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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Rishi... I think its either TA or Lav, twist na it can be Vel too 😃 Waiting for next part... Lovely written 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u all for the wonderful comments
Episode 3

Part 2

 

Thulasi opened the door and was shocked.

MM peeped his head to see the person and asked, 'Yaar neega'

The person wearing his bag in cross ward and holding his bag looked at MM. Raising his right hand towards his face 'Vannakkam sir. En perru Thamiz Arasu naan bank la velai parkura'. He moved his eyes slightly to see Thulasi and smiled at her secretly.

 Coming out of the shock Thulasi went to her patti and stood behind her patti uncomfortably. Patti smiled at Tamil as she remembers him saving Thulasi and she also know what happen between Tamil and Thulasi yesterday. Patti whenever she sees Tamil felt that something good is going to happen in Thulasi's life.

 MM, 'ulla vaanga.' Tamil came inside the hall. MM, 'Ukkarunga. Enna vishayama vathu irrukkigga.'

Tamil, 'ingga Thulasi kerathu yaaru sir.'

Thulasi was surprised for one second "why this man is asking as if he doesn't know about me."

MM looking at Thulasi, 'En ponnu than.'

Padma came near MM and said 'itho ivathan athukku enna venum.'

Tamil, 'Sir naan Thulasi school ku poi erruntha avanga unga ponnuku engineering padika governmentea kodutha scholarship form koduthangalam' Padma started to rotate her eyes here and there. The other three doesn't know what Tamil was talking about. Tamil continued 'Government 50% help pannuvaga mitchanthuku enga bankla irrunthu loan vakina enga banka padikurathuku pannam kodukum.'

MM with confusion 'Neega entha form pathi pesurringa.'

Before Tamil could tell Padma interfered in there talk and said 'amma atha enkkita tha kodutha antha missu.' Thulasi looked at Padma confusingly. 'kalyanam agga pora ponukku ethuku atha form ah chilichutan.'

 Tamil stood up in shock. Thulasi started to cry looking at her father and patti. Patti shouts at Padma, 'Adi pavi ithu engai yachu nadakkuma thana vantha Saraswathiya kizuthutanu vaai kusama solriya'. Thulasi cried more hearing those words from her patti. Tamil felt bad for Thulasi.

 Padma, 'Haai! Kazavi vaya mudu Saraswathi ya Saraswathi un pethi Velayuthata kalyaman pannikuta Lakshmi ya varuva.' Looking at her husband 'itho parunka iva padichu yaara kapatha pora ithuva Mohan paddichana itha vetta avan nalla parthukuvan. Ivva epadiyum innoru vettuku pogaporava thanna.' MM listened to his beloved wife blindly.

Tamil, 'Yean ivankka padicha intha vitta parthuka mattangala.'

Patti, 'Nalla kelunga thambi.'

Tamil, 'Itha parrunga nalla padikura ponnuku kalyanam panivetchu avanga lifea spoil pannathinga.'

Padma, 'Nee yaaru atha solurathuku veliya poya.'

 Tamil gave an angry look to Padma. Padma got afraid of his looks and asked her husband, 'Ena... yaa... parthutu irruka nama vettu kaa vanthu nammala moraikuran veliya annupu ya'.

MM, 'Velya ponga ennaku theriyum intha vettuku enna pannanumnu.'

 

Tamil moving out of the house got irritated with padma and MM's talk looking at thulasi said "Unga ponna baliyaka than theryum unkkaluku". Thulasi heavily crying ran to her room patti came behind her to console her.

Thodarum...

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Edited by Rishi87 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aw..so nice Rishu!
The story is so much in  the flow...
What is Tamil going to do?
So excited...

Though we all know the story, with the screenplay being different, we really look forward to what is going to happen! What do you say guys?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice job with this part what will Tamil do now??
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved yr description of someone putting the bag acros his shoulders...
a good flash back..
 
waiting for more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely surprise and nice continuation Rishi!!! keep rocking!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written Rishi.. Got reminded of old TA.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice Rishi.. Yess good old moments ah irinthichu 👏 Esp TA patthi, lovelyy...
waitingg 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
 
Thank u all for ur wonderful comments.
This part is very lengthy and full of masala in it. Hope u understand and enjoy.😊

Episode 3

Part 3
Deepa and Kalyani bought Thulasi to the park.

Thulasi, 'Ethuku di enna intha parkuku kutituvandinga?'

Kalyani, 'Onnum... illa... Thulasi summa thaaa'.

Thulasi, 'En rendu perum oru mathri irrukkinga?'

Deepa slowly, 'Thulasi..., athu.. vanthu sir than ingga varasonnaru.' Turned back and pointed distance Tamil who was approaching them.

Thulasi looked at Deepa and Kalyani for doing this.

Deepa, 'Thulasi, ellam unnoda nallathuku thandi solrrom sir solra planna kellu.'

 

Watchman came to their place and called Kalyani to take their auto from the entrance gate. Kalyani went to take her auto and Deepa too joined her leaving Thulasi and Tamil alone in the park.

