Joined: 01 November 2004
DK is staring at her
Disha: what are you staring
DK: you look very beautiful
Disha : blushes and ok lets go
They get out driver is waiting. DK takes the keys from driver . Open's door for Disha on passenger side, disha sits
DK is driving (this is auto car doesn't need both feet to drive.)
(before leaving they both turn off their cell phone)
DK: Where you want to go
Disha : jaha tum le chalo
Dk: How about alibag
Disha: lets go
[Now let me make sure guys I have never been to alibag. So if there is something I write which is not possible please let me know]
both are in the car, disha is resting on dk's shoulder and while dk is driving. Once in a while giving her peak on forhead.
Dk: disha aren't you hungry, you haven't had anything since last night dinner
Disha: you also didn't had anything.
Dk: well I am ok as I am not use to eating in morning
Disha: well today I didn't realize until you mention. May be because I was with you.
Dk: lets eat something
Disha: ok but where we will go
Dk: well there is this mcdonald's near by we can get something from their
Disha: ya mcdonald's is fine
Dk: they drive thru mcdonald's
Server: here is the menu sir
Joined: 23 April 2005
thanx. lovely story. plz keep going in.
Joined: 01 January 2005
wooww just got around to reading it alll its reall goodd do continue.................
Love Asian Princess
Joined: 05 December 2004
Joined: 05 March 2005
great job once again
this is so thrilling
they r sneaking out of the house without moms permission
its like when people sre dsting and their parents dont know about it
ps. keep up the good
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Joined: 16 March 2005
wow ur story is fab ... bertter than original ....
TD Fast Forwarded by KP[Keshp15]!!!!!!!
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KP's FAST FORWARDED--CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!
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TD fast forwarded by Slena!
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TD Fast Forwarded!!! Check it out :-)
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