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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
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amazig maria...u really rock...Coolab aage kya hoga???Confused
thnks sahas but u rock better at your os's...ab thodi filmi hogi...lol
oho maria I may rock but dat rock is not rocking becoz of my late updatesLOL
oh pls sahas...ur latest updates still rock n i am most excited about ur new ff with miss romantic writer...ur character sketch is alot better than the show especially the part where annie n rathi r not idiots...lol
ohh thnx maria...glad to find a frend who lyks my writing so much...Embarrassedn yeah for me it was fun thinking of dese idiot love birds not to think anything idioticLOLLOL
ha ha...i really think that someone should kick them in the butt like a football maybe ourhandsome cheetah and give one on their heads so that some sense is knocked into it...by the way sahas how old r u if u dont mind me asking
No dear I never mind...buttt I am too chotuOuch...maybe da youngest in da forum...me just 12Ouch ...u???

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maria_rox14

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

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Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

amazig maria...u really rock...Coolab aage kya hoga???Confused
thnks sahas but u rock better at your os's...ab thodi filmi hogi...lol
oho maria I may rock but dat rock is not rocking becoz of my late updatesLOL
oh pls sahas...ur latest updates still rock n i am most excited about ur new ff with miss romantic writer...ur character sketch is alot better than the show especially the part where annie n rathi r not idiots...lol
ohh thnx maria...glad to find a frend who lyks my writing so much...Embarrassedn yeah for me it was fun thinking of dese idiot love birds not to think anything idioticLOLLOL
ha ha...i really think that someone should kick them in the butt like a football maybe ourhandsome cheetah and give one on their heads so that some sense is knocked into it...by the way sahas how old r u if u dont mind me asking
No dear I never mind...buttt I am too chotuOuch...maybe da youngest in da forum...me just 12Ouch ...u???
omg...r u serious?...i am going to seriously faint...u write so well for a twelve year old...r u 
thinking of becoming a writer or something? wow...nyways im fifteen or atleas im going to be sixteen in another half hour...nyways about u being chotu...no ways dude...im chotu in my school cuz evryone else is already sixteen...n yay...im friends with the oldest twelve year old in the world...lol...btw...im going to start calling u chotu...nyways chotu isnt it ur bed time yet lol... im going to sleep now gud night talk to u lots tomorrow...

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

amazig maria...u really rock...Coolab aage kya hoga???Confused
thnks sahas but u rock better at your os's...ab thodi filmi hogi...lol
oho maria I may rock but dat rock is not rocking becoz of my late updatesLOL
oh pls sahas...ur latest updates still rock n i am most excited about ur new ff with miss romantic writer...ur character sketch is alot better than the show especially the part where annie n rathi r not idiots...lol
ohh thnx maria...glad to find a frend who lyks my writing so much...Embarrassedn yeah for me it was fun thinking of dese idiot love birds not to think anything idioticLOLLOL
ha ha...i really think that someone should kick them in the butt like a football maybe ourhandsome cheetah and give one on their heads so that some sense is knocked into it...by the way sahas how old r u if u dont mind me asking
No dear I never mind...buttt I am too chotuOuch...maybe da youngest in da forum...me just 12Ouch ...u???
omg...r u serious?...i am going to seriously faint...u write so well for a twelve year old...r u 
thinking of becoming a writer or something? wow...nyways im fifteen or atleas im going to be sixteen in another half hour...nyways about u being chotu...no ways dude...im chotu in my school cuz evryone else is already sixteen...n yay...im friends with the oldest twelve year old in the world...lol...btw...im going to start calling u chotu...nyways chotu isnt it ur bed time yet lol... im going to sleep now gud night talk to u lots tomorrow...
most ppl dont believe meOuch...so I had to give dem my fb acct to checkLOL...n no I sleep late coz now holidays r going...n yeah I wanna be a writer n its my only dream...ok byeee n gudni8...check out wat surprise is dere for u in da mrngWink

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
omg!!!!! I lvd it...its too goood...plzzz do cntinue

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cherry.parul0

omg!!!!! I lvd it...its too goood...plzzz do cntinue
Hi thank you sooo much...r u new???? Nyways exams r going on but don't worry I will update before 2013...hopefully!!
Xoxoxoxoxooxooxoxooo
Maria

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Posted: 21 December 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Life of yuvreen
Hey guys I'm here with part 5 of Life of Yuvreen!!!! I don't know how u guys are gonna like it but I did work my ass on it...ok maybe just a tiny bit...anyways I really hope that you guys actually like it and please guys COMMENT!!!!! I work on this for like an hour and it doesn't take even a minute to comment...i don't even mind comments which basically throw chap pals at me!!!!
Anyways please I beg thou
COMMENT!!
It will motivate me to write the next part
Anyways now
Enough with my bakbak
On with the show!!!!

