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(SS)The life of YUVREEN!!...part6 updateed. (Page 10)

maria_rox14 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Maria...first of all I have to tell a sorry...I knw the super seven are going to just tease me even more now..becoz since yesterday I have used this word Sorry for about 10-20 times..!!! But then this sorry is becoz I had promised to read ur os the other day but did not..and now finally i read it..!!!
Now, I ll give u a lil long comment on what i think about ur FF...no dont worry it is not bad comments...it cannot be bad becoz such a lovely update such requires some good updates..!!

First of all never say that ur update is not good...It is just awesome..as awesome as any other FF on Yuvreen...and ya for sure better than mine..!! I agree ur hindi is not good but then rather than Hindi what readers love is what u write and ur creativity..!! and I must say u need to pat ur back from my end for this...!!! U are a very creative person..!!!

Second, I think you can do a lil better by changing the font size, color and stuff to make ur update look attractive...this will increase readership to an extent...!! Also go to the Fan fic Forum and there u ll find a link for advertising ur FF...go and advertise the FF there..!! That will also enable more readers to enjoy this wonderful FF...!!! And thanx a lot for the PM..and do send me a PM on the next update..!!!
Aww...thank u so much Manish!!!!! This is sooo sweet of you!!!!
And I will definitely heed your advice...
When r u gonna update lights, camera, ...

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_rox14

Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Maria...first of all I have to tell a sorry...I knw the super seven are going to just tease me even more now..becoz since yesterday I have used this word Sorry for about 10-20 times..!!! But then this sorry is becoz I had promised to read ur os the other day but did not..and now finally i read it..!!!
Now, I ll give u a lil long comment on what i think about ur FF...no dont worry it is not bad comments...it cannot be bad becoz such a lovely update such requires some good updates..!!

First of all never say that ur update is not good...It is just awesome..as awesome as any other FF on Yuvreen...and ya for sure better than mine..!! I agree ur hindi is not good but then rather than Hindi what readers love is what u write and ur creativity..!! and I must say u need to pat ur back from my end for this...!!! U are a very creative person..!!!

Second, I think you can do a lil better by changing the font size, color and stuff to make ur update look attractive...this will increase readership to an extent...!! Also go to the Fan fic Forum and there u ll find a link for advertising ur FF...go and advertise the FF there..!! That will also enable more readers to enjoy this wonderful FF...!!! And thanx a lot for the PM..and do send me a PM on the next update..!!!
Aww...thank u so much Manish!!!!! This is sooo sweet of you!!!!
And I will definitely heed your advice...
When r u gonna update lights, camera, ...

very soon maria..actually the thing is tat there something very special and a great twist in the other ff...!! Tats why I am updating it so fast..!! in fact I and chaichil are both writing the next update together...this would be the last update before the surprise..and tha surprise will be on 31st...it would be a new year gift to all..and next one way too depressing...so Lights, camera action can be written only then..!! that is after 31st..!! 

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
hey hello maria :)
your update was really great ya Smile u r a talented writer... your creativity is really gud Thumbs Up
do continue soon Smile

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavnah

hey hello maria :)
your update was really great yaSmileu r a talented writer... yourcreativity is really gudThumbs Up
do continue soonSmile
Thank u Sooo much bhavnah!!!!!!!

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
vry vry nyc...awww yuvreen is sooo cute..
nd hug...yuvi consoling suvi..
ovrol fantastic..ur a gr8 writer..

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cherry.parul0


vry vry nyc...awww yuvreen is sooo cute..
nd hug...yuvi consoling suvi..
ovrol fantastic..ur a gr8 writer..
Thank you so much for the compliment!! And for commenting!!
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manish_Shetty

Originally posted by Monika_S

Caught you...Sorry kumar LOL


hahaha...I expected this..!!!  LOLLOL Tongue

Humari tez nazaro se bachna toh waise bhi impossible hai Wink LOL

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Maria...this was a very cute update..best part being when suvi closes yuvi's mouth...really nice..

and me being romantic writer ??? Yoyo & Cici Emoticons 147 r u kidding me ??? LOLLOL i am not at all romantic..at least in my writing...Wink bhavnah is lot more romantic than me..i am no where near to her in romance LOL

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