Visirigal Veesum Thendral Poongatru E9P3! (Page 6)

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Vanakam, tnx friends for all your sweet comments, here is the next part! Enjoy!Big smile

Tamil, ''Dei Kanaku! Tea and vadai nalla irukku enneWink?''Tamil, Kanaku and Joseph stand on the side of the road at a tea kadai.
Kanaku, ''Tamil enne nee, etho puthusa tea and vadai sapudura maari sollura?''
Tamil, ''Tea and vadai sapuda, sapuda asai kuraiyathu daTongue.'' 
Joseph, ''Ama Kanaku, sir ku tea and vadai salikathu. Ana ennaku bore aditchutu da.'' Tamil watching him and says, ''Oh appidiya sollure? Ippe nee enna thundu kondu irukuraLOL? Tea and vadai thane?'' (nalla questionLOL)
Joseph hides the tea and vadai, which he had in his hands, behind his back and watching them with a big smileBig smile
Kanaku, ''Dei appidi smile pannatha da, thange mudiyeleLOL.'' Tamil and Kanaku begins to laugh. 
Joseph stops smiling and says, ''Ennaiye nakkal panni sirikathiku ungaluku thookam varathe?''
Kanaku, ''Dei Tamil nange avanna nakkal panni a sirithom?'' Tamil doesn't answer.
Kanaku and Joseph see Tamil with his back to them and see that Tamil is watching the road.
Joseph begins to laugh, ''Dei Kanaku avan nange talk pannurathu interesting illai endu, avan road a watch pannuranLOL.''

Tamil looks at the quiet road and takes a sip of his tea (tasty a irukka?Tongue). He sees people walking, a woman with a child, a group boys that are laughing, and then he sees...Thulasi and her grandmother on the other side of the road. His heart begins to beat faster when he sees Thulasi and gets a lopsided smile on his faceEmbarrassed. Tamil sees that Thulasi and her grandmother were at the temple, Thulasi has a archanai thattu in her hands. She is dressed in her old davani. Tamil watch every move of her. Grandma and Thulasi crossing the silent road. Grandma comes to the side, but Thulasi drop inadvertently the archanai thattu middle of the road. (cars ondum varekudathuShocked)
Grandma, ''Thulasi fast a va ma ethavatu car vanthura poguthu.''
Thulasi, ''Ah varen patti.''
Tamil sees that Thulasi the archanai things pick up pannura endu. Then he sees in the distance a truck. The truck comes to the side of ThulasiShocked. Tamil looks from the truck to Thulasi. He doesn't think and ran to her. Tamil calls, ''He Thulasi!!''. but Thulasi doesn't hear.

Joseph and Kanaku scare and watch Tamil who runs away.

The truck comes with high speed. Thulasi stands up with the archanai thattu,  then she sees in no time the truck right past her...Shocked


What is going to happen? Thulasi ku accident a illaOuch is she rescued byTamil?

Edited by Hollie24 - 08 October 2012 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Oh no what will happen next???  Want to read the next part Hollie.

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged

lovely HOLLIE!!!  Full of suspense ... i love that archanai thattu in T's hands ... waiting for the next aprt!!!Clap

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maha2us IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Beautiful writing, Hollie. The description of the scene is nice and the idea of archanai thattu is also very good one. And an element of suspense also. And a good reminder of those good old days, jolly good person TA liked to take Vadai and tea.

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Great parts Hollie Big smile It looks real and cute with the friends. Esp
Deepam part is nice and lovely Clap waiting for next... Enna achoo? Confused

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Awesome part Hollie!
I actually sat up straight towards the end only to be fooled to see the 'thodarum' sign!

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 2:44am | IP Logged
another great part hollie...
a nice cute dreamy...
waiting for next part!

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MindFreezer Goldie

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Here is the next part!Big smile

But then in one second is Thulasi dragged backwards, the archanai thattu falls on the ground. The truck drives away (ama athaan seiye theriyumAngry). Thulasi stands in shock, her body vibratesOuch. Tamil shouts to the truck, ''Adai pathu poge theriyata, madaiya!!Angry'' The people comes from the side to them. Someone from the crowd calls, ''Yarukum adi padelaiye?!''
Joseph and Kanaku come running. They come through the crowd to Tamil. Grandma comes to Tamil and says, ''Thambi''
Tamil turns and sees Thulasi's grandma. Grandma,''Thanks thambi, nee varathiku enne nadanthurukummo...Ermm''People on the side sees there is nothing happend and walk all away.
Tamil,''Thanks ellam vendam patti, ninge ivalange pattheramma kuttikondu pongeBig smile.''
Grandma, ''Nee nalla iruppa pa, my petthi lives by youThumbs Up.''
Thulasi comes from her shock then she looks at the guy who has saved her. She want to say something, but no words come out. At that time a auto comes there by along. Tamil stops the auto and says, ''Patti ningelum ungande petthiyum ulla erunge.'' 
Grandma gets in the car. Thulasi looks to Tamil. Their looks crosses each otherEmbarrassed. Tamil hopes if she will say something, but she doesn't and gets in the auto. Thulasi says the address to the auto driver, Tamil listens(now he knows where Thulasi lives). The auto leaves, Tamil is watching the auto, quite awhile he hopes or Thulasi will look at him. And at that moment looks Thulasi out of the auto to him. Tamil feels as if he is floating...Embarrassed

Joseph and Kanaku come to Tamil that dreaming far looks in the distance. Joseph, ''Anthe auto poi oru month achuLOL.''Tamil is out of his mind. Tamil,''Vange tea kadaiku povom.''

Tamil sits on the bench. Kanaku, ''Tamil, nee ennada ippidi hero maari kalakithe.'' 
Joseph, ''Yarumme kanele anthe truck vanthetu, nee mathum athe kanduthe, anthe ponna kapathite, eppidi da? Dei nalla kalam yaarukum ondume nadekele.'' Tamil is silent. Kanaku comes to sit next to him and says, ''Dei ennada pathulle kanavillai?'' 
Tamil looks at him, ''Dei naan ungalutha oru visaiyam sollonum.''
Joseph, ''Ennada?''
Tamil, ''Naan anthe ponne love pannuren.'' Joseph and Kanaku look at each other. 
Kanaku, ''Unmaiya va sollure, anthe ponnuku theriyumma?''
Tamil shakes his head. Joseph, ''Ava yaaru enne peru, endu theriyumma?''
Tamil, ''Avantha per Thulasi and inge kitthe thaan avantha vidu.''
Kanaku, ''Appa enneda poi unthe love a proposal pannu.'' (athane poi solle vendiyethu thaneWink)
Tamil, ''Ana athulle oru sikkel, ava kum Velayutham kum kalyanam nadekepoguthuDead.''
Joseph, ''Enna da sollura, anthe kilavan odaiyaLOL? Thulasi inthe year enne anthe  Velayutham ku year enne. Dei Tamil, nee athu oru kalyanam endu ninatchu anthe ponna vitthurade.''
Kanaku, ''Ama da anthe ponnu ku pudikama thaan anthe kalayanam nadekuthu pole. So nee avala vidathe, Unnaku enne help vendum endalum kekalamApprove.''
Tamil smiles, ''Thanks daBig smile.''


O happy our hero has saved ThulasiStar, nalla kalam ondumme nadekele...

Edited by Hollie24 - 09 October 2012 at 2:57am

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