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visrom

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
In accordance with the feedback received for the previous contest and my promise, I am starting this scene contest.
 
 
There'll be 4 pics this time and you all have to write a scene connecting them. You can interchange the pictures.
 
 
The last date would be next Friday - 5th Oct 5PM  IST or 10 entries, whichever is later.
 
Please do not post anything other than your entries on this thread.
 
Any questions can be discussed on the Gen Discussion thread.
 
Here are the pics.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by visrom - 28 October 2012 at 10:20pm

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Entry - 1
Originally posted by visrom

 
 
Scene: 1


In Bureau... FREDDIE was roaming and in Very Happy moodWink... TRIO entered... looking His Excitment... glance each one and then moved ahead...Smile

ACP (to FREDDIE): kya baat hay... aaj Hathi bara Khush lug raha hay'LOLLOL

FREDDIE: Sir  FW walun nay Mujhy kaha hay kay wo mujhy aur Meri Wife ko lay ker ek Episode banana waly hain'WinkWink

TRIO (tease): achaaa'ROFL

ABHIJEET: FREDDIE kya SUDH HINDI mein'WinkWink

FREDDIE (excited): nahi ABHIJEET Sir Chand pe'ROFL

DAYA (shock): kiya?ShockedShocked

ACP: kya bol rahy ho FREDDIE'ConfusedConfused

FREDDIE: haan Sir, Dialogue Writer nay kaha hay jub Chand per Khoon ho sakta hayWinkLOL tou HoneymoonROFL (embarrassEmbarrassed and added) (TRIO completely stunnedShocked) Meray aur Meri Wife waly Epi sode ka Title hayWink' CHAND per HoneymoonROFLROFL ' tou wo kyun nahi ho sakta'WinkLOL

ABHIJEET: magar tum tou apni Wife kay sath Honeymoon mana chukay ho na'WinkLOLLOL

FREDDIE: kahan sir wo Us samny apnay Mekay chali gayii thi'ROFLROFLROFL

TRIO (again): Achaaa'.WinkWinkLOL

All bursts into Laugh'ROFLROFLROFL




Scene: 2
 

ABHIJEET look at DAYA who was Smiling from behind after silently reading the Scripts'WinkLOL

ABHIJEET (in murmuring): haan Zameen mein tou Story Saheh likhi nahi ja rahiAngry' Chand per ja ker likhayein gayLOL' pagal banaya hua hayAngry' (to DAYA in whisper): aur tum kyun Hanse rahy hoWink' main tumhari tarah Bhavnao mein Nhai beh jaon ga' Samjhy'AngryAngry

DAYA (little tilt towards ABHIJEET): Jee Mian aap kay Vichaar samjh raha hun'Wink

ABHIJEET tried to Punch Him but missed the Chance as DAYA move ahead and smile after reading the Dialogue which will Speak by FREDDIE in Episode'LOLLOL

DIALOGUE: ayey Chand kay Prani' Kahan ho' Dekho Tumhari Sunderta Humein Khench layii'ROFLROFLROFL

Scene: 3


Here Trio made a Plan to give this Information to FREDDIE wife but after so many Knocks, nobody Opened the DoorOuch' ABHIJEET tried to call DAYA but He forgets to Charge His CellWink' then ask ACP and after ACP reply' search a Phone Booth and after find it... so moved ahead' ACP stand and ABHIJEET dials DAYA number with thinking'Ermm

ABHIJEET: ek tou jub bhi RAAVAN say Cell mangoLOLLOL' Paisay hee nahi hotay Cell meinAngry' jabhi Mian kahun Sir kabhi call kartay kyun nahiWinkLOL' hr Waqt Un ki Outgoing ki Lines kirpiya Wiast hee rehti hain'ROFLROFLROFL

DAYA pick up the Call' ABHIJEET said'

ABHIJEET: DAYA ACP sahib aur mian FREDDIE kay Ghar gayeyWink' per koi darwaza nahi khol raha' Tum kabhi gayey ho FREDDIE kay ghar?LOL

DAYA: kahan BossOuch' FREDDIE nay kabhi Mujhy Dawat hee nahi di'ROFL

ABHIJEET: Tu bhi na DAYAD'oh' acha Hum Bureau aa rahy hain' RAAV... ohhhWink... matlabLOL... ACP Sir keh rahy hain kay Humein Hulya badal ker FREDDIE kay Ghar jana chahyey'  WinkLOL

