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Posted: 11 years ago
another good part 3 gisel...
strategic of pooja to call "pa" leaving vel to make his own calculations..
 
seriously this is good screen play too...imagining the scenes ..really nostalgic...
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
CTs pls fire your story team and pick this Goldie...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode1(Part4):
Lavanya goes to the RTO office early in the morning. She goes there and asks a clerk, "Oru vandi number oda address venum. Kadaikuma?"
Clerk, "Kadai kum kadaikum. Konjam wait pannuga." (NO! GO AWAY!)
After half an hour, she goes and asks again and get the same reply. 
After about 2 hours, "Enaga nenachitu irukeinga? Address kadaikuma illiya?"
Clerk, "Kuduka vendiyatha kudutha kadaikavendiyathu kadaika poguthu."(Indianu theriyum atha prove panna vendam)
Lavanya, "Engai ya unga officer! Kupudiya avarua"
Clerk, "Ala paru. Mudiyathu veliya po." and shoves her out and Lavanya hurries out annoyed. 
Just then Vels comes out talking to someone. Lavanya looks back and notices him and deduces he is the RTO Inspector from the people talking outside. She gets a brainwave, makes up her mind and gets into the auto and leaves. 
She goes to an internet cafe, google searches the adress of the RTO Inspector's house address and gets into another auto. This time it is Kalyani's auto. They go to the address. It is a big mansion. 
Before Lavanya enters the house gate, she sees the poster of Thulasi and Vels marriage to be held next Friday and becomes sad.
Kalyani seeing the poster herself says, "Intha nasakarain veetukum ungalukum ena samantham?"
Lavanya understanding that the auto driver knows something, "Ivanagala ungalaku theriyuma?"
Kalyani, "Yen? Ungaluku theriyatha?" with quizzing eyes.
Lavanya, "Illa intha ponna enoda annanu ku ponnu keka lamnu vanthien."😳
Kalyani all ears now comes out of the auto and looks left and right, "Oru nimisham. Inga ninu pesurathu namaku safe illa vanga vera engaiyathu poi pesalam😊". And they leave in the auto.
Auto stops at its destination. Lavanya says, "Apdi na en anni peru Thulasi!😳"
Kalyani, "Enaga? Ivalo sonna perovum ungaluku bayam vara lai ya?"
Lavanya, "Bayam varala! Mariyatha than vanthiruku! Ivangala vida oru nala jodi en anainuku kadaika matanga! Velayutham periya puliya irukalam ana oru unmaiyana ambala ethitha mana kavi than aganum. En annain ambala."

Thodarum!

Sorry no Tamil n Thulasi. Same original Thendral disease ottikichu😛.

Tamil sir ku periya build up lan iruku ena pannuraru nu papom!😉

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Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
All parts are awesome and very nicely written...Super job Gisel...Keep going! Edited by Tanu. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode1(Part5):
In the temple that night (I guess Lavanya would have updated him by now),
Tamil attends a phone call, "Ena da Joseph? Enga da iruka? Koviluku ethukuda vara sonna?"
Joseph, "Ada! Wait pannu! Vanthitai irrukein!"
Tamil, "Hm..Intha rathiri nerathila? Ivalo late a? Seri. Sekirum vada!" looking at his watch.
Joseph, "Dai! Romba salichi katha! Inaku etho ungaluku visayama naraya ponnuga varuvanga chumma sight adichitu iru.😆"
Tamil, "Ada chi. Sekiram va da!"(Sollara peicha kelkunga, Tamil sir😛)
Tamil puts his phone in his pocket and looks around. Yawning and stretching his arms and some exercise. Some kids are playing near him and a kid boy comes and hugs his legs to avoid his friends hitting and playing. He puts his hand on the lad's head and shakes his hair lovingly😊. He suddenly sees some sparkle and looks in that direction again. He can't see anything now. But something within him, tells him to go that side towards the sparkle. He looks around again. He can't see anything. He walks towards that side like he is searching for something. He comes to the temple's pond. There are millions of small deepams floating in the water. He looks at the deepams and smiles. A patti is telling her granddaughter to light the deepam and float it in water praying for a good husband and if the deepam is lit throughout the night she will be married soon with a good man. Tamil listens to this and smiles at their superstition.
He suddenly sees Thulasi draped in a peacock hued half saree and simple but exotic jewellery (Benefit of Vels being there in her life...some good clothes😛) and her patti in the pond steps. She is having deepam in her hands and glowing by the lights around her and is not looking that happy but Patti is happy. He leans forward to get a better look. Just then the kids come there and as destiny strikes, one of them pushes him unknowingly 😲. He splashes into the water not able to keep balance. Some girls whose deepams have drowned because of it, get up angrily and walk away. Thulasi whose deepam is way away doesn't notice the disturbance. 
Thulasi, "Patti! va patti pohalam. Enoda valkaiya yar alayum matha mudiyathu. Intha deepam elam waste. Epdi panni peyuthu paru. Culur kachal vanthira poguthu, va pohalam."
Patti, "Apdi elam illa ma. Enaku enum nambikai irukku👍🏼. Antha murugan ona kai vuda matan. Ama inaku nala panni peyuthu va pollam."
Both of them turn to go. Tamil ascents from the water exactly where Thulasi's deepam is. Patti is explaining to Thulasi as to keep faith in God(Turn! Turn! ). Out of sudden urge, Thulasi turns to see her deepam, just to see Deepak...sorry...Tamil behind it. Their eyes lock for a moment. Then, Thulasi turns away scared and walks away.
Tamil looks as she disappears, now love in his eyes totally, with sparkles from the deepams.
Joseph, "Dai! Tamil! Thani la enda pannura? Mela va da!"😆
Tamil is not listening, flashes of Thulasi's gaze come to him and some BGM Yuvan's music.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzL7OoN5fyY[/YOUTUBE]

Thodarum!

Over to you Hollie😊!

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Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's how you end it! With a bang😉!
Not much of a suspense element for you Hollie!😛
Thank you everyone for your support🤗!
Continue to give your support to the other writers too😊!
Vishwai, that comment was so sweet. Special thanks!
Waiting to read your part of the story guys!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very cute 3 and 4 part with made us imagine scenes...Nice end to episode 1 with part 5..Great Job Gisel!!... Edited by shubba - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well written Gisel ... keep it up!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great episodes for the beginning gisel...am imagining lovestruck TA gazing at T...good imagination...you managed to keep basic facts straight and built around them...
using RTO office, kal's auto to put lav on track and the temple visit and of course bringing in joseph too..
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Gisel awesome love love love it!!!!!  The little details and the funny dialogues are all great.  I can picture everything in my head.