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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
(((SmileSmilewe present a new story...hope so u guyzz will like it... and plss do give us feed back w'll like to ...)))

'SAUZ WALA LOVE"...a short story on TAAREY

INDEX ::

PG 1--- PART 1 n 2
PG 3--- PART 3 n 4
PG 4--- PART 5
PG 5--- PART 6, 7, 8
PG 7--- PART 9
PG 8--- PART 10
PG 10--- part 11
PG 11--- PART 12 ,13, 14

CHARACTER; TAANI SHEKHWAAT; REYANSH SINGHANIA 

TAANI sitting in a bench outside the d DANCE camp .

 achanak rey aata haii
 
R-  tum soi nhi ab takSleepy                                   
T-  ap vii toh nhi soye                                     
R( in his mind) tum sone dogi tab na.            
T- Kuch kaha apne?                                         
R- nil aur bharat ke kharate...                         
T( smiles) vai so gaye?                                    
R- use toh mauka chhiye sharon kii sapne dekh  rha hoga , khair jab hum dono ko neend nhi aa  rhi haii walk pe chaale.                                 
Tt- walkpe?                                                    
R- bohot beautiful haii jaga raat mein aur khobsurat lagta haii.                                       
T- chhaliye.                                                         rey and taani walking,
rey tells taani- 'aisa koi rule nhi haii kii walk karte karte baat nhi kar sakte.                       
T- kya bolu                                                     
R- thinks for a while, jodhpur ke bare mein   
T- smiles, jodhpur! bohot alag haii mumbaii se, reth ka sahar, nachti hui mor ka sahar, apne kabhi mor dekha haii, rey was absorbed in taanis story, he jst nodded his head in no.     

T- mein chhat pe ja kar dekh ti thi vaise toh barsaat me mor nach te haii bohot rarely woh nazara dekh no ko milta haii                           

R- well barsaat ke liye toh mumbaii famous haii yahaan barasaat aksaar mohabbat mein rang bharta haii                                                                   
taani feels a little blushy blushy                     
R- taani! tum seek sawal puchho?                  
t- kahiye na.
r- tum itne raat ko mere sath akelii chali aayee shivam ko pata chalega woh mind nhi karega.                                                  
taani's face turned pale she feels hurt and turns her face, wipe out her tears and turn bk 

T- rey aap hamesha shivam ko beech mein kyon le aate haii                                                     

R- beech meinto main hoon                           
T- mujhe jaana chhaiye plss wapass chale mujhe neend aa rhii hai .                                                                                                           
she starts running guilty rey follows her     
R- taani stop! ruko taani! taani taani stops       
t- aap kabhi nhii samaj sakte kyon apke 1 bar bulane par mein chali aayee.                            

R- sorry im sorry pata nhi kaise hurt kr deta hoon tumhe                                                      

T -hurt toh kr te haii aap, phir vii mein aaj kehna chhatii kii kyun mein aap ke saath gayii, bcoz i trust u, mein khud ko aap ke saath safe mehesoos krtii hoon par kyon aap na samajenge, nhii aap chhate samaj na.                                                                                                       
she runs towards her room                   
R- stands alone perplexed and hurt...              
to be continued 







(this part of the story was originally posted by shirsha...i am posting it on her behalf...)


Edited by piya.7565 - 04 October 2012 at 1:44am

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CONTINUED///////////


PART-2

Rey cudnt move frm his position...he was confused ki woh kya react kare...

rey in his mind...

(kyun uski baatein mujhe itna hurt kar gayi...???Broken Heart
kyun main hamesha use hurt kar deta hoon...???Broken Heart
kyun main Jab bhi uske baare sochta hoon to
 shivam ka image saath aa jata hai,,,and main apna gusse ko controll nahin kar pata...???Censored

shit! man...i jst wanted spend some time with her...abhi to woh despoEvil Smile bhi Taani saath nahin tha...i messed it up..again...Cry

maine itne baar use hurt kiya hai pata nahin taani mujhe maaf bhi kar paayegi..ki nahin...)

saying this he bangs his hand on the chair nearby...Dead

Rey apne room wapas chala jata hai...all depressed...and puri raat so nahi pata and yehi sochta hai...kal kaise bhi karke he has to talk to taani...nd maafi mangega... 
and

R says-" main use dukhi nahin dekh sakta...i have to bring her smile back...haste hue kitni achi lagti hai...hoe cud i hurt her..."

fir Taani ke kwabo me kho jata hai...and praying kal ki subah sab gd news layegi and sab thik ho jaega...




to be continued...

(written by me)


Edited by piya.7565 - 30 September 2012 at 9:28am

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Awesome job, plz continue soon

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CONTINUED///////////

PART-2

Rey cudnt move frm his position...he was confused ki woh kya react kare...

rey in his mind...

(kyun uski baatein mujhe itna hurt kar gayi...???Broken Heart
kyun main hamesha use hurt kar deta hoon...???Broken Heart
kyun main jab bhi uske baare sochta hoon to shivam ka image saath aa jata hai,,,and main apna gusse ko controll nahin kar pata...???Angry

shit! man...i jst wanted spend some time with her...abhi to woh despo bhi Taani saath nahin tha...i messed it up..again...Cry

maine itne baar use hurt kiya hai pata nahin taani mujhe maaf bhi kar paayegi..ki nahin...)

saying this he bangs his hand on the chair nearby...

Rey apne room wapas chala jata hai...all depressed...and puri raat so nahi pata and yehi sochta hai...kal kaise bhi karke he has to talk to taani...nd maafi mangega... 
and

R says-" main use dukhi nahin dekh sakta...i have to bring her smile back...haste hue kitni achi lagti hai...hw cud i do dt??"

fir Taani ke kwabo me kho jata hai...nd prays ki kal ki subah sab thik kar dega...
 




to be continued...if u guyss appreciate it only dn we will post the nxt part...

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@piya.7565 never saw u before welcome Hug
WOW YAAR Clap I was reading it on FB IT IS ACTUALLY QUITE AMAZING!!! HOPE WE GET SOME WAT LYK THIS AS I WANT ALOT OF TAAREY HOPING FOR SUM THING GREAT   Embarrassed waiting for the UPDATE Big smile

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