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The Imperfect Husband
Mission: Laad Governor... 
hmmm...

I Like this title..

Mr.Raizada is an imperfect husband here and KKG on a mission to make him a perfect hubby?? LOL
this SS is gonna b awsum.. would Love to read more of it & SOON..! Wink
Finaaaly & Thanks to Allah that actually you started wd this SS.. pheww Tongue

i was bht ziada excited to read the prologue ROFL ROFL

and now us say bhi ziada excited to read about the 1st chap of this SS.. AND SERIOUSLY Ii CAN'T WAIT FOR THE 1ST CHAPTER...!!!!

i am sure this SS is gonna be the best one among All.. pichlay tamam SS's se aur bhi achi hogi aur , pichlay tamam SS's k muqaablay main hit bhi jaegi Inshaa Allah Smile

okay so now I'll Say STH abt the Prolohgue Big smile

all i could say is OML..!! Loved the prologue... simply Loved reading it Smile

it was bindaaas, outstanding, beutiiffuuullyyy written Addii..!! Clap  Clap Clap
 
ii Loved the Hindi dailogues bht soch samjh k you have used and they went perfect! Smile

Anjali being filmy here.. i loved this Anji bht ziada and isk muqablay main i'm hating Serial waali anjali Dead
I Loved that Karan Johar wala dialogue said by Anjali ROFL
and Arnav's reaction!! OMG OMG!! Big smile
when i read this scene pehli dafa i laafed very hard and bht mushkil se sanbhala khud ko girnay sy LOL
agar girti tw Allah hi haaffiz hota mera LOL

''  Hindi dialogues i loved them..!!  ''


And this one was the best one!

"Chote, this is not a joke, it's your life. And remember what Shahrukh Khan said in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai... Hum ek baar jeete hain, ek baar marte hain, Shaadi bhi ek baar karte hain aur Pyaar bhi..."

Arnav looked at her with disbelief. "What the...?! Di... Are you serious? This is my life not Kuch Kuch Hota Hai. You and your Shahrukh Khan mania..."

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai... ? sachi main? ROFL
Anjali is crazyyy LOL


''I wouldn't even look at that Daayan... ''

 OMG...!! he is calling her a Daayan ROFL

''My reputation is more important than anything else...''

He is thinking of his rapo? LOL
beta woh tw apki is disciplined life ki dhajjiyaan uraane arahi hai ROFL


Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta... you are going to be my wife, you are going to live in my house, in my room, so you will have to stay as per my rules. I am not going to let your craziness affect me. You will not disturb my 'Perfect Life'... you will not ruin the 'Discipline' that I follow...

*LMHO*  ROFL

Raizada! you think k you are gonna Bark orders on her & will lissen to your nonsense? eeh?
Aapki Perfect Life ki Aesi ki tessi!! LOL

Chalo Good Luck with this!! Tongue


and i am happy that this Anjali is a happily divorced one unlike the one in Serial Dead
Shayam ki deewaaani Angry
pagal Anjali... no she is sick!! Dead

i loved Arnav how he is here, actually wesa hi hai jesa serial me par yahan mje aur ziada thora farmaanbardar lag raha hai LOL
YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI! 

YES DI!

OMG...!!!! ROFL

hmmm.. so here Akash , Anjali & Arnav are siblings Smile
Akash & Payal already married..








ii Loved Khushi's POV.. LOL

Dhaaga hume zabardasti thaamna pada...
Humaari marzi nahi thi...
Lekin ab jo baandh diya hai toh...
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CHHODUNGI NAHI... LAAD GOVERNOR!!!!!!!!!!

buwwhhahahahahhaa ROFL

keep it up Khushi!! LOL


Taiyyar ho jaen aap Mr.Raizada... Khushi Kumari Gupta aa rahi haiLOL


meri taraf se donon ko Good Luck!! LOL

I am with you khushi, go on! Wink
This Raizada needs some lesson and he has to be a perfect husband at the end of the day Wink

Loved reading it Addii..  Smile Smile Smile

Ik Dam ZABBARDAST start liya hai aap nay.. DO CONTINUE..!!!!

