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awesome cs
and great start
 
cont soon
 
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Its Awesome. Awww Poor Samrat. I hope sajan gets united. Plz continue.Hug
Thanks for the pm.


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awesome update loved it cont soonEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by sajan_swaron

Originally posted by pakpearl

Doll.it's simply awesome...u'll have 2 continue it,dear !!!!!! Tongue u know I've insisted u many a time Smile..Sajan r my passion n i love 2 read sajan FICTION !!!!

awieee di 
i love you sooo muchHug
ur asking people to comment on this
thank you
yes di for u ill definitely continue this one
thanx  for pm,fauzi api Smile it's amazing,lalitaSmile

Edited by chulbuli94 - 24 October 2012 at 1:53am

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note:
heyya guys thank you sooo much for this amazing response
i didnt expect people to like this one coz im really pathetic at love stories coz i dont believe in them in real life
but wanted to try my hand at our januable sajan
sorry for not being able to reply to each of your comments individually
i couldnt control my excitement
so im here with the next update
scroll down for the update

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This update is specially for fauzia di and charmi who wanted me to continue this ff and kept asking me to update :)

PART 2:

Introduction of new characters:

Aditya: gunjan's best friend and the heart throb of red field

Tiya: a wanna be in the college who hates gunjan

After a year

IN RED FIELD COLLEGE

GUNJAN!!! GUNJAN!! GUNJAN!!!

We see a crowd cheering and everybody was cheering for our very own sweet heart gunjan bhushan :D

Person 1: dekhna iss baar bhi gunjan hi jeetegi

Person 2: pata hai yaar she is the champion na

Person 1: pata nahi yeh adi hamesha challenge kyu rakhta hai, jab use pata hai ki gunjan kabhi nahi harti

Person 2: arre voh dono toh best friends hai yaar hamesha unke beech mein nok jokh hoti rehti hai

Arre yeh sab chod na chal match dekhte hai yeh match kuch zyaada hi interesting hogaya hai

In the basket ball court we see a guy and girl competing each other

The girl is gunjan and the guy is aditya- gunjans best friend

So here gunjan made one more basket and yippee she won the match

Gunjan: kyu bachu tu mujhe harayega

Sapne mein bhi mat sochna

Gunjan ko basket ball mein koi nahi hara sakta toh agli baar bet lagane se pehle 100 baar soch lena

Adi: oye zyaada nautanki mat kar samjhi main jan much ke har gaya taaki tu apna sada hua sad face leke pure college mein na ghoome

Gunjan: hawww apni harr maan nahi sakta ulta yeh keh raha hai ki tu mujh pe daya dikhaa raha hai jhootey kahi ke

Aaj ke baad mujhse baat mat karna

Adi: haan toh main bhi konsa mara ja raha hoon tujhse baat karne ke liye

And they walk out in diff. directions

Everybody: oh gosh inka phirse ladai hogaya ab kya hoga

Person 1: don't worry agle paanch minute mein yeh dono phirse baat karne lagenge

In the girls locker room

Gunjan: samajhta kya hai apne aap ko mujhse harr gaya aur mujhpe hi uchal raha hai

In the boys locker room

Adi: huh chipkali kahiki hamesha mujhse ladti hai

Gunjan: ab jo hogaya so hogaya

Mujhe uss se iss tarah baat nahi karna chahiye tha after all ab hum best friends jo hai

Adi: galti meri hi hai main harr gaya lekin phir bhi uske saath ladai kar li

Gunjan n adi: mujhe use jakar sorry bolna chahiye

Both  of them walk to meet each other and clash into each other near the basket ball court

G n A: sorry

And both of them burst out laughing

G: kya yaar hum hamesha bacho ki tarah behave karte hai pata nahi itna kyu ladte hai

A: tujhe pata nahi ladne se rishta aur gehra hota hai

Tere bina main ek minute bhi nahi reh sakta par phir bhi tujhse ladta hoon

Chal ab gale lag ja ab toh hum phirse normal hogaye haina

Gunjan gives him a friendly hug, they break their hug andů

G: chal class ke liye late hojayenge

A: cupcake mujhe class ke liye nahi jaana plzzz aaj toh mujhe mukth karde

G: tu na bilkul samrat ke jaisa hai

And then she realizes what she said and gets lost

A: tu use abhi bhi bhula nahi paayi na

Ab toh tu bilkul perfect hogayi haina toh uske paas vapas kyu nahi chali jaati

Teri puri family tere dost sab vaha hai par phir bhi tu yaha aise akele reh rahi hai

