Posted: 26 September 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
My name is Maria and i am a silent reader whose favourite program is Suvreen Guggal - Topper of The Year.
I actually don't live in India and i usually don't like hindi serials since they are way tooo slow, i really love Suvreen Guggal (a plus is definitely Yuvraj who is damn hot!!) since i started watching it from the road trip episode and then watched all the other episodes on youtube.
I love reading the stories which readers appload on this site and i really like Teri Meri Kahaani, diwali party, KUCH TOH HAI HUM ME,and Jab We Met to name some few.
So, while reading these stories, stories of Suvreen Guggal started developing in my mind and so i wanted to share them with.
Now i know most of you want to kill me for writing such a long forum i'm going to end it with some important points:
1. i don't know much of hindi although i can understand it from watch sooo many hindi films so i won't be using much of it
2. the story begins after yesterday's episode in which suvreen gets bad marks in eco but becomes the topper in fashion studies.
3. my story might not always go along with the show's storyline.
4. i am only a week old in this site so i don't know how it functions...
5. i go to school and hence i will be able to upload like only once in a week
6. the story will rarely be told from yuvraj's perspective as it will then keep the mystery
7. the story might be a bit slow for you guys
8. i am totally open to critisism but not sooo bad critisism
9. tell me if my hindi is fine or i should write only in english...
Anyways, there are many other things i want to share but lets just go with the story
suvreen: so does this mean i like fashion more than eco? Oh ganuji? mey kya karun? mein papa ko kaise bataun ki muje fashion course join karna hai!! pls god...HELP ME!!
suvreen then decides to call Annie for help when suddenly the phone starts ringing...
the caller id - Laddoo
suvreen: should i take his call?...
No suvreen...what are you doing? you want to talk to the very body you had said "i love you to"? yeh aap kya karein ho?
And then suvreen cuts his call and tries to call annie but its busy...
suvreen: oh!! she will be talking to rathi...should i call naro...but shes not even taking the workshop...anyways, ab baara baj gayi toh mey sohti hoon aur meh papa sey kal baath karti hoon...
suvreen : ganuji i am now going to tell papa about the workshop...pls help me!!
suvreen then goes to the dining room and
suvreen: hel...lo puppa...and doesnt kiss him
ppapa: arey suvreen beta...kya hua? you did not kiss me on the cheek
suvree.: actually papa...(and the suvreen talls him about the fashion workshop and how she wants to take the course)
papa: kya? aap fashion course join karna chaati hai? HOW CAN YOU EVEN THINK THAT I WILL ALLOW YOU? HOW CAN YOU SUVREEN? AAP FASHION JOIN KARNA CHAHTA HAI??
And suvreen had show this book in which her designs were there and her puppa starts tearing off the pages...
suvreen: no papa...pls puppa...mat kar...(starts crying)
papa: aaj aap college nahi jayenge...tuh aaj ghar meh hi rehna...TERA LAPTOP AUR PHONE BHI MUJHE DHE
suvreen then cries even more and runs off to her room
annie: are naro? suvi kahan hai? i didnt see her class at all today
naro: kya?? i also didnt see
annie: oh no!! did she not come to school today? par kyun...arey naro...im very worried
naro: chal hum gang sey baath karte hai
IN THE CANTEEN
annie: Rathi! Yuvraj! Rohit! aaj suvreen school nahi aayi?
yuvraj(looks very worried): KYA? par kyun? kya aap ne uska phone try to kiya?
naro: mey abhi bhi try kiya? phone switched off hai?
yuvraj(to himself): arey yaar!! yeh topper bhi na? par woh school kyun nehi aayi? are...mey bohoti hi pareshan hoon...
yuvraj: tikke...bhool na math ki mey CHEETAH hoon CHEETAH...mujhe ek plan hai
Yuvraj then tells them his plan...
rathi: arey bhai, tu phirbi uske ghar jhaa rahey ho? nahi yaar bohothi bhuri plan hai
And everyone nods in agreement
yuvraj: tikke tikke...meh kuch soch leti hun...tum sab class mey jaa
everyone then says their goodbyes and go off
yuvraj: par mujhe yeh plan toh achi lagti hai...mey toh jhaa rahi hoon...i hope topper is alright
END...OF PART 1
Hope you guys liked it n sorry if it was very long
btw...should i continue?
part 1- page 1
Part 2 page 2
Part 3 - page 3
Part 4 - page 4
Part 5 - page 6
Part 6 - page 9
Edited by maria_rox14 - 05 January 2013 at 1:59am