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Good one Rishi... very well explained.. felt like watching..Clap

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Once again thank u all... If any mistakes also u can correct me
 

Episode 3

Part 4

 
Deepa and Kalyani was hiding in a distance place as per Kanagu and Joseph instruction as they don't want girls to come to the place and also for another reason if anything happens they should inform to the police.
 
The girls saw Thulsai coming out of the gate. Before they could come Thulasi got inside the sumo of Velayutham and everyone disappeared.

The girls ran to the place to see Tamil in the floor and Joseph Kanagu trying to wake him up.

 
Joseph 'Enga Kalyani konjam auto knoduvangalan.'

Kalyani, 'Etho...' she ran to bring her auto to the entrance gate. Tamil friends lifted him and taken him to the hospital.

 
Vel brought Thulasi to her house. He warned MM and Padma not to send her out of the house. He also informed about Tamil and to be careful with the man. He doesn't know Deepa and Kalyani were involved in this matter.

 

Lavanya came to the hospital and learnt what had happen and how Thulasi reacted to this situation. She felt that she had done a mistake in making her brother's mind to marry Thulasi.

 
Tamil came to conscious, he saw Lavanya checking some medicines at his right side corner table. Kanagu sitting at the coach, talking in the phone.
 
Tamil, 'Lavanya...'

Lavanya, 'Anna...' Slightly she has tears in her eyes.

Kanagu came in front of him.

Tamil, 'Thanni Lavanya thanni'

 
Lavanya immediately opened the bottle cap and Kanagu made him to sit leaning on the board. Lavanya adjust the pillow in comfortable position and made him to drink water.

 

Inspector Pandiyan (the person who use to help TA I forgot his name) came inside the room with Joseph.

Joseph,'Dei Tamilu yaar vanthirukanu paaruda.'

Tamil, 'Vanga sir. Vannnakam.

Lavanya and Kannagu wished him.

Pandiyan, 'Enna ithelam thamiz?'

Tamil, 'Sir vandu...'

Pandiyan, 'Nee onu sollavandam ellam Joseph sollitan'. Tamil looked at Joseph.

 
Pandiyan, 'Nee enna ninachutu irrukka? Nee yaara pagachtu irrukka theriyuma... Velayuthata avnna yaarunu nenachutu irruka avan oru government officer mattum illa oru criminalum kuda'. Everyone looked confusingly and shockingly. He continued, 'Avan pondatiava avan torture panni konnutan. Case podavanth avan wife oda  appa ammava marati avanga paiyanayum konuduvanu solli avngala stop panni uravita anupichutan'.
 
All were shocked to hear this. He again warned him, 'Paru Tamil avaa oruthar mela kanna vechana avanga kudumpathaiya nasampannama vidamatan. Unna nambi un anna un thangachiyaum avar ponnaiyum vitutu poi irrukkaru nee enana ippidi pannikutu irruka?'

To Lavanya, 'Un annanukum annikum sollitiaya ma'

Lavanya, 'illa sir.'

Tamil looked confused and was in a dilemma.

Doctor came to his room. Kanangu, 'Vanga dr'

Dr, 'How u are feeling now Tamil?'

Tamil, 'No problem Dr I am alright'.

Dr, 'Unkala veda ungala suthi irrukuravangathan tensed ah irrukkanga pola irruku?

Tamil smiled at the Dr. Others too gave the same expression.

Dr, 'Oru problemum illa nega ivara nalaiku discharge pannidalam. Normala irrukalam ma unga anna onum payapadatha.'

Lavanya smiled at the Dr.

 
The Dr leaves the room and after having a coffee the inspector starts to leave, Tamil, 'Sir nallaiku ungaluku phone panran sir.' Pandiyan, 'Kandipa pannu tamil naan varan.'

 

Two days after in Tamil's house. Tamil was standing in his terrace and talking in his phone 'Thank u sir. Intha uthaviya naan maraka matta.'

Other man on the phone, 'Ithu uthavi illa thambi en kadama. Nega kavalai padathinga enna nadanthalum naan maramatan.'

Tamil, 'saringa sir na appuram meet pannuvom sir.'

Man, 'sarringa thambi'.

