hey guys how r u all hope bindas.....
May be the concept of the story is not good
Actually me & Ami is not so satisfied with the story....
Please give ur unbias opinions if u dont like we can stop and try something new 😕
Part 2
She waited but no one came…..
Just as she started to leave out of no where the doc appeared…..
"hey Bhaggu" mutted Ashi
the Doc looked at her from her red hair to her super man tee-shirt to her shapely legs……….
He doest look like a Doc he is sooo young with his wild curly hairs and baggy jeans….. and lovely expressive eyes with dark eyelashes……
Well if he wasn't a dentist I would have liked him though ashi
What a figure….. what eyes but weird she is sexy in a weird way man…
But I can do some weird things with this weird beauty….. Lets have some fun…..thought Uv
Ashi said " u r the doc???"
"no I am the Super man……. Ok sit in this chair & lie down…."
"Ok doc super-man as u can see with ur X-ray vision I don't have any tooth problem so don't waste ur precious time and give me a good report."
"May be u also need some help from a psychiatrist " Suddenly he took a weird scary looking instrument and Ashi to open her mouth…….
"Hey bhaggu! What the hell is this U psycho!!! U murderer!!!!"
"hey open ur mouth as I need to extract ur 2-3 teethes "
"But I haven't opened my mouth yet u brainless fool!!!"
"Well think before u use those pretty words….or else I will also extract ur tongue Is that clear Wacko"
"U………" Ashi started to give him another round of gallies …But Uv interrupted "Sweetheart think bfore u say ok n ow open ur mouth or I will have to cut ur mouth"
Half scared to death Ashi open her mouth finaly…..
"Good girl… now open ur mouth a little"
"Do I have to swallow the room or what !!"
Uv acted as if he haven't heard and said again "open ur mouth a little and also stick out ur tongue……" He was having a gala time with this hot Weird wacko…… And he think that h she is more beautiful when she is grouchy….,
Ashi thought of murdering this stupid Doc with his own instruments……
And suddenly she saw the weird instrument was coming nearer
"She closed her eyes……
And she looks soooo beautiful May be he can go out for a date with this weird Wacko after all After all something happens when he is in this close proximity with this weird red heard…cant be described…….
Ragsy,are you INSANE???!!This fic is going GREAT 😳 ...DARE you change it 😉 !!
OMG can't wait for the next part 😳 !!Your fic is just TOO good 😳 ...It's a cool new concept 👏 😉 ...It's just...Beyond words 👏 👏 👏 ...Out of the world 😳 😳 😳 ...PLEASE PLEASE continue soon!
omg ragini didi 😉 😉 aar amididi 😉 😉 ,arre tumi kalke jakhon aamake mobile e message reply korle,ekbaro boloni toh,tumi aajke ekta rocking part pathabe 😕 s***y 4 the late reply,acctually i was busy with sum imp. work 😕 😳 neway,herez ur claps-
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pls post the next part fast.
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