Visirigal Veesum Thendral Poongatru E9P3! - Page 13

OMG! Thulasi doesn't know the madapam??? 

U girls (gisel/hollie.rishiii, jaya akka) rock...all parts r nicely written...very interesting and filmy...progress of scenes in each & every parts are too good and well portrayed...feels like watching a real scene...i am now scared seeing everyone🤣...looking fwd to read Jaya akka's next part...i knew Jaya Akka is not going to let T reach hall that easily..😆

Scene 3

T stops shocked in her tracks as 4-5  drunken men circle around her.  What can she do now? Oh God, why did she have to run and come like that..at least she knew she cannot be in safer hands than that person whom patti so likes'shud she scream? What if it becomes a big issue and causes more probs for her father? No, she cant face that'just as one of the guys tries to come closer, a hand out of nowhere came and pulled her aside.. she looked up and my, was she glad'she thinks, this person always seems  to know when I am in danger..cud patti be right?

Oh  no what is she thinking? she hears TA's voice calling her, T come patti is waiting and looks up to see TA, standing next to an auto..joseph and kanagu too are there'The guys seeing the threesome back off'T gets into the auto and TA follows her back to joseph's house..

 

She gets in and sees patti praying..patti she calls and steps in..but before that a hand pulls her and before she knows she feels the TA's palm on her cheek as a tight slap!

What the?? She looks up at him in shock and amazement..

TA: enna nee ninachirke? Inge nee engaloda poruppu..velilai poi unakku ethavatho nadarnthathana? Aprom kalathauku unga appa unnai odu kaali thaan ninaipa.. i

T: sorry.  Ana naan en apidi seithen theriyumma..Vel kitte epovum oru thupaaki irukkum..naan ilai therinchana aval ena vena seiya thudikamataan.  Deepa ve, appave ethavatho seithana?

TA: (oh my! this girl just continues to stun him with her sensitivity'something about her just tugs his heart'if only he had not reached and those guys'he cud not even imagine'). Ama, ippo unakku ethavatho na?

Seri, naan thaan unai kadithi vanthaen..vaa naane unai ange serkiraen (secretly he was hoping that things will change ..)

At the mandap'

Outside the hall vel is pacing up and down with his hunchmen walking with him'

Thilaka and mama are inside..thilaka with a worried expression and mama enjoying the scenes..

Mama: (paathu da thambi..ipidiye nadantha BP erri, police arrest ku badhla heart arrest aga porthu')

Vel was furious..morning was to be the wedding..all his colleagues, peers, and friends wud turn up and no bride? He will become a laughing stock..what is he to do? Shud he arrange for another bride? But who? He calls his men and asks them for ideas'just then one fellow suggests something'dawn is slowly breaking'vel goes inside..

Inside,

MM: sitting and thinking where is T and amma'ammavum kanavillai'enge poyirpa'

Padma to mohan and pavi'(a little away from MM)'dai mohan epidiyavathu aval varanum da..ilai  namma kayilenthu panammum pogum unga appave police pidipa'

Just then vel walks in,

Ai muthu manickam'enge T..ethavatho thagaval?

Before he cud say anything, an old lady comes in and calls, yaar inge T ?

All eyes turn towards her and vel is shocked on seeing her..

Ai kelavi neeya..yaar unai ullai vitudhu?

His men come running behind and say , aiyya avanga etho thagaval kudukanam sonna!

Ena kelavi..ena sollu?

and

thodarum

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[sorry, just cud not help including the slap...one of my fav scenes...]

who is this kelavi? why is she there..what is TA hoping?

Edited by vjayam - 11 years ago

Aiyoo Jaya akka! Umah! 

Wow!!  👏what a twist... what next???

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Edited by vjayam - 11 years ago

Scene 4

Kelavi: yaar inge T? suddenly she spots deepa and kalyani..

Enna ma? Ungalukku koncham kuda unga friend vazhkai nalla irukanamnthu ennume ilaya? Naan thaan sonnen ilaya intha aaal pathi (points towards Vel)'

MM looks at deepa and kalyani,

MM: enna deepa..intha amma enna solara?

Vel to his men: dai, intha kelavi ve thookungal pa'the men menacingly,move towards the lady..

