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M sorry kritz...:'(...Kriyam os..UPDATED PG 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm bore ho rahi thi so yeh likh rahi hun...

~~M SORRY KRITZ~~

It was the dance camp...louians had won it...taani and rey had a confession...sharon realized her mistake and had decided to make it up to swayam...all were in a rehersal hall...taani was upset...swayam was leaning to the mirror...all were celebrating when someone walked in...

Louians *shout*-KRIA!!..

Swayam looked up...taani gulps...kria gave the louians a weak smile and went to swayam...she gave him a box...

Sharon-Why the hell are you...

Swayam showed sharon his hand indicating her to be quiet...but sharon was about to say when taani held her hand...

Taani-Chup rahiye sharon abhi...
Sharon shocked...
Swayam-Kya hain yeh???...
Kria-Tumhe maar daalne ka bomb...khologe toh mar jaoge..
Swayam rolls his eyes...
Kria-Dekh lo khudh...shayad your forgetting...tumhaari kuch reasponsibilties hain mr.swayam shekhawat...
Swayam-I know meri reasponsibilities kya hain kritz!!...
Kria-Accha se pata hain na  tumhe toh...
Taani-Dekhiye kria aap bhai se aise nahi...
Kria-Shut up taani!!!!...speak when your spoken to..
Taani looks down...
Rey-Tum hoti kaun ho...
Kria-Voh tumhaari girlfriend hone se pehle meri kuch lagti hain...

All shocked..swayam opens the box and he saw few things...a tear rolls down his cheek...

Swayam-You cant do this...
Kria-Agar tumhe kuch parwa nahi hain toh mujhe bhi...
Swayam-What was my fault!!!...
Kria *shouts*-TUMNE WEAKLINGS TEAM KO HARAYA HAIN SWAYAM!!!!...THATS YOUR FAULT!!!...
Neha-Apni galti...
Taani stopped her...

Kria-ARRE YOU KNEW IT VERY WELLL KI MERA COLLEGE CHODNE KA EK AUR REASON THA AND VOH THA AGAR MEIN REHTI TOH WEAKLINGS HAARTE...AND TUM...

Swayam-Mein majbur tha...they had some hopes from me...

Kria-HOPE MY FOOT...YEH SPEECH DE KAR HOPES????...INN LOGONE SHARON KO BLAME KIA LEKIN JAB UNKE KHUDKE CAPTAIN NE UNHE HARAYA HAIN TOH...

Swayam-Meine kamsekam back off toh nahi kia...
Kria-It was justa a back off...i had two spare dancers for weaklings...jeet jaate voh log...
Vishakha-What do you mean?????...
Kria-You guys dint loose cause you just had five dancers...tum log swayam ki wajha se haare ho...
Bharat-Abe chup ho jaa...tu samajhti kya hain...tune galti ki hain...
Swayam-Bharat,neha,sharon guys chup ho jao please!!!!...

Kria was in tears...swayam went to her and cups her face...kria moved back...

Kria-Dur raho mujhse tum...stay away...i made a huge mistake...i hate you!!!!...

She ran away from their...swayam was numb...taani went to him...

Taani-Bhai...she dint mean that...aap toh jaante ho na usse...gusse mein kuch bhi bol degi...

All were damm confused...

Swayam-Taani you wont understand...she returned everything...why the hell is she so possessive about this team!!!!...why would she break all relations just cause i took part in FOOTLOOSE for god sake!!!...why the hell she over reacting!!...
Taani-Swayam get a hold of urself...inn logone kria ki insult ki hain...aap jaante ho...she dosent take any crap against herself!!!...
Swayam-I stopped them right????????...arre its just footloose...

Suddenly a girl came...

Girl-Sam chalo jaldi...kritz ne apne aap ko terrace par lock kar dia hain...voh kuch ulta phulta...

But b4 she could complete swayam had gone...

Rey-Lagti hain kria swayam ki??????????...
Taani-Bestfriend hain bhai ki...meri badi behen jaisi hain kria...chachu chachi ne kria ko apni betu ki tarha pala hain...bhai is attached to her...voh usse hurt nahi kar sakte...and kria ne bhai ko unke saare gifts lauta diye...

All shocked...

Sharon-Lekin yeh footloose...yeh ladki..yeh sam..yeh kritz!!!...
Taani-Mein aapko sab batati hun!!...


Sorry abhi yeh secret  mein kal disclose karungi...gtg monday ko science paper hain...guys just pray for me ki mein SANSKRIT and HINDI mein pass hojaun...PLEASEEE...

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Hope u all lyked dis part...

P.S-YEH KR YA SS OS NAHI HAIN...DIS IS A KRIYAM OS...JISS MEIN I WNT SHW KRIYAANSH CONFRONNATATION OR SWARON'S PATCH UP..JUST KRIYAM KA PATCH UP DEKHAUNGI!!!...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice 1..
bt little confusing...
plz update soon n thnx for pm...
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confusion
update soon
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nice start... but i'm confused...thanks 4the pm... all the best 4 ur xams...
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AWESOME OS...gr8 start ...jaldi jaldi update plzzz😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part.
Loved it.
Thanx for the pm.
And all the best for your exams👍🏼
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Woww. . .
Awsome os. . . .
Bt,a lot of confusion. . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
All were damm confused...
 
ya ya m too confuse
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awsome os...
Bt confusd ki kya chal raha h
so update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...But I'm Confuse
Update Soon & Thnx 4 d PM
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