would love to read more Smile

Update soon... 
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I havent read it yet!! (no jootas please) I knw agar meine parh lia tou I will go mad for commenting caus the title and banner have me already hooked!!
I just read the last part asking if u should continue or not?? Really u asked tht?? Dont u dare shradds!! U have to continue and U are worrying abt the response.. Oh I can tell u abt tht.. U will get a dhamakedaar response Big smile (Yes yes I know I havent read the prologue yet but I can guarantee this to u)

Meri chutti starts!! Unhappy

Next week  after getting free I will be here Big smile











Hahahahahahaha kahan I had planned to comment after the chutti.. I couldnt stop myself and read the prologue, bas phir kya tha..I had to comment so here I am:

A small break wont do much harm will it?  Ab I dont care.. I couldnt stop myself from commenting 


The banner is sooo nice!!




And the title "The Imperfect Husband!!" 



Super dooper hit hai title!! (Atleast mere liye Thumbs Up)

Yar kya tofaani concept hai!!




We have the Arnav Singh Raizada here whom we all originally fell in love with and a small jhalak of our khushi..But this khushi is more crazier, much more fun and a bang on competition to the ASR.. She will change you for good Arnav.. 
Aapki perfect zindagi ka naksha poora badal de gi aur aap dekhte reh jaye gey..oops dekhte nahi What The What The karte reh jaye gey!!







Okay so starting from the starting:

The charcter sketches.. best best.. so as in the show we can say this for our lovely leads:



The best part abt the character sketch was..rather the best sentence:

"Within a year of her marriage she realised the her husband shyam was a jerk of the first rate so she DUMPED him and now she is HAPPILY divorced! "

Woohhooo no creep.. no villians!! *dance* *dance*





Oh and this tou mind-blowing:

Anjali: Chotte, Marry khushi..
Arnav: Yes Di...What the...?! Di
Anjali: Evil Smile



Ocassion: Arnav-Khushi engagement!



Go Di..Go!! 

Lol chalo yeh tou manay ke u wont marry again.. tension not.. pyaar bhi ek he baar hoga.. dekhtay jao Arnav Babua.. yeh dialogue aap par fit uttre ga!! 

Kya kaha khushi aur aapke rules key mutabik??  Babua foran doctor ko phone karo..Mujhe lagta hai aap ka dimaag thekanay pe nahi hai!! 

Dektay hai dekhtay hai aap ke yeh Perfect Robotic life aap kab tak jiye ge Arnavji.. I am waiting to see u lose all hopes of keeping ur life the way u want it right now!!
 
Hayye our Beautiful khushi.. dress ek dam hatke okay?? Jab aap neeche jao tou I want arnav to be like this:





All lost in you!!

Dhaaga Hume zabardasti thaamna pada,
hamari marzi nahi thi,
lekin ab jo bandh dia tho ...
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CHHODUNGI NAHI..LAAD GOVERNOR!!!!

Dialogue of the prologue!!

I always loved this dialogue and u have used this soo creatively shradds!! 
I love you shradds!!




Khushi I am with you.. Change ur Imperfect husband to ur perfect one.. we all are waiting!! 
Go khushi go!!




hum sab taiyyaar hain aap bhi taiyyar ho jayie Arnav babua..

Taiyyar ho jaiye Laad Governor.., Khushi Kumari Gupta (soon to be Singh Raizada) aa rahi hain aapki 'Pefect life' ka naksha badalne aur aapki 'Discipline' ki dhajjiyan udaane..."

Muhahahahahahhahha ...





Loved the prologue.. Ek dam BINDAAS!! *whistles*






Shradds yeh sab aapke liye:






  

Love you Bohat saara shradds!! Hug Hug Hug






Waise I dont want you to give us the next chpater before I come back from my one week ki chutti but well the other readers will be waiting and it will be unfair to them so for them "Continue soon!!" Big smile




PS: Going back to my books!! 
see u after a week on IF!! (mujhe nahi jaana) Cry Cry Cry 




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SIMPLY LOVED READING IT.. Smile


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Goodluck with TIH!!

For sure u will rock this SS too like ur other stories!! Thumbs Up 


Edited by Shona.Angel - 29 September 2012 at 11:31am

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