best comment on CHAPTER ONE
Wow...Lovely concept... Awesome update...Totally loved it Well i can just say,Its really Complicated...
Cant wait to know what will happen next...
Continue soon n do PM me when u continue...
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best comment on CHAPTER FIVE
Yah !!! 1st one to comment It was awesome
And damn interesting
Still quite confusing
Wanna read more
Please update soon
And thanks for the PM
I updated the next part
and the prize goes to aminta13
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best comments on CHAPTER SEVEN
Yes yes... Everything was clear ... I think Aman was behind that accident coz. He knew about Arnav n shyam's plan .. May be shyam too coz armaan rejected shyam's proposal n he even knew that Arnav was going to do something to get khushi back.. Just both aman n shyam took advantage of the situation
awesome update loved it I think aman killed armaan. because he hates ASR and he hates Khushi and shyman is helping him and they really want both companies in thier name loved the update thanks for the pm
i think the person who was behind khushi remember when... armaan and shyam were talking and khushi was listening there was an other person who was watching all this i think it was him/her
maby there is an other charecter who knows
tell me if i am right i hope so starplusfanno1
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best comments onCHAPTER EIGHT
wow! nyc update...
thxx fr the pm...
so nw khushi will go india...
arnav didn't react at all...
khushi n arnav both hurt ...
anjali tried to clam her but she again sink on her past...
i hope soon the MU erase...
waiting fr next part...
awesome update loved it snake is the one who is doing everything and everyone is paying for it loved the update thanks for the pm
Update was too good
Anjali is trying to pursuade khushi to come back to India. She wants khushi to think of all the happy time which she has spent with her famili, but the happy memories are followed by sad ones.
waiting for the next part..continue soon
and the 1ST PRIZE goes to... Akorshi
2ND PRIZE goes to...dumas
3RD PRIZE goes to... dazzling_glory and -Sadi- jointly
best comments on CHAPTER NINE
Its good that khushi has begun to doubt her decision of stayin away from arnav, and although she does not want to accept it, but she still loves him very much. Hope that she will uncover the truth which has shattered her life
please continue soon
Fantastic update... Flashback was so lovely n romantic
So she still love him... I knew it but i didnt get about lawanya
may be there was big reason behind it
Hope her all dought will be clear soon even ours tooo
Its more n more interesting day by day
I was expecting yes from her side but she denied to return back india
So sad na... May be she will after clearing all her confusion
U choosed very beautiful song... I love it
and yes.. I am here.. sorry again..
Actually now the story is slowly making sense.. you should have told me...
I love loved chapter 7.. very very interesting.. romance anger, jealousy, passion.. and suspense.. all in all a great update! thanks!
chapater 8 ws sad and short
poor Khushi.. and Arnav.. I hope everything will be sorted out!
hey.. please.. do update chapter 9 soon..
i dont watch any shows so dont know any actors in particular..
great story.. and good job once again!!1
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2ND PRIZE goes to...pantrossy
3RD PRIZE goes to...boreddamsel
best comments on CHAPTER TEN
awesome update loved it glad she is finding out the truth and how she and asr was set up by the people she trusted awesome update thanks for the pm hope she talks to asr soon and they both figure out who the rest of the snakes are
OMG...so many shocks...truths in just one update.
Hope that now khushi will use her brians and come back to arnav.
Its good that Lavanya told khushi the truth
please continue soon
I'm glad that Khushi has finally got to know the truth... She should go & talk to Arnav asap to avoid any further damage to their relationship. Acc. to me Mrs. Sen can be a murderer.
Waiting for next chapter nw
Then who s d actual killer?? Sanyukta?? Aakash??
Suprb update... So Khushi undrstnd her mistake...
Waitng 4 d nxt part.. Cntinue soon
and the1ST PRIZEgoes to...dumas
2ND PRIZE goes to...dazzling_glory
3RD PRIZE goes to...aquagal and sruthickjointly
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 02 October 2012 at 7:26am