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Imp. Note FF: VAMPIRE ROMANCE (Page 3)

Ceon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Ok don't clame on me. I knw i m little dump bt nt so.
Anyways here is chpt 2. I hope u guys lyk it.


Mike dropped arjun at KILOSKAR RESIDENCE. At dat tym Mike was totally confused coz behaviour of Arjun!!
How cn sm1 disapeares widin a miniute!!?? Arjun said 2 himself. He thought abt it many tyms bt cn't land in any conclusion.
"Uff!! Its 2 much" he tried 2 erase dat incident frm his mind bt in fake. He cn't 4got dat charming face.
He suddenly get up & try 2 copy the image frm his mind on a piece of paper through a pencil.
After it finished he lost in his own master piece.
Haye Marwaingi Ye Ankhein!! He said himself by looking in her eyes & smiles nd again lost in his thoughts.
Meanwhile he heared a sound,
Wow!! Nice drawing & nyc grl!! Who is she??
It was again Mike. He returned 2 gv arjun his cell whch he forgot in car.
Bt by cming here he also found the reason of strange behaviour of his frnd.
No1!! Arjun said 2 Mike in hesitate & try 2 hide dat drawing. Bt Mike quickly snatched it frm Arjun & observ dat closely 2 figerout who z dis??
Bt he cn't remind anythng.
"Mike gv it 2 Me. Its mine.!!" Arjun said 2 Mike wid despiretly trying 2 get it back frm Mike.
"Ok i'll. Bt 1st tell me who z dis beauty??" Mike said 2 Arjun by raising her hand upwards wid drawing dat Arjun cn't get dat.
"I don't knw yr" Arjun said it worridly.
Wht do u mean dat u don't knw?? U mk a beautiful complt face of dat grl, still u lost in her thoughts & u said dat u don't knw. Hw could u thnk dat i cn belive u? Mike said it by gvng back dat drawing 2 Arjun.
I really don't knw man. Even i don't knw her name. I just saw her dat park And..

And I Lost. I don't knw wht hppnd 2 me bt i cn't stop thnkng abt her 4 a while.

He said worridly 2 Mike & sat on chair instantly by holding his 4head wid his hand.

"Oh shit Man, U'r in love!!! Love in 1st sight!!!
Mike jumped 2wards Arjun & said eagerly.
Fool!! U knw. I m such a big fool helpless also. I don't even knw her name & i cn't stop my self 2 lost in her.!! Arjun said it helplessly.
"Ok ok. Sabar kar mere bhai sabar ka phal meetha hota hai." Mike said it by consoling him.

"Stop throwing words in air. Do smthng yr & plz stop me 2 killing myself!! Arjun said 2 Mike wid folded hands.

Mike conforts him & promise him dat he surely do smthng.

After Mike left Arjun again losted in his thoughts by remembering dat pair of eyes.

Ankhein hai jhil si ya koi bhanwar hai,

Aur uspey bindiyan jaisi gazab ka sanwar hai,

Hain is kadar unki adaon main khumari,

Ke jahan v jate hain lagta bas
ajib hi manzar hain!!

Scean shifted 2 Desmukh Residence

[charecter sketch]
Ovi Manav Desmukh

Ovi z a grly type of grl. A international model & vry possesive. Her father hv 1st importance in her lyf bt c miss her Mother badly & secretly. Whnevr c does see a mother & child 2gether c always imagine herself wid her mother. C doesn't see her mother evr bt always think dat c must be de prettiest lady ever as c z. Bt always hv a cmpln dat why c left her??
Secret lover of Arjun & so connected 2 her 2win sis Teju.

Tejaswani Manav Desmukh

Teju is a vry energatic & bubly type grl. C hv 1 fanda Love U Life.
C z a tallented tenis player & always want adventers & thrils in lyf. Lyk ovi c also luv her baba must bt still miss her mother.