 

Tamil comes down to his house to see Lavanya, Joseph and kanagu sitting in the hall.

All three look at Tamil.

Lavanya, 'Anna naan ella thaum pack pannitan ann...' she pauses Tamil look at her. She continued, 'Thulasi marriage mudiyara varaikkum nama Puvi anna vittuku porom.' (Puvi had started a new business in Coimbatore that is his FIL town. So he went with his wife to look after that business for few days as Pooja been taken care of Tamil and Lavanya)

Joseph, 'Dei Tamil, Lavanya payam neyamanthu thana da! Sonna kellu Tamil bankuku leave pottu kelambu.'

Kanagu, 'Amma da Tamil Innum oru varam Koda illa enna pannamudiyum. Oru rendu varam leave pottu urruku po konjam mind relax akkum.'

Lavanya looked at her brother pleadingly.

Tamil closing his eyes and shaking his head 'Seri Lavanya...'

 

Next day morning in the bus stand

Tamil carrying Pooja in one hand and wearing a double side bag on his shoulders approaching the Coimbatore bus Lavanya was following her brother. Kanagu and Joseph were carrying bags and moving to the bus.

 
Nitish, Lavanya's friend came to drop Lavanya to the bus stand. (He is a business man son and he is in love with Lavanya. He is having call taxi business.)

Tamil made Lavanya to sit at the window seat and he removed his bag and sat near her Pooja at his lap.

Nitish 'Bye Lavanya.'

Lavanya gestured him bye.

Kanagu, 'phone pannu na.'

 
The bus started too move.
 
Daniel came to his sumo and while driving he called Vel, 'Aiya avan uruku oditan'.

Vel, 'Theriyum da avan odiduvannu ivan yella oru chota. Seri va unakku perya party ah vechu irrukkan'.

Daniel, 'Thanks aiya.' Daniel was happy and drive to his boss house.

 
Vel was very happy about this and called to Thulasi house.

Padma to the phone, 'Apidingala romba santhosham. Unkka nalla manasuku ellama nallathu than nadakkum mappilai'

 

She went to thulasi room were patti and Thulasi was sitting on the bed. Looked at Padma who was much excited. Padma, 'Antha allu attan unnaku thondaravu koduthana avan ura vita oditanam'. Laughing Padma went to kitchen. Thulasi and patti looked at Padma's exist.

Thodarum...

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Nice part again.

I can picture everything...when you say Lavanya I can picture Neelima doing everything to help her brother..and it's nice how you introduced Nitesh in this way rather than through XXX.

Can't wait for tomorrow's part.

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Beautiful!
Tamil going awaya?
Maybe just an eyewash for Vels men?
Nitish in! Clap
Who is the man he spoke to? Vel's first wife's father?

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Episode 3

Part 5

Thulasi and patti looking at Padma's exists.

Patti turned to see Thulasi and said 'antha thambi appidi poguvanu theriala Thulasi. Velayuthata samharam panna Murugan anupitcha velu mathri avana azikkama thirumpathu. Seri naan koilku poittu varan nee pathirama irru'.

Thulasi, 'hmm...'

Thulasi stood near her window and thinks about patti's words and she thought 'how come patti is having this much hope on an unknown person. She thinks about the first meeting of Tamil, and saving from the accident, beach proposal, talking in her house, meeting in the park and giving hopes that she will definitely study and finally fighting with Vel and he falling on his knees when Thulasi rejects him completly. She never saw a man's eyes having this much love in it. She had seen her father's hatred eyes and Vel's lustful eyes. She just looked outside the window.

Suddenly, 'Naan unna vetutu poiduvannu nenaichiya Thulasi' Thulasi turned and searched were she hear the voice.

 

Tamil came down the bus wearing his goggles. Joseph to the conductor, 'Enna conductor vaziannupa vanthavanaiyum urukku kutitupoiduvinga pola irruku'. 

Conductor, 'Munadiya eranga vendiyathu thana pa'.

Kanagu, 'seri vidunga kochukathinga conductor'.

Tamil said bye to Lavanya and Pooja.

Lavanya, 'Anna apo apo phone panni sollu'

Tamil, 'Seri Lavanya ethana mora solluva. Nee jackaruthiya poitu va'.

