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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Maria...first of all I have to tell a sorry...I knw the super seven are going to just tease me even more now..becoz since yesterday I have used this word Sorry for about 10-20 times..!!! But then this sorry is becoz I had promised to read ur os the other day but did not..and now finally i read it..!!!
Now, I ll give u a lil long comment on what i think about ur FF...no dont worry it is not bad comments...it cannot be bad becoz such a lovely update such requires some good updates..!!

First of all never say that ur update is not good...It is just awesome..as awesome as any other FF on Yuvreen...and ya for sure better than mine..!! I agree ur hindi is not good but then rather than Hindi what readers love is what u write and ur creativity..!! and I must say u need to pat ur back from my end for this...!!! U are a very creative person..!!!

Second, I think you can do a lil better by changing the font size, color and stuff to make ur update look attractive...this will increase readership to an extent...!! Also go to the Fan fic Forum and there u ll find a link for advertising ur FF...go and advertise the FF there..!! That will also enable more readers to enjoy this wonderful FF...!!! And thanx a lot for the PM..and do send me a PM on the next update..!!! 

ohh mr sorry kumar bas kijiye apne sorry ke barshahatLOL

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
n maria...dont say it was crap...yeh toh minus 1000 crap thaLOL that means plus 1000 amazing!!!three cheers for uClap Clap Clap
the scene was really amazing...y r u saying everything as crap wid such wonderful writing...bas hindi ke liye dont say dats not nyc...n dont praise me so much...I am updating too late so u r better dan meSmile

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akshayR

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maria...this was a very cute update..best part being when suvi closes yuvi's mouth...really nice..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and me being romantic writer ???</font>Yoyo &amp; Cici Emoticons 147<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">r u kidding me ???LOLLOLi am not at all romantic..at least in my writing...Winkbhavnah is lot more romantic than me..i am no where near to her in romanceLOL</font>
Thank you akshay
Oh puh lease!! In one of ur os I dont know which one you turned out to be quite the romantica

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

n maria...dont say it was crap...yeh toh minus 1000 crap thaLOL that means plus 1000 amazing!!!three cheers for uClapClapClap
the scene was really amazing...y r u saying everything as crap wid such wonderful writing...bas hindi ke liye dont say dats not nyc...n dont praise me so much...I am updating too late so u r better dan meSmile
Thanks a lot sahas
An yeah
Ur bad cuz ur not updating
So Chotu
Please update!!

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

n maria...dont say it was crap...yeh toh minus 1000 crap thaLOL that means plus 1000 amazing!!!three cheers for uClapClapClap
the scene was really amazing...y r u saying everything as crap wid such wonderful writing...bas hindi ke liye dont say dats not nyc...n dont praise me so much...I am updating too late so u r better dan meSmile
Thanks a lot sahas
An yeah
Ur bad cuz ur not updating
So Chotu
Please update!!
I am not getting any ideaCry

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by akshayR

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maria...this was a very cute update..best part being when suvi closes yuvi's mouth...really nice..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and me being romantic writer ???</font>Yoyo &amp;amp; Cici Emoticons 147<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">r u kidding me ???LOLLOLi am not at all romantic..at least in my writing...Winkbhavnah is lot more romantic than me..i am no where near to her in romanceLOL</font>
Thank you akshay
Oh puh lease!! In one of ur os I dont know which one you turned out to be quite the romantica

lol..dear i have written just one ss..that too haven't updated in past 1 and a half month...so i don't remember in which post i turned a total romantic LOL

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akshayR

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by akshayR

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maria...this was a very cute update..best part being when suvi closes yuvi's mouth...really nice..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and me being romantic writer ???</font>Yoyo &amp;amp;amp; Cici Emoticons 147<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">r u kidding me ???LOLLOLi am not at all romantic..at least in my writing...Winkbhavnah is lot more romantic than me..i am no where near to her in romanceLOL</font>
Thank you akshay
Oh puh lease!! In one of ur os I dont know which one you turned out to be quite the romantica

lol..dear i have written just one ss..that too haven't updated in past 1 and a half month...so i don't remember in which post i turned a total romantic LOL

total romantic in buttuning shirt wala scene

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

Originally posted by akshayR

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by akshayR

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maria...this was a very cute update..best part being when suvi closes yuvi's mouth...really nice..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and me being romantic writer ???</font>Yoyo &amp;amp;amp; Cici Emoticons 147<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">r u kidding me ???LOLLOLi am not at all romantic..at least in my writing...Winkbhavnah is lot more romantic than me..i am no where near to her in romanceLOL</font>
Thank you akshay
Oh puh lease!! In one of ur os I dont know which one you turned out to be quite the romantica


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">lol..dear i have written just one ss..that too haven't updated in past 1 and a half month...so i don't remember in which post i turned a total romanticLOL</font>


total romantic in buttuning shirt wala scene
Oh yeah that was a totally romantic and awesome scene

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