"U knw wht teju, Arjun znt pick up my call!!?? Why he is behaving lyk dis? He dosent seems 2 be. I hope he is ok."

Ovi said teju by dialing arjun's number contineusly.

Let him 2 tk breath Barbie Doll. He must be busy. Teju said annoingly.

As always. He hv tym 4 all except me. Ovi said it teju worridly.

Ok ok let it go. U knw lst nyt another dead body was found on street road. Its also mudred lyk previous 2. So strange. Teju said 2 ovi after snatching her phone frm her hand & keep it on another side.

"So wht do u thnk who z behind all dis??" ovi asked teju.

"I don't knw barbie doll. I hv no idea abt dis." teju answered worridly.

"But we have!!!"


If u hv sm intresting concept then pm me. I try 2 put dat in story.

Edited by Soumya02 - 26 September 2012 at 1:02pm

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zonan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soumya02

Originally posted by sipokobusak

Originally posted by Soumya02

Hello frnds!!

U knw m a strong beliver in supernatural things. Lyk ghosts, witchs, vampaires.

I always imagine my fav. charecters wid a supernatural story.

2day also m hear wid a imaginary story. Hope u guys lyk it.

charecter sketch will add when charecter aproach in story.

A huge crowd gathered on the road. A police van arrived their & a cop cm out 4 investigate. He silently walked 2wards the crowd. Their a body lied of a man. Which is murderd suspeciesly by some1.

[Charecter Sketch]

Arjun Kilosker

Son of a successful buisnessman of kanada. A highly educated Hot handsome matured guy who loves 2 make drawings and spend tym wid his dad. Single hunk & in search of his love.

<font size="1"> Arjun walked on a road alone 2wards his home. His car got pumcherd. It was a beautiful winter night having snow fall. Arjun called his friend 4 help. His frnd adviced him 2 stop their till he cm, coz it may be dangereous. He stoped their. It z a beautiful park. Suddenly he noticed saome1 dancing in the park. He entered into the park 2 figured out who z dat. Bt due 2 dark he cn't be able 2 see dat's face. Suddenly by dat way a van passed & due headlight of dat vehcile he able 2 catch dat's face. Its a girl!! She is dancing in snow by holding her DUPATTA beautifuly. Arjun is mesmorized by her beauty & a word sliped frm his mouth, WOW!!! Suddenly some1 clapped at his back.

It was his frnd Mike.

What r u doing here? Mike asked

Arjun turned at his frnd.

Suddenly he cm out frm his thought & turned back 2 show that girl 2 his frnd.

But there is no1!!


So hw do u lyk it?? Hit the lyk botten & gv sm feed back, if u want me 2 continue it.

I'm a big fan of supernatural and horror fiction.

But your introduction is typical intro of supernatural offense.

But please continue..

sry bt i didn't get u'r words. Would u plz lyk 2 explain it.

Hmm nevermind.
Please continue..we are waiting.Smile

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SilverBell IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Loved It Conti Soon. I love Stories About Vampires, and Ghosts Too.
khushikulz19 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
nyc update... continue soon...

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged

Beautiful update...loved it a lot...looking 4ward for your next update and pls pm me...

Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 26 September 2012 at 12:26am

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-Latty- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
amazing update dear... i liked it... do continue...

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MagicalPari IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
hey Soumya (can I call u that?) nice update. I love mysteries.
''Ankhein hai jhil si ya koi bhanwar hai, 

Aur uspey bindiyan jaisi gazab ka sanwar hai,

Hain is kadar unki adaon main khumari, 

Ke jahan v jate hain lagta bas 
ajib hi manzar hain!! '' Nice thought  
pls continue. 
1 request: pls increase font size.

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AnAvidReader IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 1:37am | IP Logged
heyy this ws awesome love at first sight huh...??
surely dat gul would be our beloved purvi...
m really waiting for purvi's entry...
thnx for pm..
will be waiting for ur nxt one..

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