 

Tamil and his friends along with Nitish moved to the car.

Tamil sitted near Nitish in the front passenger and his friends at the back.

Tamil Thinks about how he convinced his sister.

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Tamil, 'Seri Lavanya...' He continued. 'Nee thana Thulasiya anninu sonna appa Thulasi nama vettu ponnu matrithana. Namma veetu ponnuku ipadi oru kashtam vantha ippadi than vittutu povoma'

Lavanya drops her head down.

Tamil, 'Thulasi enna kalyanam pannikura illa attu matter illa ennaku oru ponna abathulerundu kappathanum avalavuthan.'

Lavanya, 'Appo na seri anna ithutan un mudivu na nee apidiya sei anna en engalamatum urukku anupura'

Tamil, 'Illa lavanya ena irruntalum Velayutham mosamanavan avana nan samalichuduvan anna unkala kamichu meratina ennala onnum panna mudiyathu'. With a pause 'Ennaku unka safety than first.'

Lavanya finally agreed. And Tamil instructed to Lavanya not to utter a word to his brother and also phoned his brother that he was moving out officially so that he had send Lavanya and pooja to Coimbatore.

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Tamil came to Joseph's friend house and few of his friends were present to start a plan.

Deepa and Kalyani came to that place and one elderly man came to the meeting.

He gave a clear plan to stop the marriage.

Tamil, 'Deepa, Kalyani neega rendu perum ennoda invol agi irrukkinga nu yaarukum theriya kudathu.'

Deepa and Kalyani, 'Seringa Sir.'

Tamil, 'appuram Deepa itha cell phona pattikita koduthudunga'. He gives a cell phone to Deepa. Deepa gets it and nodes in acceptance.

Tamil continues, 'Deepa pattikita sollunga Thulasiku koda theriyama vechuka sollunga. Na en number, Kanagu, Joseph number store panni irrukan. Ethavathu pesanum na yaarukum theriyama pesa sollunga'.

Deepa and Kalyani listened to him sincerely.

Tamil to the elderly man, 'Sir neega naan sonna matri marrupadiyum complain puthusa kodunga appuram women rights commitionukum sollunga intha matiri en ponnu pata kastatha innoru ponnu athuvum oru china ponnu padakudathunu.'

Elder man, 'Kandipa thambi. Intha vatti avan ena meratinalum nannum en kudumbamum summa vidathu.'

Tamil, 'Oru vela enga plan sothapina neenga engaluku kaikopdupinga.'

Kanagu, 'Dei Tamilu evara ippova complain kodutudalam illa'.

Tamil, 'Illa da Kanagu ippova complain panna Velayuthathoda allu palam than Pandiyan sir sonnara ava epidiyachu thapichiduvan anna ithuva last min la sonnomnu vechuka avanala onum panna mudiyathu. Appothicu epidi thapikurathunu puriyathu.'

Nitish, 'Tamil sir summa sola kudathu supara plan poduringa'.

Tamil, 'Nitish engalloda travellinguku nenga than sponsor.'

Nitish, 'Yes boss'.

Deepa, 'Tamil sir nallaiku Thulasiya directa DPI officecu varanuma scholarship vishayama'.

Tamil, 'Ohh... apadiya'. Tamil thinks.

Kalyani, 'Anna ava epidi varuva avantha avala engaiyum anuppakudathunu solitanaa'.

Tamil, 'Kavala padathinga kalyani avanaa kuttitu varamathiri panra'.

Deepa, 'Epidi'

Tamil tell the plan.

Deepa, 'Sir ithu riskana vishayammathiri theriuthu.'

Tamil, 'risk edukkunamnu mudivu panna piragu ithallam parkakudathu Deepa.'

Thodarum...

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Episode 3

Part 6

Vel and his family members comes to Thulasi's for some formalities.

Patti, 'Na enn pethi 12th mudicha vadapazani Murugan kovilku en pethi archana pannuratha vendirrunthan atha kuda pannaudamatindringala'.

Padma, 'Kelavi vaya mudu'

Vel who was in a mood, 'Irrunka vadapazani Murugan kovil thana naa Thulasiya kuttitu poran enna Muthumanikkam'.