Part 5
Annie, Zorro and Ranbir look at suvreen. With shock written all over their faces...I mean come on, she just dropped her perfectly good phone...
The faces of Annie and Zorro quickly turn into worry as they start pestering suvreen with the questions of What, why????? and Annie's OMG'S...and etc... While suvreen just looks on in shock when suddenly tears drop down...she's crying so much she could fill up the Yamuna
Suvreen: Annie!! Zorro!! Puppa was admitted into the hospital because he got into a road accident...he is in the ICU!!!!!!!! hai gannuji!!!! Pls Puppa ko bachalo!!! I can't live without him!!! And to think, I argued with him today morning about my fashion course!!!!! Oh!! If anything happens to him...
While she was speaking these words Ranbir comes from behind and places his hand in her shoulder
And says, " don't worry...Your dad is going to be Ok! I know what you are going through because my dad had a heart attack 3 years ago...But now it's time for you to hold your tears and be with your mom who im sure is going through a bad time...come I will drop you to the hospital...
The four of them rush to the hospital with suvreen still in tears and filled with worrisome thoughts about her Puppa...
They soon reach the hospital where they find suvreen's mom bawling her heart out...like literally screaming out her worry...they then are asked to go to the visitors room for only family members of the patient are allowed to be in that area and they leave...
Suvreen: Mumma!!!!!!!!!!
Mumma: hai!!! Suvi beta!!!!!
And then suvreen runs to her Mumma and the both just hug out their pain (awww!!)...
Then a doctor arrives at the scene and asks: Mrs Guggal???
Mumma: Jhi doctor Saab??
Doctor: Maam, your husband is in a very critical condition!! However he is very lucky for even 5 more minutes would have cost him his life.
Hearing this Mumma guggal in a very filmy style puts her hand to her forehead saying, " haila" and weeps into suvreens shoulder...
Suvreen: but doctor is he going to be ok???
Doctor: yes he will be...Mrs guggal, has your son finished filling out the required documents...
Suvreen and Annie: Son?!?!?!???!
Mumma then goes very stern in an expression which tells them not to say anything more and says, " he must be coming now...actually whatever it is you can talk with me...just let me talk to my daughter for a minute..."
Doctor then tells her to meet him at the cabin in 2 minutes citing it important and something related to her husband...
The doctor then leaves...
Suvreen then looks at her mother and asks, " son???"
Mumma: actually beta he is the one who saved your Puppa...he carried and got your Puppa admitted into the hospital and even came to pick me from the House after looking at the address on your Puppas wallet...I had to make him my 'son' otherwise he couldn't have come into this area and he helped me with the document...actually I think you know him...he goes to DPSC itself and uska naam Kya tha????------- haaan yehi won Ladka Hai!!!!
Suvreen's mom points to behind suvreen...
and now, making his grand entry with the punjabi song playing in the background
Is the HOT and SEXY Cheetah!!!! (yippeee, it's yuvraj!!!)

Ok then guys I know I promised a yuvreen scene today but I am now tooo tired to write anymore
But pukka promise next one will have a yuvreen scene!!
Hope you enjoyed this part
I enjoyed writing it especially the last part
In case your wondering as to whether I have gone crazy on my writing
No it's just that I write better on my iPod...since I am right on In bed burning the midnight oil while my mom doesn't know I'm writing
Anyways please like and comment
And you know the drill If you want me to pm you add me to your buddy list!!!
Xoxoxoxoxoxo
Maria

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Posted: 21 December 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
awww...an emotinal one..
 
nd hamara cheetah!!!!! vo to h hi mahaan..
 
waiting 4 yuvreen seen..
update soon

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Posted: 21 December 2012 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cherry.parul0


awww...an emotinal one..
nd hamara cheetah!!!!! vo to h hi mahaan..
waiting 4 yuvreen seen..
update soon
Thanks soo much
Will definitely update soon

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