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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Soumya

Again you left our questions unanswered... Well I know, in order to keep the story going you just have to stop at the suspense point.

Every chapter of yours turns out interestingSmile. Looking forward for the update on your next chapter soon.

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
little bit confusing but nice update... hope in next update u will clear the things... thanx for the pm...

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Loved your update...pls pm me your next update...please...

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awesome updates..waiting 4 ur next update

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nice update 

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
nice...really my heart goes out for diya..
really very emotional scene wher disha is looking at diya and pari and thinking dat she feels she is watching them the last tym...
m really waiing for next chapter...thanks for pm..!!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Sry 4 late. Actually i don't knw hw 2 narrate it... Bt 2day i decide 2 write it anyhow nd de result z below...
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Part - 5
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De 2bodies r of non other, its Disha and Dibesh!!
De whole room hv pindrop silence nd de sound of blowing wind hearing.
All r speechless in shock in tears in heart broken.
Diya stood deir stunningly, wid wide mouth open. Tears streaming down across her chickend..
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De silence breaked by Pari's crying sound, who searching 4 her Mom. All rushed 2wards spot.
Pari sits near de head of Disha nd crying continuesly by shacking her head.
A huge noise of crying heared nd in dem Pari's cry lost in smwhr. She just starring at crying ppl wid her tearfull big eyes.
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Diya was still stood deir emotionlessly nd motionlessly. Dipesh notice her nd hug her tightly nd cry. Bt Diya still as same, no reaction no effect. As if c turned into a alive dead body!!
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Sm ppl try 2 tk Pari away bt c hold Disha's hand so tightly nd began 2 cry. Howevr Dipesh tks her away nd hand over 2 Sulochana; who also cms 4 Diya's wedding, witness of de whole incident.
She tks her wid tearful eyes nd told him 2 tk away Diya who still stood deir. Dipesh did de same. He hwevr tk her 2 her room nd mk her sit.
She sat deir emotionlessly. Dipesh, who controlled herself till, break in tears by putting his head on Diya's lap. Bt c z blank.
Sulochana who watch all dis 4m far cn't controll herself nd ran away 4m deir, breaks into tears whn Manohar try 2 assure her.
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Aftr sm while funeral tk off. Dipesh went along wid dem, as he hv 2 do all nd also tk Pari along wid him.
The fire touches de sky, by burning 2 love birds who slept peacefully on de bed of woods.
Wid dat fire all memories of dem also get burned one by one... The white shapes of gass touches de sky, wid a note, 2 fly 2wards a nw begining.
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Dipesh retrn brokenhrt wid Pari nd he get panicked whn he cm 2 knw Diya jumped 4m terrace nd tkn 2 hospital. He rushed 2wards nd reached near Diya who layed on bed unconciously. Blood streaming out 4m her head. Doctors try 2 stop de flow wid cottons, bt cn't. Dey drive away Dipesh 4m room, who wasn't in mood 2 go.
The door closed wid a sound on de face of Dipesh nd he try helplessly 2 see Diya. Bt in vain, deir z no hopes.
Manohar consoled him nd he cried in his arms. Aftr sm horrible mmnts the door opened nd Doctor cm out in hurry. He informs all 2 arrange blood quickly, as c got a wrost blood loss.
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Sulochana gvs blood as her blood group was same 2 Diya nd c tkn. Aftr dat de operation starts.
Evry min seams a decade 4 Dipesh. He lost almost evrythng 2day. A Father like elder brother nd a Mother like sister-in-law, whom he worship as Ram and Sita 2day vry far away 4m him. He shaken up in fear by de thought of lossing only woman of his lyf his love his reason of living, Diya...
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Red light ovr de door gone off and door open wid ending all wait bt increase heart beats wlcming sweats streaming nd a nvr ending fear 2 loss de most loveable person of life.
Finaly by breaking de silence de doctor speak up...
Operation Successfull.
Dis 2 words gv a chance 2 Dipesh dance wid joy. Bt all vanish at next moment whn doctor's words blast a bigest bum of Dipesh's lyf.
"But, she 4get her past, she lost her memorie. Reminding her it the step 2 pull her into a sure death. We did her brain operation nd if a single thing related 2 her past cm infront of her, wht we God also cn't save her. So its better 2 tk her away 4m here, all thing all ppl related 2 her past... ALL"!!!
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Doctor's word rang in Dipesh's ear. The world move round round arouna him bt he sat wid no motion.
She saved bt c no more his. She alive yes!! Bt didn't hv any place 4 him in her lyf.
He lost her!! He lost evrythng!!
Can he survive?? Hw cn he survive widout her widout see her face wid out hear her voice??
How?? How??
He screams loudly, Cry unconsiously. Bt disapear aftr sm tym. All search him bt cn't find him anywhr.
Whr he go?? Did he done smthng wrong??
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All thoughts ends up by apearing of Dipesh who step in, look strong. He went 2 doctor, talk to him. And den went 2 bring medicnes.
Manohar and Sulochana already got de situation's demand. Dey walk 2wards Dipesh who hand overing de medicnes to nurse; told him dat dey tk Diya wid dem as deir daughter. He hv nthng to worry, as dey gv all love all care dat she deserves. Dis bring a smile on Dipesh's dry emotionless face...

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Like and cmmnt 4 it. It'll mk me 1st nd addicat 2 write it soon as ewr expectetions.

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Vry nyc updt aftr a long tym. M just waiting 4 dis updt.
My eyes got wet whn i read dis. U potrate it vry well nd emotionaly. My heart crys out 4 both Dipesh and Diya.
U gv me a best Diwali gift. 10x Soumya, 10x a lot.

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