Scene: 4


 
  

DUO in Disguise Outside the HouseEmbarrassed' both look at Each one and now ring the Bell' Voice from inside'Wink

VOICE: kaun hay?Smile

ABHIJEET: APRADH JAANCH VIBAGH'ROFLROFLROFL

VOICE (with shocking tone): kya?ShockedShocked

DAYA hit His Shoulder slightly on ABHIJEET shoulderWink' ABHIJEET come to Senses'LOLLOL

ABHIJEET (again): CID'WinkLOL

VOICE: tou kya karein?Angry

DAYA: aap darwaza tou kholeinSmile' humein aap say kuch VaartalapROFL (ABHIJEET hit his elbow on DAYA tummyWink, he also came back on sensesLOL and added) kuch baat cheet karni hay'Smile

VOICE: dekhyey Mian darwaza nahi khol saktiWink' aap aisay hee pooch lein'Smile

ABHIJEET: humein POOJA say milna hay'Wink

VOICE: kaun POOJA'ShockedShocked

ABHIJEET' annnErmm' nahi wo NAINA say'Wink

DAYA: kya bol rahy ho Boss'ConfusedConfused

ABHIJEET (whisper): aby naam kya hay FREDDIE ki Wife ka'?WinkLOL

DAYA: MANISHA'Smile

ABHIJEET: haan haanLOL' Sorry wo TANISHA say'ROFLROFL

DAYA: MANISHA'Wink

ABHIJEET: pakka'WinkEvil Smile

DAYA stand with Helpless Shade...ROFL

 


Edited by visrom - 21 October 2012 at 11:04pm

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Entry 2


Abhijeet is on the phone with Daya and ACP is listening to the conversation.

Abhijeet: Haan Daya, Freddy ko darne ka isse acha mauka nahi milega.

Daya (on phone): Toh thik hai. Hum dono pehle saman liyenge aur phir ACP sir ke saath mil kar Freddy ko ulo banegein.

Abhijeet: Lekin iska pata Freddy ko nahi chalna chahiye.

Vivek (from behind ACP): Kis baat ka?

ACP (looks behind himself with raised eyebrows): Vivek tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Vivek: Sir aapko dekha isli aaya. Kya nahi pata chalna chahiye Freddy sir ko?

ACP: Baad main batenge.

Vivek nods and leaves. ACP gives a small smile and Abhijeet finishes his conversation with Daya.

Abhijeet: Sir main aur Daya saman le kar aate hain.



A little later, both Abhijeet and Daya are in disguise at Freddy's house. Freddy's wife opens the door.

Wife: Ji?

Abhijeet: Apun ko Fredericks se milne ka hai.

Wife: Kya kam hai?

Daya: Bole toh usko thokne ka hai.

Wife (shocked): Kya?

Abhijeet: O chokri (Daya hides his laughter at this, but can't stop himself from smiling)...bole toh aurat...Fredericks kidhar milega?

Wife: Mujhe nahi pata.

Abhijeet (fixing his hair): Kya apun ko yeda samjhti hai? Woh bureau main hain naa? Saale ko wahani thok denge. Chal shane.

Daya and Abhijeet wake a small distance from the house and burst into laughter. Then they see Freddy's wife leave the house and the two quickly rush to the bureau.


A little while later, the duo arrive at the bureau in their normal clothes. They see Freddy's wife coming in. She comes running in and hugs Freddy crying. Freddy gets surprised but calms his wife down.

Freddy: Kya huya?

Wife: Tumhe kuch log marne aa rahe hai.

Abhijeet: Kya? Kaun?

Wife: Pata nahi. Bas do tapori aadmi the.

Daya: Freddy dariyo maat. Tere ko protection hum denge.

ACP: Yeh CID officer hai. Isse protection ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Freddy: Arre nahi sir. Mujhe protection chahiye.

ACP (warningly): Freddy...

Daya: Sir de dete hain. Yeh dekhiye. Yeh Freddy ka ghar ka naksha hai. (quickly draws on a paper)

The duo then outline a plan to save Freddy. At each step Freddy gets more and more frightened.

Abhijeet: Aur agar by chance woh log ghar main ghus bhi jaate hain toh hum yahan pe unhe pakde lenge.

Daya: Aur agar yahan se nikal gaye toh?

Abhijeet: Toh yahan pe pakde lenge.

Freddy (almost trembling): Sir bas bhi ki jaye. Main yeh desh chor deta hoon kuch dino ke liye.

