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SAJAN SS: JAB DO DIL MILEY!!! PART 12 UPDATED!! (Page 19)

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solid update yaar!!!!!!!!!simply awesome!!!!
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Ab kya bolun?
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OMG Lali its awesome.
So so beautiful and epic Heart
The way u described the entire scene and then their emotions wonderfully described. Loved it so so much.
MJHT ki yaad a gayi yaar. Meri drama queen LOL
No its was really fantastic. Very very happy that u united Sajan. Plz continue soon. Embarrassed
 
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PART 11:
         

I would like to dedicate this part to my dearest and best di, my fauzia di. Happy Birthday di, love you loads, hope you have a nice time reading this update.  Embarrassed

They went on and on with their talks not realizing that they were standing under the rain and were totally wet. They forgot about the world, this is what happens when two people lost in love meet after a long time. They can only feel each others presence and totally detach themselves from the rest of the world.

Suddenly something stircked in gunjans mind. Her face immediately lit up, there was some spark in her eyes, and she had her own unknown plans. Suddenly she got up from his arms and by then the rain subsided. Samrat was confused by her sudden action.

S: kya hua chashmish?

G: samrat abhi time kya hua hai?

S: kya hua chashmish achanak tumhe time ki chinta kyu satane lagi, mere saath acha nai lag raha kya?

G: agar aisi baat phirse ki toh main tumse zindagi bhar baat nahi karungi. Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho samrat ki mujhe tumhare saath acha nahi lagta.

S: sorry chashmish

G: ab yeh sab chodo and mujhe batao ki abhi kya time ho raha hai?

Samrat was looking at her confusingly, she thought that it was useless asking him and she caught hold of his wrist and checked the time.

G (to herself): abhi bhi kuch time baaki hai

Saying so she ran away from that place shouting,

G: samrat tum please yahi rukna main abhi aati hoon

Samrat watched her retreating figure

S: chashmish kaha ja rahi ho?

S (to him): yeh chashmish ko achanak se kya hogaya?

Gunjan on the other hand was searching for something.

G: mil gaya, ab samrat ko uska surprise deti hoon

Gunjan starts walking towards the place where samrat is waiting for her.

S: chashmish kya hua, tum kaha chali gayi thi, tumhare haath mein kya hai, tum use chupa kyu rahi ho, chashmish tum chup kyu ho, kuch toh bolo and he went on with his never ending questions.

Gunjan smiled seeing samrat like this.

G: saans toh lo samrat, tumhare saare sawal ke jawab tumhe mil jayenge.

She slowly brings her hands in front of her chest which were holding a bunch of red roses.

S: chashmish yeh'

G: ssshhh and she places her finger on his lips

G: ab sirf main bolungi aur tum sunoge.

Samrat aaj ka din hamari zindagi mein bohot khaas hai, aaj hum phirse mile, hamare dil phirse jud gaye, hamari zindagi ke darwaze pe khushiyaan phirse dastak dene lagi. Log kehte hai ki aaj pyaar karne valo ka din hai, pata nai logo ne duniya ke saamne pyaar karne ke liye sirf ek hi din ki permission kyu di. Jab tum mere saath hote ho ek din kya meri zindagi ke hare k pal mein pyaar hota hai, main puri duniya ke saamne yeh qubool karti hoon ki main tumse behintehaan mohobatt karti hoon. Mujhe ek din ki zaroorat nahi hai tumpe pyaar barsane ke liye, main toh voh har pal karti rahungi jab tak iss dil mein jaan hai. Mujhe sirf yeh ek din ki zaroorat nahi hai yeh izhar karne ke liye ki mujhe tumse pyaar hai.  Par hamare zindagi mein hamesha valentine's day ke din hi milna likha hai, hamare jadge ko suljhane ka din aur nayi pyaar ki shuruvat ka din. Jab jab hum khush the, jab jab humne saath mein yaadein banana shuru kiya uss din hamesha valentines day hi hota hai. Yeh bhagwan ka ishara hai ya kismat ki khel mujhe nahi pata mujhe sirf itna pata hai ki yeh sab hume yeh samjhane ke liye hai ki hamari zindagi mein sirf pyaar ke liye jagah hai. Mere liye tumhare saath bitaya hua har ek pal khaas hai, par aaj ka yeh din mere liye aur bhi zyaada khaas hai. Abhi valentine's day khatam hone mein kuch samay baaki hai and mujhe inn chan lamho ko tumhare liye khaas banana hai.