Padma shaked her head. And signalled MM to shake. He too shake his head. Thulasi was shocked and looked at her patti.

Vel, 'Enna pattima ok va'.

Patti thinks and as if she was not liking tells 'archana panna uddana kuttitu vantidanum'.

Thilaga, 'pina en thambi ena kadathita poiuduvan.'

Others all laughed for this mockai.

In the Sumo Daniel was driving the car and Vel was sitting next to him and Thulasi at the back.

 
While driving a man wearing a black jacket with hat covering his head (like gilli Vijay jacket while jocking) his head was covered and he was driving his bike in a Zig Zag manner, not allowing the sumo to go properly. Daniel and Vel shouted at the person. But he was not at all listening. Suddenly the sumo was stopped and Daniel looking down at the keys to start. Tamil removing his cap and turns his face to look at Vel and stylishly gives a flying kiss with his two fingers and smiled at him cunningly drived his bike faster.

Vel was shocked and started to shout at Daniel 'Sekkiram Daniel sekkiram eddu avan da avan'.

Daniel, 'Yarru aiyya?'

Looked at Thulasi she was searching who it must be.

Vel, 'Antha bike karana follow pannuda'.

Daniel followed. Tamil entered to a building Daniel stopped the car and getdown of the car and Vel too got down.

Vel told secretly, 'Dei antha Tamil da.'

Daniel, 'Aiyya enna ya sollurinka naan paarkuran'.

Vel was walking near his car. Thulasi got down of the car at the other side. Vel gave an ugly smile. Thulasi didn't bothered. A flower lady came too Vel.

Lady, 'Poo vangikonga aiyya'.

Vel, 'attallam vendam po'.

Lady, 'unga rendu peroda Jodi porutham nalla irrukku vangkikonga llan.

Vel gave a romantic smile to Thulasi and asked to give.

Vel, 'enna ivalavu kamiya kodukura'.

Lady, 'enna ya ippidi solluringa parunga.' She measured the flower.

Vel, 'Ithoparu takkunu korachutta.'

Unknowingly he touched her hand the lady started to shout and call other people. Thulasi and Vel doesn't know what is happening. Everyone surrounded the lady and Vel they asked what is happen and she told that Vel talked bad words and caught her hands.

Vel, 'Konnuduvan ena velaiyaduriya.'

Lady, 'Ponna pakkathula vechukittu en kaiya pudichu izukkiriya unakku asingama illa'.

Vel, 'Ayai ayai...'

Everyone started to give tharma addi. Thulasi doesn't know what to do.

 
Suddenly A hand pulled her hand. She got a surprising shock to see Tamil (Tamil no more wearing that jacket)  he pulled her to the next building that is the DPI office.

Thulasi, 'Enna pannuringa'

Tamil didn't talk a single word he took her to the officer were Deepa and Kalyani were sitted.

Tamil to the officer, 'Sir ivanga than Thulasi parthukonga evidencellam check pannuga.'

The officer checked and gave some form to be signed.

Thulasi to Deepa and Kalyani , 'Enna di ithellam'

Deepa, 'Ellam enkaluku theriyum atha ithula sign podu'.

Kalyani forced to put the sign. After some form signs Tamil again brought her to the same place and signalled the lady to stop and he moved to the building for hiding.

Everyone leaves the place and Daniel came running seeing his boss getting Dharma addi.

Daniel, 'Enna achu aiyya'.

Ashamed Vel, 'Avan enga'

Daniel, 'Yaarume illa ethu unga bramaa than aiyaa. Naan than avan urrukku ponata parthana.'

Vel ordered Daniel to move immediately to his house leaving thulasi to her house. Since he was in pain.(u all know what archani)

 

Tamil, Deepa and Kalyani laughed at Vel's condition.

Lady, 'Enna eppidi thambi en nadippu.'

All 3 'Super!!!'

Tamil gave money for this and leaves the place.

Thodarum...



Edited by Rishi87 - 19 October 2012 at 4:15pm

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sorry for the delay Last part will be updated by today

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Part 3 and 4 are great especially part 4 with Tamil creating an act to help Tulasi and Vel character nicely written. 

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