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Fleur_de_Lis IF-Dazzler

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--peehu-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Joined: 13 February 2010
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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
hey! i am yet to catch up with it..will try to do it asap...
thanks for sharing!!

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Joined: 11 April 2012
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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Dancingwhole index :) 
thxss Smile

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misscrazyfan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 May 2012
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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Hey thanz for the pm dear

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Fleur_de_Lis IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 July 2012
Posts: 3299

Posted: 02 October 2012 at 1:23am | IP Logged
best comment on CHAPTER ONE

Wow...Lovely concept...
Awesome update...Totally loved it Hug
Well i can just say,Its really Complicated... Tongue LOL
Cant wait to know what will happen next...
Continue soon n do PM me when u continue...
(I must thank ur friend Appy_indy for this link) Embarrassed

and the prize goes to  chandana.s


best comment on CHAPTER FIVE
RES !!!
Yah !!! 1st one to comment Dancing
PartyIt was awesome
And damn interesting
Still quite confusing
Wanna read more
Please update soon 
And thanks for the PM
I updated the next part

and the prize goes to  aminta13

SORRY there was no best comment on CHAPTER SIX

best comments on CHAPTER SEVEN

Yes yes... Everything was clear ... I think Aman was behind that accident coz. He knew about Arnav n shyam's plan .. May be shyam too coz armaan rejected shyam's proposal n he even knew that Arnav was going to do something to get khushi back.. Just both aman n shyam took advantage of the situation

awesome update loved it  I think aman killed armaan. because he  hates ASR and he hates Khushi and shyman is helping him  and they really want both companies in thier name loved the update thanks for the pm


i think the person who was behind khushi remember when... armaan and shyam were talking and khushi was listening there was an other person who was watching all this i think it was him/her 

maby there is an other charecter who knows 
tell me if i am right i hope so starplusfanno1

and  the 1ST prize goes to...


2ND prize goes to...


3RD prize goes to...


best comments onCHAPTER EIGHT

wow! nyc update...

thxx fr the pm...

so nw khushi will go india...

arnav didn't react at all...

khushi n arnav both hurt ...

anjali tried to clam her but she again sink on her past...

i hope soon the MU erase...

waiting fr next part...


awesome update loved it snake is the one who is doing everything and everyone is paying for it loved the update thanks for the pm


Update was too good
Anjali is trying to pursuade khushi to come back to India. She wants khushi to think of all the happy time which she has spent with her famili, but the happy memories are followed by sad ones.
waiting for the next part..continue soon

and the 1ST PRIZE goes to... Akorshi

2ND PRIZE goes to...dumas

3RD PRIZE goes to... dazzling_glory and -Sadi- jointly

best comments on CHAPTER NINE

Its good that khushi has begun to doubt her decision of stayin away from arnav, and although she does not want to accept it, but she still loves him very much. Hope that she will uncover the truth which has shattered her life
please continue soon

Fantastic update... Flashback was so lovely n romantic

So she still love him... I knew it but i didnt get about lawanya 
may be there was big reason behind it

Hope her all dought will be clear soon even ours tooo

Its more n more interesting day by day

I was expecting yes from her side but she denied to return back india
So sad na... May be she will after clearing all her confusion 

U choosed very beautiful song... I love it

and yes.. I am here.. sorry again.. 

Actually now the story is slowly making sense.. you should have told me... 
I love loved chapter 7.. very very interesting.. romance anger, jealousy, passion.. and suspense.. all in all a great update! thanks!
chapater 8 ws sad and short Cry
poor Khushi.. and Arnav.. I hope everything will be sorted out!
hey.. please.. do update chapter 9 soon..
i dont watch any shows so dont know any actors in particular.. 

great story.. and good job once again!!1

and the 1ST PRIZE goes to...dazzling_glory

2ND PRIZE goes to...pantrossy

3RD PRIZE goes to...boreddamsel

best comments on CHAPTER TEN

awesome update loved it glad she is finding out the truth and how she and asr was set up by the people she trusted awesome update thanks for the pm hope she talks to asr soon and they both figure out who the rest of the snakes are 
dumas many shocks...truths in just one update.
Hope that now khushi will use her brians and come back to arnav.
Its good that Lavanya told khushi the truth
please continue soon
dazzling glory

I'm glad that Khushi has finally got to know the truth... She should go & talk to Arnav asap to avoid any further damage to their relationship. Acc. to me Mrs. Sen can be a murderer.
Waiting for next chapter nw

Then who s d actual killer?? Sanyukta?? Aakash??
Suprb update... So Khushi undrstnd her mistake...
Waitng 4 d nxt part.. Cntinue soon

and the1ST PRIZEgoes to...dumas
 2ND PRIZE goes to...dazzling_glory
3RD PRIZE goes to...aquagal and sruthickjointly

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 02 October 2012 at 7:26am

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Fleur_de_Lis IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged
DancingYIPEEDancing...i am a StarSENIOR MEMBERStar  now...

best comments on CHAPTER ELEVEN and it's PRECAP

So Armaan played dirty game to seperate khushi n Arnav n stupid khushi believed easily n left Arnav without knowing truth...even Aman was also involved n now he was regreting for his mistake ...?but its too late i think... 