Kelavi: dai nee enodu ponnu ku panina drohathe ippo inoru appavi ponnu odu seyanam ninaikaraiya?

Kelavi looking at MM, deepa and all: intha aal thaan enodu ponne anyayama kolai seithaan'engalluku panam kuduthu engaloda ponnai kalyanam seithu, oru varusham aprama avale kollai seithu, accident solli thappichuttan'

MM in shock looking at deepa: deepa itha ellam unakku theriyamma'

Deepa and kalyani: ammam apppa'naangal itha T kitte verai sonnom..ana aval unga pecha meera maattaan sonna' chitti ki kuda theriyum..

MM looking at padma: padma unakku itha minaadi theriyamma?

Padma lost for words, fumbling nervously..ilai ga..ithu ellam onum nijam ilai..iva vennum solli poi solra..nammalodu T kku nalla vazhkai amaya porthu solli poraamai..

Deepa: summa pesathaergal'appo intha marri oru vishayam irukku therincha apram kooda itha ungalukku nalla samandhama theriyartha..appo ungalodu pavithra ku ippidi oru aal kooda kalyanam panni vaipela?

Padma: chi vaaye moodu'enodu pavi kuduthuvachirkaal'aval onum oru odukal magal oda ponnu kidayathu'avallu nalla purushana thaan amayavaan..\

Kalyani: appo itha nalla purushan solarael..

Padma: nee summa iru..To MM: ivangalodu pechu kekathaergal neengal..T enge thedi kandu pidika vazhi paarungol..

MM shocked : padma'unakku intha vishayam minaadi theriyumma atha sollu

Padma: kelvi patten..aana athule unmai ethum illainthu thonichu.

MM: nee yen enkite sollalai ithu pathi..namma visasarichirkilame..

Vel: ai kedu ketta muthu maanikam'etho oru kelavi sonnarthukaga nee enaiya visaaripaiya..avalo thimurua unakku'un paiyane padippikunam solli un ponne velai pesinavan thane nee'

MM looking agast at hearing about himself like this..

Kelavi: oh nee thaan antha ponnoda appav? Enapa, unakku unodu ponne pathi kavalaiye illaiya..intha aal thaan enodu magale kollai seithan..aval irukaruthaye ival naraya sitravatham panirkaan..athuku enkitte adhaaram koode irukku..enodu magal oda kanneer vazhinja ezhuthukal..

Thilaka: ai Daniel, intha kelavi ve thookoongol da'

Mama mind voice (pochu..ninaichen'nethaki antha adambarathe parthapove ninaichen..intha flash seekirama fuse aga porthu'hmmm').

Thilaka: padma, nee unodu purushante seekirama T ve thedi kootinda vara vazhiye parka sollu..intha kelavi oda vetti pechu ellam viddu..

Vel angrily to MM: enna summa irukai..kalai vidiyarthuku innum 2 mani neram thaan..po seekirima poi unodu odukali ponne kandu pidi

The men are  trying to pull the kelavi forcibly'the old lady is shouting and putting up a fight'ennaku enna anna kooda parva illai..aana naan inoru ponoda vazhkaiya kedu vara vidumaateen..

Vel: ena kelavi..unakku ena pathi theriyum illai'naan ethukum thudinjavan..unakku inoru ponnu irukka..marunthu pocha..

MM listening to all this shocked..😲

Kelavi..poda'enada panuvai..nee.  naan policeku thagaval solli thaan vandhirken..

Vel: unaku marundhu pocha kelavi'unodu modhal ponnuku aana adhe gadhi ippo unakkum, unodu rendavathu ponnukum nadakanam ninaikaraiya..

Kelavi: enna da unnala panna mudiyum'nee ellam oru aalu..chi 'and spits at him..

Vel furious..ai kelavi..unayum naan kerosene pottu kolathuta?😡

And a shocked silence follows..🤢

Behind , thru the open door someone enters'.

 

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Edited by vjayam - 11 years ago

Director sir policy a? One whole episode without TT😲😛!

OMGGG, this is soo athiradyyy.. Wow Jaya akka superb 👏👏 Really cant wait to know the restt... Keep goingg, awesomeee ⭐️

Wow Jaya Akka...too good!...waiting for the next part😊