ACP: Kyun Freddy? Darr gaye?

Freddy: Haan sir. Ab jaan ke peeche koi paara hoga toh yehi hoga naa?


At this the trio burst out laughing. Freddy and his wife watch them and then understand that it was all a joke.

Freddy: Sir yeh sab kyun kiya?

Abhijeet: Mazak ke liye. Ab tumne bhi toh do din pehle balloon phora tha bureau main.

Daya: Jisko sun kar yeh laga tha jaise ko bomb phata hai.

Freddy: Sir main ek baat bataon?

ACP: Haan batao.

Freddy pulls out another balloon from underneath the table and pops it. The trio watch him with amused looks as Freddy smiles.

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ENTRY 3
Abhijeet & ACP banglore jaa rahe the in a truck they stopped at a DHABHA where ACP gives order of food and Abhijeet go to PCO booth and talked to TAREEKA
ABHIJEET : kase ho
TARIKA : [SHOUTING] Tumhe kya matlab 
ABHIJEET : Aree aree kya huaa
TAREEKA : Thik hai agar tum mujhse milna hahate hoo to MAWALI DISCO mee akar miloo 
ABHIJEET : KYA...
[Then he go towards ACP and start eating ]
ACP :to jaa rahe ho 
ABHIJEET :Kahan
ACP: MAWALI DISCO acha DAYA ko sath lee jao

AT EVENING 
ABHIJEET: Mein kasa lag raha hoon thik too dhik rahan hoo naa
DAYA: BOSS tum 1 hr se shishe me dheek rahee hoo achee dhik rahee ho
wase hum nee ye getup kyun kiya hai 
ABHIJEET: Aree waha kaa disco ka dresscode hai gundo ka getup
DAYA: Kya Aur TAREEKA nee tumhe waha bulaya
ABHIJEET: haaan Dr ke saath kaam karte karte wo bhi ...
DAYA: nahin hum wahan casual clothes mee jayenge
AT DISCO 
[They both ent in casual clothes]
GUARD : Aree tum dono kaha jaarahe hoo dress code nahi maaloom kya 
DAYA: Maaloom hai
GUARD : PHIR 
ABHIJEET: WOOWO...
GUARD :WO kya
ABHIJEET: Janee doo na bhai
GUARD: nahin
DAYA : dheek hume janee doo
warnaa...
GUARD : Warnaa... ... 
DAYA pull him and tareeka came there and capture his pic
ABHIJEET: Aaap
TAREEKA: haan DAYA sir bade dashing lag rahe the ye abb mein ACP sir ko dungi
DAYA: Kya 
TAREEKA; Or nahi too kya
AT BURRO 

FREDDY is moving in proud attitude 
ABHIJEET: Kyaa 
DAYA: tujhe dhik nahi raha freedy ko dekh kasa akad chal raha hai
ABHIJEET : chal puch lete hain 
DAYA: KYA BAAT HAI FREDDY 
Bade khush lag rahee hoo
FREDDY : Ye unmarried logo kee bass ki nahi hai
DAYA Kyu aasa kya kiya 
FREDDY: aap suno ge too garv karoge 
ACP : aasaa kya kiya 
ABHIJEET : sir isnee kuch married logo wala kaam kiya 
ACP ; kya kya
FREDDY : aaj mene ek lottery jeete hai
ABHIJEET : Too esme married hone ki kya jarurat hai 
FREDDY: Haain naa kyunki wo ekk honeymoon package thaa
ALL saw FREDDY and he is in big proud look


Edited by Tami_ - 06 October 2012 at 7:22am

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Entry 4:

CID team is in search of a drug dealer Babloo. ACP and Abhijeet get info about him.
ACP: Abhijeet, Freddy ko call karke bol do Babloo ke peechhe lage rehne ko.
Abhijeet: Haan sir abhi batata hoon. Arey yeh kya is ilake mein toh mobile ka network hi nahin hai. Ek kaam karta hoon, kisi telephone booth se call karta hoon.
ACP: Haan jaldi karo.
Abhijeet informs Freddy.