Waiting for update

Thanks for khushi's pov

Things r going more complicated then before in khushi's life
Yes.. Coz of her immaturity she lost love of her life n now when she got to know about truth she was thinking to make it right but its not easier as she thought

She left Arnav even without talking about the news matter n those photos
She only belived armaan 
She even didnt tried to know the truth
At least she should have talked with arnav but nooo... She didnt 
Did she ever love Arnav...? That was big question
If she did ever then she never listen to others then Arnav
That all had to happen n just coz of her childish act made her suffer even she lost her baby n She accussed arnav as killer

Business.. Rival n revange all these made complication but at least love shouldnt involve in any of them but she was blindfolded by her so called fren

Well.. She realised her mistake doesnt mean she can get same place in arnav life n family again 
But at least she will ask for forgiveness so that she can live without any burden

I m upset off khushi's childish behaviour on past but i dont want khushi to suffer either

I have no idea what r u planning next but i m sure Arnav will forgive her ... It may take some time to forget past but true love never can be apart for long

Goodluck khushi..! U messed up everyone life n now u have too make it up on ur own
I m not expecting that Arnav will accept her on the first place but at least try to understand how she has gone through... Well...who canbe if he doesnt... He was the one who truly love her afterall

Finally she is going back to india but what the hell ...that Aman also going on same time..?
Did he know why khushi returning back..? Or he was planning something againt khushi or may be Arnav

Hope these complication will be solve soon n their life will be full of happiness

I don't think Khushi should enter in any relationship right now, let alone go back to Arnav. For one, she is extremely immature. Someone says your husband had an affair and sent you divorce paper and she leaves. Then someone says your ex loves you and she is packing her bags to go back to him. 

I understand losing your baby is painful and those photos further confused her, so she could leave Arnav and live by herself until she figured everything out. But she went to Armaan from Arnav and now that Armaan is dead, she wants to go back to Arnav. This is not how it works. 

She needs to grow up first and live by herself to see if she indeed understand what love is. Because I don't think Arnav will be able to take another blow like the one she dealt in the past because she could not make up her mind.

finally...Silly khushi...know the whole truth...
hw her decorated life messed by arman n aman n akash...
she was in shock thts y took a hasty decision...
nw regretting like hell...
she thinks she can make fine everything...
but its too tough to implement...
hope arnav supports her...
waiting fr next part... 

Aah.. loved it.. I can't beleive i missed three updates already.
Let's see.. I love how in the show, it's Arnav who had the misunderstanding.. and here its Khushi..

I guess when you lose your baby.. you tend to be emotional, but I cant believe she actaully beleived Armaan, when she knew he hated Arnav.. and wanted her.. 

Anyways, at least now she has realized her mistake.
I hope she will never doubt Arnav again.. 

Or now she has to show Arnav that she trusts him.. and won't again believe anyone else who says anything bad about him.
Making someone believe that you trust them is extremely hard!

Arnav loves her, so I am sure he will gladly accept her back.. but the question is will Khushi be able to trust him and not walk out when she sees pics of him with naked women??

Great part
I agree with akash..."better late then never" . The important thing is that khushi has realised her mistake and is willing to correct it. to try and make everything alright. She was at fault for believing what Armaan and Aman showed her without varifying the facts. He allowed her self to be mislead. And her misunderstandings have ruined and hurt many lives. But everyone deserves a second chance and so does khushi.
khushi is glad to hear that arnav has and will always love her. But is worried whether he will allow her back in his life. Waiting to see what happens when khushi comes to India and meets arnav.
Please continue soon

WOO W .. amazing darling ..too good ... 

they FB was amazing ..cant believed wut Armaan had done .. he had planed every and each point to get her back ,, im sure that car accident was for Arnav not khushi .. 

Good  that she is gone back to her family ... but where is Arnav ,,,has he back or he didnt want to go back  with them ,.. All i have to say AMAZING waiting for next cptr .. and that was LONG update thank you darling

the SUPERCHAMP post was by...pantrossy

the SUPERSTAR post was by...tia.o

the You Totally ROCK post was by... dazzling_glory

and now...

the prize winners...

and  the 1ST prize goes to...boreddamsel

2ND prize goes to...Akorshi

3RD prize goes to...Ruki.F

chapter twelve is upcoming...

one chapter and it's precap is taken as a whole...

watch this space...

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 02 October 2012 at 7:31am

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Ruki.F IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 May 2012
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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 1:46am | IP Logged
thanx for pm darling waiting for more updates 

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 21 April 2006
Posts: 29521

Posted: 02 October 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged
congrats on the index loved it thanks for the pm expecting you to fill it up

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