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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged

Both the parts are super cute Gisel ... and I can almost imagine T/T colliding with each other ...

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Super gisel..part 2 especially great creating thinking...waiting for part 3

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged

Two parts are well written Gisel!!...

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Gisel

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Episode1(Part3):

Velayutham, "Enga poiruntha? Poi sollathe." it wasn't me

MM looks at everything confused. Ouch

Padma looks worried and angry. Angry

Thilaga, "Dai! Bayam paduthathe da. Inga than engaiyathu poiruppa. Nee vama. Romba time aiyduchu vanga veetuku kalambula.

Everyone leave.

Velayutham asks his henchman, "Dai inga pakathila ena lam iruku? Ethavuthu ice cream parlor iruka?"

He replies, "Athalam theriyathu. Itha kovil ku thotu pinadi oru parku iruku; parku ka antha pakam main road. Main road la irukalam. Ouch

Velayutham, "Park a? Um.." looking even more suspicious worried

. They get into the car. Velayutham sits next to Thulasi in the back seat making her feel uncomfortable waiting

Tamil is starting the bike. Pooja climbs behind Tamil.

Lavanya, "Anna! Nejamavai antha poonu unaku super jodi na! Rendu perumum pakka made for eachother mathiri iruthein ga theriyuma.

Tamil, "Ama thaiya. Maru padiyum thodangathe. Ivalo nerum polambanathu pathatha? Un polambal thangama than veetuku poram. Vandila eru!

Lavanya sulks and gets in the bike, "Illa anna..."

Tamil, "Ai! Vettuku pogurathu veraikum ethuvum pessa kudathu. Puthu videocam vangi kuduthathu en thapu. Antha ponnu peru kudatheriyathu...ithula anni am...

They drive away. Velayutham's car comes opposite. Camera shifts...Tamil's bike..Vel's car...Tamil's bike...Vel's car...*Bang* I don't want to see

Tamil, "Youv! Ena ya vandi ottura." Three of them get of the bike. Shocked

Tamil goes to fight with the driver. Velayutham annoyed at the disturbance comes out. He notices the ice cream stains, is shocked nail biting

, becomes angry and holds Tamil by the collar. Pooja gasps, "Pa.." I don't want to see

Tamil, "Enaga thappa nenga pannitu, en collar a pidikireinga!"

Vels notices Lavanya and Pooja and leaves him assuming they are a family, "Poo da! Vena adi pattu sagathe."

He turns to look at Thulasi. She peeps out Embarrassed

. Vel fumes with anger Angry

but Thulasi doesn't see Tamil frustrated

, "Vandiya edu da" to his driver and gets in the car.

Tamil adjusts his shirt. Lavanya notices Thulasi in the car as the car leaves. Without a second doubt, she takes her new videocam and shoots the number plate of the car applause

Lavanya nags her anna, "Nan mudivu panitein avunga than nama veetu marumaga, yenoda anni!"

Tamil, "Anni ya? Yaru?", realising what she is going to say, "Ama thaiya. Antha ponnu inga enga vantha? LOL

Lavanya, "Nee paka liya? Antha car la than iruthanga. feeling beat up

Tamil looks at the car dumbstruck, which is fading by the horizon Embarrassed

Lavanya waves her hand in front of his face, " Hello anna! Antha car poi 5 nimisham achu. Vandiya edu." ROFL

Tamil, "Ada chi. Vaa. Summa. Ena vechu comedy pannalana unnaku thukam varathei. Tongue

He looks at the bike mirror and adjusts his hair, smiles to himself. hee hee

Lavanya(to herself), "Nalaikai RTO office poi intha vandi number yaaru odathunu pakanum. Approm easy a anni ya kadipidichiralam. Annain ku theirya vendam" Shocked

Thodarum!

I don't like the idea of Lavanya going alone to the RTO office!
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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged

another good part 3 gisel...

strategic of pooja to call "pa" leaving vel to make his own calculations..

seriously this is good screen play too...imagining the scenes ..really nostalgic...

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viswai123

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged

CTs pls fire your story team and pick this Goldie...

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Episode1(Part4):

Lavanya goes to the RTO office early in the morning

. She goes there and asks a clerk, "Oru vandi number oda address venum. Kadaikuma?

Clerk, "Kadai kum kadaikum. Konjam wait pannuga

." (NO! GO AWAY!)

After half an hour, she goes and asks again and get the same reply.

After about 2 hours, "Enaga nenachitu irukeinga? Address kadaikuma illiya?

Clerk, "Kuduka vendiyatha kudutha kadaikavendiyathu kadaika poguthu.

"(Indianu theriyum atha prove panna vendam)

Lavanya, "Engai ya unga officer! Kupudiya avarua

Clerk, "Ala paru. Mudiyathu veliya po

." and shoves her out and Lavanya hurries out annoyed.

Just then Vels comes out talking to someone. Lavanya looks back and notices him

and deduces he is the RTO Inspector from the people talking outside. She gets a brainwave, makes up her mind and gets into the auto and leaves

She goes to an internet cafe, google searches the adress of the RTO Inspector's house address and gets into another auto

. This time it is Kalyani's auto. They go to the address. It is a big mansion.

Before Lavanya enters the house gate, she sees the poster of Thulasi and Vels marriage to be held next Friday and becomes sad

Kalyani seeing the poster herself says, "Intha nasakarain veetukum ungalukum ena samantham?

Lavanya understanding that the auto driver knows something, "Ivanagala ungalaku theriyuma?"

Kalyani, "Yen? Ungaluku theriyatha?" with quizzing eyes.

Lavanya, "Illa intha ponna enoda annanu ku ponnu keka lamnu vanthien." Embarrassed

Kalyani all ears now comes out of the auto and looks left and right, "Oru nimisham. Inga ninu pesurathu namaku safe illa vanga vera engaiyathu poi pesalam Smile

". And they leave in the auto.

Auto stops at its destination. Lavanya says, "Apdi na en anni peru Thulasi! Embarrassed

Kalyani, "Enaga? Ivalo sonna perovum ungaluku bayam vara lai ya?

Lavanya, "Bayam varala! Mariyatha than vanthiruku! Ivangala vida oru nala jodi en anainuku kadaika matanga!

Velayutham periya puliya irukalam ana oru unmaiyana ambala ethitha mana kavi than aganum

. En annain ambala

Thodarum!

Sorry no Tamil n Thulasi. Same original Thendral disease ottikichu.

Tamil sir ku periya build up lan iruku ena pannuraru nu papom!
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Edited by Gisel - 05 October 2012 at 4:12am

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All parts are awesome and very nicely written...Super job Gisel...Keep going!

Edited by Tanu. - 03 October 2012 at 9:37pm

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