Gunjan didn't want to talk further so changes the topic

Adi understood so he didn't prolong it further because her happiness was his priority

G: acha kisna kaha main akeli hoon tu haina mere pass mere bhai jaisa best friend

Ek minute kahi tu mujhe chodke chale jaana ka plan toh nahi bana raha agar aisa haina toh main tujhse baat nahi karungi

A: awww cupcake main tujse dur reh sakta hoon kya

Main tujhe kabhi chodke nahi jaunga teekh hai

Ab toh muskura meri behen jaisi best friend :P

Gunjan gives her million dollar volt smile

A: ab lag rahi hai ki tu meri cupcake hai

Chal ab tujhe class ke liye late nahi ho raha

G: haan jaldi chal

They both leave for class

In excel college

The gang is in the canteen

N: mayank ab toh apne kitab side pe rakh do hum sab yaha maza kar rahe hai aur tum hoki kitab padh rahe ho

M: nupur tumhari problem kya hai meri ab kuch samay baad class hai

Uske liye prepare toh karlu varna students ko kya sikhaunga

Benji: arre nupur apne boring pati ko chodo na

Hum hi maza karte hai

N: haan benji tum sahi keh rahe ho

Then she sees samrat walk past the canteen and calls him

N: samrat kaha ja rahe ho

Idhar aao sabhi yaha hai

Yeh baat alag hai ki mayank hamare saath hote hue bhi hamare saath nahi hai :P

Par hum sab toh haina

 Samrat comes and joins them

Diya: toh Sammy kaha the tum kitne din hogaye tumhara chehra tak nahi dekha

Benji: dia sweetie agar tum class mein apna darshan dena ka kasht karogi toh tumhe sam nazar ayega

Benji and uday hi 5 each other

And then diya stares at uday angrily

Uday: dids maine kya kiya aisa toh benji bol raha tha na

Main apne liya kuch khan eke liye laata hoon and he escapes from there

Benji tries to run but dia catches him

Benji: ab toh bhagwan ki meri zindagi bacha sakte hai

Dia: benji tumů

Samrat: hey relax diya its ok

Haan voh main classes main thoda busy tha phir library mein tha notes bana raha tha

Nupur: samrat kya hogaya hai tumhe

Tum toh aise kabhi bhi nahi the

Jab dekho kitabon ke saath hote ho

M: haan nupur acha haina ki yeh sudhar gaya hai

Varna har koi tumhari tarah nahi hota :P

N: tumhe toh main baad mein dekh lungi

Aur samrat tum

Gunjan chali gayi iska yeh matlab toh nahi kit um apni zindagi jeena chod do

Agar aaj voh yaha hoti toh tumhe aise dekh ke apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karti

Apni zindagi jeena mat chodo, kam se kam apni chashmish ke liye toh pehle vala samrat ban jao

S: yeh nahi hi sakta nupur

Jab samrat ki chashmish hi nahi toh samrat pehle ki tarah kaise hosaka hai

Samrat gets up and leaves the canteen

M: nupur tumhe pata haina ki samrat gunjan ka naam sunte hi udaas ho jaata hai phir kyu tumne

N: mayank mujhe bhi samrat ki fikar hai issliye use samjhane ki koshish kar rahi hoon

Pata nahi gunjan aise achanak hume bina bataye kaha chali gayi

Pata nhai meri nanhi si gudiya kaise hogi

M: tum chinta mat karo nupur ek din sab taakh hojayega

Dekhna hume hamari gunjan jald hi mil jayegi

And embraces her into a soothing hug

Samrat was in the music room

S: kyu chashmish kyu chodke chali gayi mujhe

KYU????????

Vapas aajao chashmish vapas aajao

Kitna dhundhne ki koshish ki par tum kahi nahi mile

Kya tum mere bina jee pa rahi ho

Main toh nahi jee pa raha tumhare bina

Phir yeh judai kyu

Jab hum dono ek dusre se itna pyaar karte hai toh kyu chali gayi mujhe chodke chashmish

Sabhi mere saath hai par tumhare bina main kitna akela hogaya hoon

Mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai chashmish plz vapas aajao

Ek din toh main tumhe dhundke rahunga

Aur uske baad tumhe apne aap se kabhi bhi durr jaane nahi dunga

Yeh samrat shergill ka apne chashmish se vaada hai!!

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