In bureau, all are discussing about the case when Freddy enters with victorious expressions.
ACP: Kya hua Fteddy? Kuchh pata chala Babloo kaha gaya?
Freddy: Haan sir. Main uske adde pe gaya tha ek gunda banke. Main unse kal ek drug deal fix kar ke aa raha hoon. Maine unse kaha ke kal mere boss Changu Bhai aur Mangu Bhai aaenge deal final karne ke liye.
Abhijeet: Aur yeh Changu Mangu kaun honge??
Freddy: Obviously. Aap aur Daya sir.
Daya: Kya yar Freddy, naam toh kuchh achhe batate yeh kya hai Changu Mangu?
Freddy: Sir, ab bhai logon ke naam aise hi toh hote hain. Jo muh me aya bol diya.
ACP: Achha woh jane do. But Freddy, you have done a great job today!!
Duo: Haan Freddy! Aj toh tumne kamaal kar diya. Seedhe deal hi fix kar aaye. Great job.
Freddy: Thank you sir Smile



Next day, Duo at Babloo's adda.
Daya: Ae machhar ja jaldi Babloo ko bula ke laa.
Man: Tu kon hai be??
Daya: Ae jyada shanpatti mat mar. Babloo ko bula nai to dunga rakh ke.
Man: Nahi bulata ja.
Abhijeet: Ae. Daya ko gussa mat dila. (Daya presses his hand hard and coughs)
Abhijeet (covering up) : Ae Daya nahi karte hum kisi pe humare ko gussa aya to. Seedha dho dalte hai. Ja Babloo ko bol ke Changu Bhai aur Mangu Bhai aaye hai.
Man: Are bhai mereko kya maloom tha ke aap kaun hai. Aj kal Police ka bohot lafda hota hai toh poochhna padta hai. Gussa mat karo mai abhi Babloo Bhai ko bulata hai.
(Man goes inside)
Abhijeet: Arey yar kitni zor se haath dabaya mera.
Daya: Arey sorry sorry.
Babloo comes with drugs. Duo nab him red handed.



After the case is over, Duo are talking about the case.
Daya: Par kuchh bhi kaho Abhijeet tum pakke tapori lag rahe the us green shirt mein.
Abhijeet makes a very serious face.
Daya: Arey Abhijeet, tum toh bura maan gaye.
Abhijeet is still silent.
Daya: Arey kya hua? Kuch toh bolo.
Abhijeet: Main soch raha hoon ki us beard aur un kapdon mein tum bhi kuch kum lafangey nahin lag rahe the. (And he starts laughing)
Both of them laugh heartily.

Edited by visrom - 21 October 2012 at 11:04pm

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ENTRY :  5



DISGUISE SCENE :
Duo in tapodi look Embarrassed They are trying to search a drug dealer who is involved in a murder. They got some information about that drug dealer & reached in front of his house. Abhijeet has knocked the door & one person opened the door.

Abhijeet : Abbey !!! Jaggu kahan milega?
Person : Kaun Jaggu ?
Daya : Abbey bata vi de itna nakhra kaheko karta hein?
Person : Dekhiye aap log jisko dhund rehe hein woh yahan nehin rehete hein...
Abhijeet : Arre (looked at Daya)...wohhh...aree kya naam hein uska...
Daya : Munna...
Abhijeet : Haaan...Munna...usne to bola ke Jaggu yahan par hi milega...humhe kuch maal chahiye tha...
Person : Hahaha...Munna ne bataya...woh ek number ka badmash hein...sabko bewekoof banata hein...
DUO : Kya !! Shocked  [looked at each other ]
[Daya whispered - Boss !!! Yeh Munna to bohot bada dhokebaaj nikla...
Abhijeet : (angrily) Humse gaddari usse bohot mehainga padhega ]



AT BUREAU IN BETWEEN THE SHOOTING :

Abhijeet is looking very serious while Daya is discussing the dialogs of the next scenes with the director. Suddenly he has noticed Abhijeet's expression.

Daya : Are Aditya, kya baat hein ?
Aditya : Daya, tumhe nehin lagta aajkal har 2 hapte mein ek disguise scene ho raha hein?
Daya : Haan yaar woh to hein...pehele jaisa kuch vi nehin raha...Ouch...aur dialogs ki to baat mat karna Angry
Aditya : Hmmm Unhappy haan yaar...pehle disguise scene karne vi maja aata tha kyunki humhe kuch alag karna hota tha...aaj woh baat nehin raha Ouch

 
 
 

The next  scene is supposed to - Abhijeet is talking with Daya over phone. ACP Pradyuman & Freddy stands near the telephone. Then ACP sir orders Freddy to take all the Finger prints from the phone.
But Dinesh is not ready for shooting.
Shivaji : Are Aditya, iss Dinesh ko kya hua?
Aditya : Woh Dinesh ko disguise scene karna hein...is liye bohot gusse mein hein...bechara roz roz yeh finger print uthane ka kaam se bore ho gaya hein...
Shivaji : Hmmm...



