Love Vs Fate... FF (chptr 28 pg 146 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Cute ...& sad update.

 

I felt so sorry for Uday...

(obviously...I'll only feel sorry for him😆)

...Manyata didn't open his gift...SHAME!!! 

 

I still have many questions:

...but, here's what I predict...

Murari dies  in that accident,

the family that had given them a lift...will adopt Manyata.

 

The prologue is  the pov of 1 of those 2 children...I THINK!!!

 

Anyway...thanx for keeping your promise of updating tonight.

 

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: puggyy

Update kamaal hai... Waiting for ur next one... Picture ahi bhaaki hai ...good start...it's very interesting ...

Krishan such an emotional update...superb👍🏼

felt very bad for the UV...😒

update soon dear😊

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

RESERVED.

Edited.😊 

Amazing update. Beautiful.👏 👏 👏

Story started with MANVEER Childhood.😊 😛 

Chotu UV n Manyata was sho cute. UV-M Scene was so  sweet, I loved it. ☺️  🤗

n Choti J when she said, "Mera gi.." OMG She's so small.😳

OMG, Murari kidnapped Manyata but I think he'll die.😳

Poor UV.😒 He was missing his Jungli billi but yeah there is always a next.😉 It's jus starting of the story cos UPDATES ABHI BAKI HAI MERE  DOST.😉 

Beautifully written. You rocked Jiji. Both FFs are jus awesome, superb.🤗 

Thanks for the wonderful update.🤗 

Pls, Pls, Pls update ASAP.😊 waiting for the next one.😉

🤗 🤗

     

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome loved it

please update soon

loved juniour manveer

alwaya a next time thing was so nice]feeling so bad for uday

but i know picture abhi baaki hain

will be eagerly waiting for the next update