat bool liya mene ..Shocked
mien thak gaye 2 din se yehi ssab sun sun kar ..Ouch
rehan karo bachon par ..LOL

MAAN NE BHI SAR PAKAR LIYA ABB TOU ...



RESPONSE FOR UPDATE ON PAGE 15 ..Big smile

THE DARK ROSE ..





 


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