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Gisel

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged

Episode1(Part5):

In the temple that night (I guess Lavanya would have updated him by now),

Tamil attends a phone call, "Ena da Joseph? Enga da iruka? Koviluku ethukuda vara sonna?"

Joseph, "Ada! Wait pannu! Vanthitai irrukein!"

Tamil, "Hm..Intha rathiri nerathila? Ivalo late a? Seri. Sekirum vada!" looking at his watch.

Joseph, "Dai! Romba salichi katha! Inaku etho ungaluku visayama naraya ponnuga varuvanga chumma sight adichitu iru. LOL

Tamil, "Ada chi. Sekiram va da!"(Sollara peicha kelkunga, Tamil sir Tongue

)

Tamil puts his phone in his pocket and looks around. Yawning and stretching his arms and some exercise. Some kids are playing near him and a kid boy comes and hugs his legs to avoid his friends hitting and playing. He puts his hand on the lad's head and shakes his hair lovingly Smile

. He suddenly sees some sparkle raised eyebrows

and looks in that direction again. He can't see anything now. But something within him, tells him to go that side towards the sparkle

. He looks around again. He can't see anything thinking

. He walks towards that side like he is searching for something

. He comes to the temple's pond. There are millions of small deepams floating in the water. He looks at the deepams and smiles. A patti is telling her granddaughter to light the deepam and float it in water praying for a good husband and if the deepam is lit throughout the night she will be married soon with a good man. Tamil listens to this and smiles at their superstition.

He suddenly sees Thulasi draped in a peacock hued half saree and simple but exotic jewellery surprise

(Benefit of Vels being there in her life...some good clothes) and her patti in the pond steps. She is having deepam in her hands and glowing by the lights around her love struck

and is not looking that happy but Patti is happy. He leans forward to get a better look

. Just then the kids come there and as destiny strikes, one of them pushes him unknowingly Shocked

. He splashes into the water not able to keep balance Ouch

. Some girls whose deepams have drowned because of it, get up angrily and walk away Ouch

. Thulasi whose deepam is way away doesn't notice the disturbance

Thulasi, "Patti! va patti pohalam. Enoda valkaiya yar alayum matha mudiyathu. Intha deepam elam waste Ouch

. Epdi panni peyuthu paru. Culur kachal vanthira poguthu, va pohalam Ouch

Patti, "Apdi elam illa ma. Enaku enum nambikai irukku Thumbs Up

. Antha murugan ona kai vuda matan. Ama inaku nala panni peyuthu va pollam.

Both of them turn to go. Tamil ascents from the water exactly where Thulasi's deepam is kiss

. Patti is explaining to Thulasi as to keep faith in God( praying

Turn! Turn! ). Out of sudden urge, Thulasi turns to see her deepam, just to see Deepak...sorry...Tamil behind it winking

. Their eyes lock for a moment hee hee

. Then, Thulasi turns away scared and walks away

Tamil looks as she disappears, now love in his eyes totally, with sparkles from the deepams Day Dreaming

Joseph, "Dai! Tamil! Thani la enda pannura? Mela va da!" LOL

Tamil is not listening wave

, flashes of Thulasi's gaze come to him and some BGM Yuvan's music.

Thodarum!

Over to you Hollie!
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Gisel

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged

That's how you end it! With a bang Wink

Not much of a suspense element for you Hollie! thinking

Thank you everyone for your support Hug

Continue to give your support to the other writers too Smile

Vishwai, that comment was so sweet. Special thanks!

Waiting to read your part of the story guys Day Dreaming

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged

Very cute 3 and 4 part with made us imagine scenes...Nice end to episode 1 with part 5..Great Job Gisel!!...

Edited by shubba - 03 October 2012 at 10:10pm

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Well written Gisel ... keep it up!!!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Great episodes for the beginning gisel...am imagining lovestruck TA gazing at T...good imagination...you managed to keep basic facts straight and built around them...

using RTO office, kal's auto to put lav on track and the temple visit and of course bringing in joseph too..

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:17pm | IP Logged

Wow Gisel awesome love love love it!!!!! The little details and the funny dialogues are all great. I can picture everything in my head.

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged

Wow Gisel...Superb parts. Loving every bit of it. Cute and beautiful ah irinthichu. Esp TA, Lav and Thuls scene Big smile

Wonderful, waiting for others Smile

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great start gisel .. looking forward to hollie's continuation.

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