 
At Bureau :

Freddy is looking very happy...Trio comes forward Freddy.
ACP : Kya baat hein Freddy aaj itna khush dekhiye de rehe ho ??
Freddy : Sir, aaj aaapko manna padhega ke Freddy vi kuch kar sakte hein...(feeling proud)

Abhijeet : Kyun bhai aaj kausa teer chala liya...
Daya : Are Freddy ab suspense chodo aur bolo baat kya hein...
Freddy : (looked at DUO) Sir, aap log humhesha disguise mein jaate ho magar mujhe nehin le jaate par aaj subah aap log disguise mein jakaar vi kuch nehin kar paye...Jaggu to mila hi nehin...kyun ? Wink
ACP : (angrily) Freddy !!! faltu ki baatein chodo aur asli baat bolo...
Freddy : Wohi to Sir...jab Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir galti karte hein to aap bilkul vi nehin daant te par mein jab karta hoon to mujhe bohot daant padhti hein...aisa kyun??
ACP : Tum asli baat bataoge yah nehin ?
Freddy : Sir meine Jaggu ka pata laga liya Big smile
Daya : Are waaf Freddy...
ACP : Good job Freddy !!! Clap
Freddy : Sir aab to mujhe promotion milega ??
Abhijeet : (to ACP) Haan Sir, ab to Freddy ko promote kar hi dijiye...
ACP : Achha achha thik hein mein dekhta hoon...

Freddy is shouting - Mujhe ptomotion mil gaya...Mujhe ptomotion mil gaya...Mujhe ptomotion mil gaya...

Freddy's wife is calling Freddy - Aree Freddy kya hua...tum mujhe shanti se sone doge yah nehin...
Freddy has woken up & understands that he was in dream & feeling very sad Ouch

 


Edited by debasree04 - 10 October 2012 at 11:18am

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ENTRY No. 6

SCENE 1


In the forensic lab, Daya and Abhijeet try to calm down an agitated Salunkhe.

DAYA- Ab sir aap batayenge bhi ki hua kya...

SALUNKHE(pouting with anger)- Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hei Daya ki mujhe kuch hua hei!

ABHIJEET- Salunkhe saab, aapne apne 3 nakli..sorry sorry asli baal tod k fenk diye..zaroor kuch toh majra hei

SALUNKHE- Pehli baat Abhijeet, MERE BAAL NAKLI NAHIN HEIN aur dusri baat tumhara woh officer Freddy mujhe..Dr Salunkhe ko challenge karke gaya ki woh mujhe prove karke dikha dega ki dunia mein har aadmi ka kamse kam ek humshakl hota hei aur uss aadmi ka pehle waale aadmi se khoon ka rishta nahhin hota.

DAYA- Yeh Freddy bhi na sir, kuch bhi bolta rehta hei...

SALUNKHE- Nahin iss baar usne hadd kar di..usne kaha hei ki woh Mumbai mein hi tum dono ka humshakl dhoond ke dikhayega...aur agar aisa kar dia usne toh mujhe apne mooch aur yeh baal saaf karvane parhenge

DAYA AND ABHIJEET (in chorus with sly grins)- OH!

Salunkhe shifts his attention back to his work..Abhijeet gives a serious look to Daya and both reach a silent understanding that the wonderful opportunity should be grabbed.

SCENE 2


The next day, Abhijeet and ACP are out doing a routine task. Abhijeet has still not found time in his busy schedule to discuss the final touches of their special "plan". Abhijeet makes a lame excuse and heads towards a pay phone to call Daya.

ABHIJEET- Hello Daya, yaad hei na plan BAKRA BANAA SALUNKHE

DAYA(over the phone)- Haan haan woh toh yaad hei..par tumne mujhe apne cellphone se call kyu nahin kia

ABHIJEET- Arey yaar balance khatm ho gaya...

DAYA- Woh kaise, dost toh hum hi hei sirf tumhare, fir kaise baatein karte ho itni saari

ABHIJEET- Arey main nahin yaar, aadha balance Taarika apni gungi cousin se baat karne mein khatm kar deti hei aur...

DAYA- Aur baaki aadha?

