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Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Two (Page 9)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
lovely update.regarding the pace it is ok...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
nice part
no the pace of the strory is okay
but sometimes it feels that some parts or scenes are going way too slow
continue soon and pace is okay dont worry

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Dat wz truely lovely. continue soon

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Hi!

Thanks for the PM.

Enjoyed the update.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update and no I don't find the pace slow infact I really like the way u pay attention to small details which is necessary for the build up of the story and their Paris trip... Arnav and Khushi have come from two different worlds and it will take time for them to create a world of their own by taking the best out of them and merging it together.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Nice update... I think pace is ok

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Nice update...i think the pace is fine...like the way you pay attention to small details..thanks for the PM

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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