Gunjan goes down on her knees and extends her palm and says,

"Looking into your eyes

Every fear in my life, far away it flies

Drowning in the ocean of emotions

To my every problem I find a solution

Being incapable of expressing my heart's desire

My silence sets my life on fire

In times of confusion

I always remember your confession

You're always with me like my shadow

My darkness, my emptiness your love will swallow

To replace all my frowns

You become an adorable clown

My life, my sunshine

Will you be my valentine?"

Samrat was awestruck seeing his chashmish propose him for the first time. He held his hand in hers and made her stand and engulfed her in a bone crashing hug.

S: yes chashmish I will be your valentine not only for tonight but every valentine in the forth coming times in our happy future.

They were lost in the magic of love that overcast its presence in their life for the infinite time and some irritating voices disturbed their romance.

N: vaah kya khoob kaha gunjan ne, tum sabka kya kehna hai?

D: voh toh hai nupur, hamari doll mein bohot badlav aagaya

M: gunjan ka toh pata nai par samrat ko dekho koi kaise khushi se uska chehra chamak raha hai

A: aap log sirf samrat ko dekh rahe ho, koi meri cupcake ko bhi toh dekho kaise khushi ke karan Sharma rahi hai

S: arre yaar tum sab hume tang karna bandh karo, hume akele mein thoda time bhi nahi mil sakta kya and he puts a sad face

Su: bhai aap gunjan bhabhi ke saath jitna time chahe utna lelo par hume bhi toh unse milna tha, ab aap thodi der ke liye gunjan bhabhi ko bhul jao.

A: aur mujhe bhi toh tumse milna tha, cupcake se tumhare baare mein sun sun ke pak gaya hai, seriously man itna baat karti hai kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai ki uske mooh pe tape chipka doon

G: hawww adi tu mere baare mein aisa sochta hai, jab main samrat ker baare mein baat karti hoon tu pak jaata hai, tujhe toh main nahi chodungi

Adi senses something wrong and starts running before gunjan could stop speaking and the minute gunjan saw him running she starts chasing him. They run almost all over the college and the students seeing them fight again sigh wondering when they will grow up. But it was a treat to watch their cat and mouse fight, they looked more adorable. The gang who witnessed their fight for the first time couldn't help but laugh.

Now gunjan was tired she couldn't run anymore. Aditya came near her and held his ears and mouthed a small sorry but she was his cupcake she wouldn't forgive him so easily. When she refused to forgive him he left her and this increased gunjan's anger. Before she could shout she saw him on the stage.

A: hey girls tum mein se kaun meri madad karega?

All the girls' scremed "Main, main, main"

Tiya left no opportunity to get close to adi; adi left tiya and asked the other girls to come on the stage. Gunjan was confused what was happening. The gang came to her and before they could initiate any conversation they heard a magical voice.

Adi started singing

"I wanna make it up to you, pretty baby
Make it up to you.
I wanna see you smile
I wanna see you smile
I wanna make it up to you.

O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan (2)
Teri ada (2)
Jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana (2)
Mein hoon fida (2)

Gusstaki maaf karde
Abb tho insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna tho maan le
o

Jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de (4)

Come on smile now' (2)

Gussa tera jhootha
Jhoothi moothi berukhi hai
Jaanu main to jaanu
Teri naa mein haan chupi hai (2)

Aye sanaam na kar sitam
Tujhko khuda ka vasta

hey..
Gusstaki maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
ho..

Jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de (4)

Come on smile now'"

 

A: like sab jaante hai main aur cupcake bohot zyaada ladte hai, par hamara rishtra hi aisa hai. Cupcake meri best friend se zyaada meri behen ki tarah hai, ab bhai behen ko tang nahi karega toh kaun karega

As soon as he said that the crowd cheered with their claps and gunjan had a smile on her face.

A: cupcake main promise kata hon ki main tujhse hamehsa ladai karunga and gunjan starts laughing. Aaj meri cupcake ke life ka bohot important din hai, use voh mil gaya jo use sabse pyaara hai.

Gunjan looks at samrat and blushes.

A: cupcake thanks for being my best date ever, par ab mujhe kissi aur ko dhundna padega, ab jab samrat aagaya tum kyu meri date banke jaogi and he puts a sad face.

Gunjan goes on the stage

G: bhale hi samrat mera pyaar hai par tu meri zindagi ka hissa hai, main tujhe kissi aur ka date banne nahi dungi jab tak tujhe sahi ladki nahi mil jaati varna tu tina mina rina jaise ladkiyon ke saath ghumega and tu bigad jayega and they both laugh out loud.

Aditya and gunjan hug each other and gunjan says I love you adi, thanks for being the best brother ever.

A: love you too cupcake, ab please mujhe hug karna chod de tu bohot moti hogayi hai agar kuch der aur tune mujhe hug kiya toh meri saans ruk jayegi

G: tu nahi sudrega na

A: kabhi nahi

And they laugh and along with them the entire gang laughs.

N: aditya ne hamari gunjan ka kitna khayal rakha na, use akelapn labhi mehsoos nahi hone diya.

S: haan nupur tum sahi keh rahi ho, pehli baar jab maine dekha ki gunjan kissi aur ladke ko hug kar rahi thi mujhe bohot gussa aaya, main galat samajhne laga, mujhe aditya bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya par aaj meri chashmish ke life mein job hi khushiyaan hai voh sirf aditya ke karan hai. Main uska ehsaan kabhi nahi bhul sakta

Aditya and gunjan come down from the stage

A: kissi ne ehsaan ki baat ki kya? Sorry boss agar cupcake ke saath rehna ehsaan hai toh please main uski zindagi se dur chala jaata hoon

S: aisa nahi hai, tumne itne time tak meri chashmish ka khayal rakha'

A: agar voh tumhari chashmish hai toh voh meri behen hai aur mera farz hai ki main apni behen ka khayal rahku. Please dubara ehsaan ki baat mat karna kyonki agar main iss ehsaasn ki list banane lagunga toh tum mere inn ehsaasano ko kabhi chukka nahi paoge.

S: thanks aditya and he hugs him

Gunjan smiles widely seeing the two most important men of her life developing a new bond between them.

N: gunjan samrat ko dekhna bandh hogaya toh apni di se milne ka kasht karo and she fakes anger.

Gunjan now knows that shes in for big trouble. Ab voh kaise apni di ko manayegi jinse voh apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karti hai, kaise unhe samjhayegi ki voh unhe bina bataye kyu chali gayi, kaise karegi voh sab kuch???

Iske liye mera agla update zaroor padna :P :D

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Edited by BusyIndivaBee - 17 February 2013 at 10:10am

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Awesome update
Loved the way gunjan propose samrat.He must be on 7th cloud at that time LOL. n that poem was amazing no.doubt. :)
Hehe kabab me haddi gang.
Gunjan adi part was really sweet..:)
Woo now gunjan have to manofy nupur lol
Waiting for next part
Update soon

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 22 February 2013 at 8:22am
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amazing update,lali..i m relivingMJHT through it !!!!!
Samrat isso sweet...
OMG...Gunjan proposing SammyLOL...nice for a changeWink
 
Thanx for dedicating this part to me Big smile


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