ABHIJEET- ACP saab, apne Goa waale uss ACP dost se baatein karte hein...ab kya karein..dono ki biwiyaan hi nadaarad hein...apna dukh baant te hein baatein karke

ACP (thinking)- Abhijeet se kahunga ki Tata Docomo wala Rs 54 ka sms plan le le fir main apne dost se sms chat kar lia karunga...

ABHIJEET- Achha yeh sab chorho Daya tum Freddy ko bas kehna ki Dr Salunkhe ko lekar apne uss Chintu khabri k paan ki dukaan par pohoch jaaye kal subah 11 baje.

DAYA- Ok, boss...


SCENE 3



Freddy and Salunkhe reach the designated spot arguing continually. They collide with two men who are "look alikes" of Abhijeet and Daya.

FREDDY- Yeh lijiye Salunkhe saab, mil gaye Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir k humshakl...Jeb mein shaving cream aur razor laaye hein na..aap kahein toh main madad kar deta hun aapki

SALUNKHE- Ek minute Freddy, tum kisey bevkuf banaa rahe ho, yeh dono apna vesh badal kar aaye hein aur yeh koi pehla baar nahin hei
(to Daya and Abhijeet)- Ab tum log kaunse mission pe ho?

ABHIJEET(looking bewildered)- Chachaji, kya aap hum dono se baat kar rahe hein

SALUNKHE- CHACHAJI!

DAYA(to Abhijeet)- Arey bhai Raavan, kyu inko chachaji bula rahe ho, bhaisahab bolo bhaisahab!

SALUNKHE- Bhaisahab! Raavan! Daya, Abhijeet! Tumhe ho kya gaya hei! Daya tum Abhijeet ko Raavan kyu bula rahe ho! Tum dono cid officer hokar uss rakshas ka naam le rahe ho!

ABHIJEET- Dekhiye bhaisahab! Hum hei Raavan aur yeh hei Kumbhkaran...Aisa hei yeh CID officer aap kisey keh rahe hein humein nahin pata..Bas itna pata hei ki Ram Leela mein Ravan aur Kumbhkaran k kirdaar nibhate nibhate hum apna asli naam bhul chuke hein...

Freddy gives a trimphant look and Salunkhe looks bewildered.

SALUNKHE(in a bid to give a shock to Abhijeet)- Abhijeet, Taarika naukri chorhkar ja chuki hei 

ABHIJEET- Malum hei malum hei..usi ko toh dhundne nikle hein aur saath mein shurpnakaa bhi toh gayab hei

SALUNKHE- Shurpnakha!

DAYA- Arey haan aap hi ne toh kaha ki TAADKA rakshasi gayab hei...asal mein hamari ram leela mandali mein jo TAADKA aur shurpnakha ki bhoomika nibhate hein woh bhaag gaye hein, unhi ko dhundne hum nikle hein

SALUNKHE- Hey bhagwaan! CID k fauladi officers ko kya ho gaya,
(pointing at Abhijeet)- Jo nishaanebaaz tha woh Raavan!
(pointing at Daya)- darwaza todne wala Kumbhkaran!

DAYA- Raavan aur nishanebaaz! Yeh toh gun dekhte hi behosh ho jata hei aur main darwaza toduna...jab Ram leela mein seeta haran ka scene aata hei main parde k peechey har baar bilakh bilakh kar rota hei..itna narm hei mera dil.

Suddenly they see an agonized Nikhil in the distance who had not seen Daya for the past 45 minutes.

ABHIJEET- Woh dekho Shurpnakhaa mil gai.

Salunkhe falls in a dead faint on the ground. Freddy fists joyously in the air. He had won the bet.


SCENE 4


In the bureau

FREDDY- Aaj main bohot khush hu, meri wife bhi maan gayi ki main Dr Salunkhe jaise dhurandhar doctor ko bhi haraa sakta hu...aur Salunkhe saab ke nakli baalo ke raaz ka bhi maine hi pardafaash kia hei..ab mera promotion koi nahin rok sakta

ACP, ABHIJEET AND DAYA (in chorus)- ACHA!


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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
I am announcing closure of this scene contest. It's been too long and there's hardly any more response to this.
A BIG thanks to all participants. Clap
 
Hence proved that Nik gives more inspiration for funny scenes than duo...whether in their original look or in disguise.
 
Voting starts now.
 
Please vote for 3 scenes. Results will be announced in a week.


Edited by visrom - 21 October 2012 at 11:02pm

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