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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Episode1(Part5):
In the temple that night (I guess Lavanya would have updated him by now),
Tamil attends a phone call, "Ena da Joseph? Enga da iruka? Koviluku ethukuda vara sonna?"
Joseph, "Ada! Wait pannu! Vanthitai irrukein!"
Tamil, "Hm..Intha rathiri nerathila? Ivalo late a? Seri. Sekirum vada!" looking at his watch.
Joseph, "Dai! Romba salichi katha! Inaku etho ungaluku visayama naraya ponnuga varuvanga chumma sight adichitu iru.LOL"
Tamil, "Ada chi. Sekiram va da!"(Sollara peicha kelkunga, Tamil sirTongue)
Tamil puts his phone in his pocket and looks around. Yawning and stretching his arms and some exercise. Some kids are playing near him and a kid boy comes and hugs his legs to avoid his friends hitting and playing. He puts his hand on the lad's head and shakes his hair lovinglySmile. He suddenly sees some sparkleraised eyebrows and looks in that direction again. He can't see anything now. But something within him, tells him to go that side towards the sparkle. He looks around again. He can't see anythingthinking. He walks towards that side like he is searching for something. He comes to the temple's pond. There are millions of small deepams floating in the water. He looks at the deepams and smiles. A patti is telling her granddaughter to light the deepam and float it in water praying for a good husband and if the deepam is lit throughout the night she will be married soon with a good man. Tamil listens to this and smiles at their superstition.
He suddenly sees Thulasi draped in a peacock hued half saree and simple but exotic jewellerysurprise (Benefit of Vels being there in her life...some good clothesTongue) and her patti in the pond steps. She is having deepam in her hands and glowing by the lights around herlove struck and is not looking that happy but Patti is happy. He leans forward to get a better look. Just then the kids come there and as destiny strikes, one of them pushes him unknowingly Shocked. He splashes into the water not able to keep balanceOuch. Some girls whose deepams have drowned because of it, get up angrily and walk awayOuch. Thulasi whose deepam is way away doesn't notice the disturbance
Thulasi, "Patti! va patti pohalam. Enoda valkaiya yar alayum matha mudiyathu. Intha deepam elam wasteOuch. Epdi panni peyuthu paru. Culur kachal vanthira poguthu, va pohalamOuch."
Patti, "Apdi elam illa ma. Enaku enum nambikai irukkuThumbs Up. Antha murugan ona kai vuda matan. Ama inaku nala panni peyuthu va pollam."
Both of them turn to go. Tamil ascents from the water exactly where Thulasi's deepam iskiss. Patti is explaining to Thulasi as to keep faith in God(prayingTurn! Turn! ). Out of sudden urge, Thulasi turns to see her deepam, just to see Deepak...sorry...Tamil behind itwinking. Their eyes lock for a momenthee hee. Then, Thulasi turns away scared and walks awayDay Dreaming.
Tamil looks as she disappears, now love in his eyes totally, with sparkles from the deepamsDay Dreaming.
Joseph, "Dai! Tamil! Thani la enda pannura? Mela va da!"LOL
Tamil is not listeningwave, flashes of Thulasi's gaze come to him and some BGM Yuvan's music.


Thodarum!

Over to you HollieSmile!

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Edited by Gisel - 05 October 2012 at 4:13am

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That's how you end it! With a bangWink!
Not much of a suspense element for you Hollie!thinkingTongue
Thank you everyone for your supportHug!
Continue to give your support to the other writers tooSmile!
Vishwai, that comment was so sweet. Special thanks!
Waiting to read your part of the story guysDay Dreaming!

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Very cute 3 and 4 part with made us imagine scenes...Nice end to episode 1 with part 5..Great Job Gisel!!...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Well written Gisel ... keep it up!!!Clap

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Great episodes for the beginning gisel...am imagining lovestruck TA gazing at T...good imagination...you managed to keep basic facts straight and built around them...
using RTO office, kal's auto to put lav on track and the temple visit and of course bringing in joseph too..
 
 

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Wow Gisel awesome love love love it!!!!!  The little details and the funny dialogues are all great.  I can picture everything in my head.

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Wow Gisel...Superb parts. Loving every bit of it. Cute and beautiful ah irinthichu. Esp TA, Lav and Thuls scene Big smile Wonderful, waiting for others Smile

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great start gisel .. looking forward to hollie's continuation. 

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