SwaRon FF:Will love You..Forever Ch-9..pg-115 - Page 6

a new story.. n very touching too..!! dey love each oder den y r dey leaving each oder..!!

Hey! Just read the intro. And first chapter.
Osam!..nice concept actually..quite different thing on our SwaRon..
A huge fan of ShaRey so loved the fact that it was included, all together a gud update!!.
Would love to read further, do Pm us. Thanx for the PM :)

Don't know what to say, ur updates left me in tears, I could feel Swaron's pain and now wants to know eagerly as what transpired between them that they are taking such a drastic step :-(

Swaron getting divorced 😲
12 yrs relation . . . . . All in vain
both are sad . . . . Then wats wrong 😔
rey being supportive for sharon,,, by her side to make her strong 😊
swaron are childhood lovers . . . . . . Means eternal n innocent love 🤗
hope to see their patch up soon

Now this update had me stumped. I am yet to understand why are they getting divorce if they love and care for each other so much. But I guess I have to wait for those answers. Well first coming to the update. It was beautifully written. Sharon's love for Swayam and pain of loosing him was masterly written. Apart from that I liked how you mentioned about some small incidents to establish the character of Sharon. It was nicely thrown in to the mix of this emotional turmoil. And yeah some nice dialogue - especially the one about the eye one was beautiful. Swayam' part in this update was small but it was also fantstically written. But I guess his side of story will be told in other update. Wonderful captivating begining. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Nice start 

loved the first part

WAOW. . . AMAZ4NG . . U KNW MY CURIOSITY QUESTN WHY THEY R TAKING DIVORCED WHEN THEY LOVD EACH OTHER. NOW ALSO. . WHY ? WHY ? WHY ?. . . LOVED DA UPDATE. . . UPDATE SOON

awesome start

The first chapter was really painful, could feel the pain both Swayam and Sharon were going through. But what is the reason for their separation? I think its gotta be something related to Swayam, some in the future that is going to affect Sharon more than this, because of which is he distancing himself from her, but again isn't it more painful for Sharon and Swayam to be away from each other?