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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Both the parts are super cute Gisel ... and I can almost imagine T/T colliding with each other ...LOL

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Super gisel..part 2 especially great creating thinking...waiting for part 3

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Two parts are well written Gisel!!...

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Episode1(Part3):
Velayutham, "Enga poiruntha? Poi sollathe.it wasn't me
MM looks at everything confused.Ouch 
Padma looks worried and angry.Angry
Thilaga, "Dai! Bayam paduthathe da. Inga than engaiyathu poiruppa. Nee vama. Romba time aiyduchu vanga veetuku kalambula.
Everyone leave.
Velayutham asks his henchman, "Dai inga pakathila ena lam iruku? Ethavuthu ice cream parlor iruka?"
He replies, "Athalam theriyathu. Itha kovil ku thotu pinadi oru parku iruku; parku ka antha pakam main road. Main road la irukalam.Ouch"
Velayutham, "Park a? Um.." looking even more suspiciousworried. They get into the car. Velayutham sits next to Thulasi in the back seat making her feel uncomfortablewaiting.

Tamil is starting the bike. Pooja climbs behind Tamil.
Lavanya, "Anna! Nejamavai antha poonu unaku super jodi na! Rendu perumum pakka made for eachother mathiri iruthein ga theriyuma."
Tamil, "Ama thaiya. Maru padiyum thodangathe. Ivalo nerum polambanathu pathatha? Un polambal thangama than veetuku poram. Vandila eru!"
Lavanya sulks and gets in the bike, "Illa anna..."
Tamil, "Ai! Vettuku pogurathu veraikum ethuvum pessa kudathu. Puthu videocam vangi kuduthathu en thapu. Antha ponnu peru kudatheriyathu...ithula anni am..."
They drive away. Velayutham's car comes opposite. Camera shifts...Tamil's bike..Vel's car...Tamil's bike...Vel's car...*Bang*I don't want to see
Tamil, "Youv! Ena ya vandi ottura." Three of them get of the bike.Shocked
Tamil goes to fight with the driver. Velayutham annoyed at the disturbance comes out. He notices the ice cream stains, is shockednail biting, becomes angry and holds Tamil by the collar. Pooja gasps, "Pa.."I don't want to see
Tamil, "Enaga thappa nenga pannitu, en collar a pidikireinga!
Vels notices Lavanya and Pooja and leaves him assuming they are a family, "Poo da! Vena adi pattu sagathe.
He turns to look at Thulasi. She peeps outEmbarrassed. Vel fumes with angerAngry but Thulasi doesn't see Tamilfrustrated, "Vandiya edu da" to his driver and gets in the car.
Tamil adjusts his shirt. Lavanya notices Thulasi in the car as the car leaves. Without a second doubt, she takes her new videocam and shoots the number plate of the carapplause!
Lavanya nags her anna, "Nan mudivu panitein avunga than nama veetu marumaga, yenoda anni!"
Tamil, "Anni ya? Yaru?", realising what she is going to say, "Ama thaiya. Antha ponnu inga enga vantha?LOL"
Lavanya, "Nee paka liya? Antha car la than iruthanga.feeling beat up"
Tamil looks at the car dumbstruck, which is fading by the horizonEmbarrassed.
Lavanya waves her hand in front of his face, " Hello anna! Antha car poi 5 nimisham achu. Vandiya edu."ROFL
Tamil, "Ada chi. Vaa. Summa. Ena vechu comedy pannalana unnaku thukam varathei.Tongue
He looks at the bike mirror and adjusts his hair, smiles to himself. hee hee
Lavanya(to herself), "Nalaikai RTO office poi intha vandi number yaaru odathunu pakanum. Approm easy a anni ya kadipidichiralam. Annain ku theirya vendam"Shockedshame on you

Thodarum!

I don't like the idea of Lavanya going alone to the RTO office!

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Edited by Gisel - 05 October 2012 at 4:12am

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
another good part 3 gisel...
strategic of pooja to call "pa" leaving vel to make his own calculations..
 
seriously this is good screen play too...imagining the scenes ..really nostalgic...
 

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
CTs pls fire your story team and pick this Goldie...

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Episode1(Part4):
Lavanya goes to the RTO office early in the morning. She goes there and asks a clerk, "Oru vandi number oda address venum. Kadaikuma?"
Clerk, "Kadai kum kadaikum. Konjam wait pannuga." (NO! GO AWAY!)
After half an hour, she goes and asks again and get the same reply. 
After about 2 hours, "Enaga nenachitu irukeinga? Address kadaikuma illiya?"
Clerk, "Kuduka vendiyatha kudutha kadaikavendiyathu kadaika poguthu."(Indianu theriyum atha prove panna vendam)
Lavanya, "Engai ya unga officer! Kupudiya avarua"
Clerk, "Ala paru. Mudiyathu veliya po." and shoves her out and Lavanya hurries out annoyed. 
Just then Vels comes out talking to someone. Lavanya looks back and notices him and deduces he is the RTO Inspector from the people talking outside. She gets a brainwave, makes up her mind and gets into the auto and leaves
She goes to an internet cafe, google searches the adress of the RTO Inspector's house address and gets into another auto. This time it is Kalyani's auto. They go to the address. It is a big mansion. 
Before Lavanya enters the house gate, she sees the poster of Thulasi and Vels marriage to be held next Friday and becomes sad.
Kalyani seeing the poster herself says, "Intha nasakarain veetukum ungalukum ena samantham?"
Lavanya understanding that the auto driver knows something, "Ivanagala ungalaku theriyuma?"
Kalyani, "Yen? Ungaluku theriyatha?" with quizzing eyes.
Lavanya, "Illa intha ponna enoda annanu ku ponnu keka lamnu vanthien."Embarrassed
Kalyani all ears now comes out of the auto and looks left and right, "Oru nimisham. Inga ninu pesurathu namaku safe illa vanga vera engaiyathu poi pesalamSmile". And they leave in the auto.
Auto stops at its destination. Lavanya says, "Apdi na en anni peru Thulasi!Embarrassed"
Kalyani, "Enaga? Ivalo sonna perovum ungaluku bayam vara lai ya?"
Lavanya, "Bayam varala! Mariyatha than vanthiruku! Ivangala vida oru nala jodi en anainuku kadaika matanga! Velayutham periya puliya irukalam ana oru unmaiyana ambala ethitha mana kavi than aganum. En annain ambala."

Thodarum!

Sorry no Tamil n Thulasi. Same original Thendral disease ottikichuTongue.

Tamil sir ku periya build up lan iruku ena pannuraru nu papom!Wink

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Edited by Gisel - 05 October 2012 at 4:12am

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
All parts are awesome and very nicely written...Super job Gisel...Keep going!

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