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PROLOGUE:

He looked at the picture again, as he had done so for the past ... so many years. The picture had an unusual effect on him even at seventeen, and it still beckoned him even now. It was not beautiful in the way he was used to; it was a symbol of the mind he had failed to understand and never probably would.

It was a drawing of a red rose, but not the ones that poets would write on,  or the ones that lovers would gift. The water colour painting showed a red rose lying on the page. Nearly all its petals were separated from it and lay surrounding it: however, one petal still clung to the flower, as though defying the rest. If someone looked closely at the painting, they would see the other petals each pierced by a glass shard, and the drops of blood that oozed out of it. The petal that clung to the stalk however, glistened with a dewdrop.

Some people might have thought the painting was morbid. Many would think it was cruel. But Abhay wondered about the person who had drawn it. Had she merely expressed a desire for sadism and brutality? Had it been an expression of her repressed anger? Had she drawn a reflection of her torn soul that clung to it's last hopes? With  time, the amount of time he dwelt on it decreased, but whenever he looked at it, he would hear sobs echoing from a distance. Most days however, he just pushed it to the back of the drawer. It was professional curiosity, he thought. Nothing more.


Chapter 1: 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3213617&TPN=9


Chapter 2:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3213617&TPN=16


Chapter 3- page 25

Chapter 4-

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3213617&TPN=35


Chapter 5


Chapter 6

Chapter 7


Chapter 8


Chapter 9


Chapter 10


Chapter 11


Chapter 12


Chapter 13


Chapter 14


Chapter 15


Chapter 16


Chapter 17


Chapter 18


Chapter 19


Chapter 20(Last Chapter)



Epilogue+NOTE


Other works:

Mini FF : Curiouser and Curiouser

FF: Time and Again

FF:Who am I?(joint with -juhi-lily)

OS: What could have been

OS: Parallels

OS. A ray of Sunlight




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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
nice prologue
do continue

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:38am | IP Logged
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OMG.. my Cranium was set into rotational motion by the torque of your title.. ROFL it better be away from all this.. LOL
Shreya.. a new SS hun..?? sounds really good and the prologue is quite intriguing.. I have this urge to see the painting yaar..!! as for the title.. it is khatarnaak.. ROFL
of course re.. is it even a question to ask..??? please do continue..!!!
a complete human story.. is it..? quite interesting..!
do update soon..! will be waiting..!


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Awesome prolouge..do continue & PM me

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Fantastic start Shreya Clap BTW who drew the painting? Was it Pia or Maithali? Confused It was beautifully written Clap

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wow great story pl\z update soon
thanks for the pm

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Interesting prologue.Continue soon nd pm me

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Awesome prologue
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