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The update was awesome & thanks for the PM 
Oh thank you my friend!! i am so happy and you are most welcome
Khushi burning out of jealousy seeing Arnav
dancing with another girl & disliking the fact that there was somebody else
in her place though the fact that she loves him was unaware to herself &
then the cupid, Shiv's entry 
was a nice start
yes i find shiv being a angel in this story because he was the one who help our khushi by showing the light on how she really loves arnav x
Shiv helping Khushi to realize her love &
those set of questions were adorable 
i dont know what to say 
Khushi's eyes searching for Arnav after realizing that she has fallen in love with Arnav & worried on not being able to spot him was touching
one of the signs of love isnt it?!
Khushi startled on being dragged out suddenly by someone but then composing herself on realizing Arnav's touch, her face losing its colour when she saw Arnav's face burning in rage & trying to understand the reason behind so much of sudden anger was well framed
i was just thinking that khushi has finally realized why la is so scared
Arnav dragging her into the hotel not
bothering about everyone staring at his behavior, pushing her harshly against
the wall and pouring out his broken emotions & the extent to which he felt
hurt on seeing her with someone else other than him, not giving an ear to her &
finally laying his love in front of his lady love & then being carried away
in immense joy on hearing the same confession from her side was well-narrated
reflecting both the pain as well as the joy his heart experienced 
i really love arnav being passionate and jealous the feeling makes me happy and feel that one day i will find my arnav!!!
Khushi pleading Arnav to listen to her once
while confused & shocked at his attitude, astonished at his confession
which made her feel light as a father & then bursting out her confession of
love unable to keep it to herself were beautifully written
thank you i do try my best to make you guys happy xx
Arnav wondering whether Khushi really expressed her love for him or if he was in a dreamland & then Arshi swirling in their passionate kiss was adorable
Khushi overwhelmed to be pampered by Arnav's shower of love but pushing him away with tears when he unconsciously took it further & Arnav first bothered about her act but then realizing his speed & finally both embracing each other was lovely
Thank you because i want to show arnav as a understanding person and who wont forces anything upon his khushi
Enjoyed the confessions & waiting to read
more & to know whether Prem will feel comfortable in accepting Arnav in his
little world????? 
omg i cant wait to write prems reaction... emmm... i will update soon then
Quoted the lines I loved the most :
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But I'm super happy because the update was outstanding
. 
finally making their all most kiss in a propper kiss, and what a kiss it was damn romantic, passionate and hot 
What more could you want after a confession like this? , because I'm scare that maybe Dev will enter in the picture, but I don't want to think bad things only good ones
you are an amazing writer. 
because I managed to be at least second 
you are most welcome for the pm !!! thank you so much for the amazing comment i love you xxwithout me you will be not able to write the story really , esa mat kaho, because there is chances that I outburst of joy, I feel really honored and overwhelmed. The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
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u r actually an amazing writter... 
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