*ArVi*ArMan*Past life memories chpt5 *updtd* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Soumya, its amazing. Egarly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
SUSPENSE SUSPENSE SUSPENSE...!!!... a very interesting update... ur update was like an episode for me which ended in a suspense and now i m eagerly waiting for the next episode(update)... to know that whats gonna happen next... thanx for the pm..:):):)
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This is geting better and better!! Update soon yaar I can't wait!!! Keep up the great work!😊 And thanks for pm!
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😊 GOOD EVENING 😊Edited by Soumya02 - 11 years ago
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Hi, guys 10x a lot 4 u'r response. Keep responding.
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DESMUKH RESIDENCE
ARCHANA'S ROOM

Aai...Aai wake up!!
Teju shouted. Soham brought water & sprinkle it on her face, but in vain. She didn't react. Savita who stood worridly cm & tell Manav 2 tk Archu 2 hospital. Manav nodded his head & carries her wid his arm, quickly left 4 hospital.
CITY HOSPITAL
Doctor tk Archu inside 4 examin. All r waiting out side worridely. Meanwhile purvi went 2 Sulo who stood at a corner & crying. She asked her abt album. Sulo tried 2 avoid her bt purvi don't let her. She shaked her body & ask abt dat grl in the album & sulo screams loudly,
"She z the twin sis of Archu"!!!

All r get shocked & purvi rmv her hand 4m sulo body. C got confused more dan shock.
Meanwhile, Doctor cm out 4m examination hall. All rushed 2wards him. He informed all dat she is ok & sleeping due 2 injection. But... 'But' dis word pinch all lyk a niddle & all asked 2gether, Wht but??

She is alright na Doctor??
sulo asked.
Nt 2 worry c z alright & u cn tk her home... Bt Mr. Desmukh i want 2 ask u a qus, whn we examined her brain whe found sm weird in her brain!! Manav got more worried & tense, he asked doctor if all right archana wid archana. He assured him bt also told him dat seems Mrs. Desmukh already went through a measer accident or a dangerous lyf tkng mental state!! Disz words voulents him & he yells at doctor, "What u mean of Mental State?? & who de hell r u 2 talking abt my wife lyk dis?? Sachin cm & try 2 calm down him. Doctor instantly appolozies him, I m sry, Mr. Desmukh. I didn't mean dat at all. Actually i found smthng weird in her reports. It seams lyk c had already gone through a mesure brain operation!!! Any ways u cn tk her home. By hearing doctor's words sulo got more woried & tens dan all. Dis didn't unnoticed by purvi.
Desmukh Residence
Manav brought Archu home & lied her on bed & quickly leave. He directly went 2 Sulo who stand outside of the room worridly. He asked her 2 tell truth. C cn't hide it more. C told a sentence who gv a measure shock 2 all.
Archu is nt my real daughter!!! C z daughter of my best frnd!! Her name is Diya...Diya Mehera!! C narrate all, Dat The grl who just lyk Purvi, her name is Disha. C z the twin sis of Diya. The guy wid Disha, who just looks lyk Arjun, is her love & husband Dibesh & the guy who is wid Diya is her fiancee & Dibesh's twin brother Dipesh!! All r stood speechlessly by hearing her word. Ovi, who stood betwn Arjun & Purvi starring shockingly at both. Arjun had tearfull eyes & purvi 2.
Sulo told all dat Mr. & Mrs. Mehera parents of Disha & Diya died in plain crash whn the grls were o9ly of 2 yrs.
Aftr deir death a caring lady Mrs. Merry tk cr of both.
As Mr. Mehera was an Millionar so dat grls hadn't face any financian prblms bt dey always felt the lack of their parents love. They were so connected as they r twins & they hv no1 except each other. They were lyk 1 soul 2 bodies.
As tym passes & they grown up & their love 4 eacho ther becm more strong.
Both Disha & Diya were gd students so dey join Oxford University 2 cmplt their graduation. Their Disha meet a guy name Dibesh Yogi a eligble handsome bachlore who cm 2 cmplt his management course. Both Dibesh & Disha falls 4 eachother at 1st sight whn at other side Dipesh also falls 4 Diya at 1st meeting. Love starts bloosome in 3's mind. Aftr so many tries Dibesh put his heart in front of Disha at valentine day & Disha also accpts it. Dey decided 2 get married. Dipesh couldn't confess his Love 2 Diya aftr sm many tries 2. Both Dibesh & Disha decided 2 get married at fixed date. Marrage happnd. Diya was so happy & sad 2 by thnkng dat nw Disha leave her alone. During biddai Diya mk Disha blush by telling dat c should soon gv a niece 2 her & dey hug. Aftr dat Disha left.
1yr passed. Diya cmplt her management & Disha gv birth 2 a angel named "PARI" by Diya. Diya used 2 play wid Pari whole day. Whn tym cms 4 leave Diya again getting sad by thnkng dat nw c again bcm alone. By seeing her willingness 2wards Pari both Dibesh & Disha started 2 gv hint abt Dipesh who still love Diya madly!!
Precap: Disha is leaving wid Dibesh. Bfr getting into car c turned 2wards Diya & Pari nd told herself "why it seems dat aftr nw i won't be able 2 see Diya & Pari again"!!!
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At last I done de update aftr so many tries. Again sry 4 late.
Plz lyk & tell hw u lyk it??
Well guys i gv a name 2 Disha & Dibesh love story, "DIBESH EK NAYE DISHA"!! Wht do u thnk abt it??
Edited by Soumya02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL UPDATE DEAR...can't believe that you wrote it really well...Loved the update a lot. ðŸ˜ŠðŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice update...can't wait for your next update, please pm me when you update your next chapter...pls...
Edited by ArVi_ArHi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyy it ws awesome...
it ws really great...!!
do update soon..
plz pm me wen u update... 😛 Edited by ashvikluverrr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates..your story is going on right direction.last line of story was very emotional..😭.plz try to update soon.. Edited by nasir1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, all twins. Interesting.
Egarly waiting for next update.