Loved it to the core...
it takes me into a Dream Land...
But only one complain... in the starting u have mentioned abt the gift ... "Collage" that Geet has made to gift it to Maan... but when she went to meet him, she has not taken tht with her...
If she wld have gifted tht to Maan, then it wld have turned out to be even more romantic... like was was overwhelmed to see tht someone is adoring him this much... then tht realization of his feeling wld have drawn upon him & after tht he could have asked to dance with him & propose her...
Its my point of view... so no offense to u... i just loved this OS as well as your other writings...
Continue doing the superb work...
W8ing for more of ur writings...
Love Ya...
Regards,
Deepti... <3 <3 <3 👏