 
Thulasi, 'Neega ethukuga vanthinga'

Tamil, 'Etha paru Thulasi vala valanu izukama matteruku varan ketuko. Unnoda scholarship form ku naan marupadium apply pannierukan athamatiri counceling um Deepa unkita sign vanki universityiku annupitanga so nee kandipa padikura attula entha santhakamum illa'. Thulasi felt happy but she doesn't know whether this is for good or bad.

 Tamil continued 'Aanna un appa pechaketkuranu un lifa spoil pannikatha.'

 

At a distance three men were watching their conversation one man called Vel through his phone 'Aiya Thulasi amma antha allukita marupadiyum parkla pesikituirrukkanga'

Vel angrily 'Avanga renduperaium nama guest houseuku izuthutuvanga'

Thulasi turned back not to face him and she also didn't accept his plan.

 

The goons came at the back of Tamil and secretly pointed a gun at his back saying 'Marriyathaiya prechana pannama vanthudu illa ingaiya renduperaium konuduvom'.

 
One goon neared Thulasi. She turned and was shocked to see the goon. Goon, 'Amma vozunga vanthudunga ma Velayutham aiya ungala kutikutu varasonnaru'.

Thulasi looked at Tamil and asked through her eyes 'Whether we need this?'

 
Tamil silently looked to his left to see small children playing in the park and at his right direction he saw couples and old people talking. So he decided to listen the goons.

 

Two goons took Tamil to one Sumo and Thulasi in another Sumo. Deepa and Kalyani saw this and they both got tensed and they followed the sumo and Deepa called kanaku and Joseph and said the information.

 

In Vel's guest house

The two goons pushed Tamil in the center of the hall were Vel was sitting putting his one leg above another. 'Oh ivaru tha antha herova'.

Tamil gave an angry look to him. The goons caught both his hands. Thulasi was bought to the same hall 'Vadi en azagu sundariyaa'. Thulasi looked down and was weeping.
 
Vel, 'Enna da parkuringa Daniel, avanuku kodukura adi la Thulasiya suthama maranthidanum'.

Daniel started to hit him two goons were holding Tamil. Vel came near him, 'Unnaku Thulasi ketkutta!!!' He went to Thulasi who was crying continuously seeing both her and Tamil's condition.

Vel holding her cheeks from her chin, 'Kalyanathuku konja nalla vechukittu unnaku kaadal ketkutha evan oda'.

Tamil shouted, 'Velayutham... Thulasi mela kaiya vecha Tholachuduveen!!!'. Showed his full angry face. For a second even Vel and his Goons got stun. Thulasi looked blankly at him.

 
Vel, 'Enna da pannuva ah sollu' repeating the word he came forward to him.
 
Tamil forcefully raised his leg and hits Vel. Vel falls to the floor to a distance. Thulasi was shocked to see this. Even the goons never expected Tamil will do this. Other goons ran to fallen Vel for helping him to stand up. Tamil pulled the man who is catching his right hand and he hits him. And the Left man started to hit him and he (tamil) misses it by bending down and hits the goon on his stomach. Thulasi was looking here and there tensed and she was very afraid that what is going to happen next.

 

The gun man came and pointed a gun at the back of his head. Vel angrily came near him. Tamil immediately pulled the hand of the gun man to face him and snatched the gun. And he pointed gun at Vel's forehead. Vel fearfully raised his hands up. His goons also got afraid. Tamil to the goon 'Padikkatha unnaka gun pidikatheriuthuna NCCla train ana ennaku evalavu theriyum.' He looked at Vel angrily. 'Intha mathiri nerra guna point panna sollikodu Velayutham un allugaluku, Muthukula illa'.

 
A goon who came at the back of Tamil hits him at the back of his head with a flower vas. Tamil slightly turned to the man. Thulasi came near Vel who snatched the gun from his hand.
 Thulasi shouted at Tamil, 'Vennam ithaelam ethuku ah?' she cried. 'Enna pan nallum unkkala nan Virumba mattan'.
 Tamil Turned to face her. He couldn't stand properly. Since he got a hit at the back of his neck and head. His eyes were slightly closing but he somehow managed to open his eyes to see Thulasi. Vel gave a villan smile to Thulasi and Tamil.

 

Kanagu and Joseph arrived to the place and they ran to Tamil's place calling 'Dei Tamilu'

Thulasi, 'Thulasi yoda vazkai ava appa nenacha padi than nadakkum'. She cried closing her eyes. And she continued, 'Neega en ah kapathinalo illa ena pannallum naan en appava maranthu, unka petcha kenpanu ninaichingala??? sathiyama illa'. All these times he was staring at Thulasi.

Vel felt very happy to hear this from Thulasi. Vel to his men, 'Ithuku mela evena adikkanuma vittu vankada.'

Vel holds Thulasi's hand but Thulasi felt uncomfortable and slowly she removed her hands from him. Vel smiled at her and moved from the place.

Thulasi too moved from her place and turned to see Tamil who was still looking at her. He felt dizzy and he falls on his knees but he didn't close his eyes. Joseph and Kanagu holds him. Moving out of the hall wiping her tear she cried. Tamil closed his eyes and falls on the ground.

Thodarum...

Edited by Rishi87 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good episode today with the different elements Rishi.