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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Soumya02

Hello frnds!!

U knw m a strong beliver in supernatural things. Lyk ghosts, witchs, vampaires.

I always imagine my fav. charecters wid a supernatural story.

2day also m hear wid a imaginary story. Hope u guys lyk it.
charecter sketch will add when charecter aproach in story.
KANADA
STREET ROAD

A huge crowd gathered on the road. A police van arrived their & a cop cm out 4 investigate. He silently walked 2wards the crowd. Their a body lied of a man. Which is murderd suspeciesly by some1.
[Charecter Sketch]

Arjun Kilosker

Son of a successful buisnessman of kanada. A highly educated Hot handsome matured guy who loves 2 make drawings and spend tym wid his dad. Single hunk & in search of his love.

Arjun walked on a road alone 2wards his home. His car got pumcherd. It was a beautiful winter night having snow fall. Arjun called his friend 4 help. His frnd adviced him 2 stop their till he cm, coz it may be dangereous. He stoped their. It z a beautiful park. Suddenly he noticed saome1 dancing in the park. He entered into the park 2 figured out who z dat. Bt due 2 dark he cn't be able 2 see dat's face. Suddenly by dat way a van passed & due headlight of dat vehcile he able 2 catch dat's face. Its a girl!! She is dancing in snow by holding her DUPATTA beautifuly. Arjun is mesmorized by her beauty & a word sliped frm his mouth, WOW!!! Suddenly some1 clapped at his back.

It was his frnd Mike.

What r u doing here? Mike asked

Arjun turned at his frnd.

Suddenly he cm out frm his thought & turned back 2 show that girl 2 his frnd.

But there is no1!!

**********************************

So hw do u lyk it?? Hit the lyk botten & gv sm feed back, if u want me 2 continue it.

I'm a big fan of supernatural and horror fiction.

But your introduction is typical intro of supernatural stories..no offense.

But please continue..

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged

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Interesting concept...Please do continue...looking forwards for your next update... Smile

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

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awesome start... different concept... i loved it... do continue..:):)

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged

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Do continue...

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10x a lot 4 u'r response guys. I m trying my best 2 continue as u'r expectation. Smile

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wow thats great!! Please continue with the story i really really like it!!

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Originally posted by sipokobusak

Originally posted by Soumya02

Hello frnds!!

U knw m a strong beliver in supernatural things. Lyk ghosts, witchs, vampaires.

I always imagine my fav. charecters wid a supernatural story.

2day also m hear wid a imaginary story. Hope u guys lyk it.
charecter sketch will add when charecter aproach in story.
KANADA
STREET ROAD

A huge crowd gathered on the road. A police van arrived their & a cop cm out 4 investigate. He silently walked 2wards the crowd. Their a body lied of a man. Which is murderd suspeciesly by some1.
[Charecter Sketch]

Arjun Kilosker

Son of a successful buisnessman of kanada. A highly educated Hot handsome matured guy who loves 2 make drawings and spend tym wid his dad. Single hunk & in search of his love.

<font size="1"> Arjun walked on a road alone 2wards his home. His car got pumcherd. It was a beautiful winter night having snow fall. Arjun called his friend 4 help. His frnd adviced him 2 stop their till he cm, coz it may be dangereous. He stoped their. It z a beautiful park. Suddenly he noticed saome1 dancing in the park. He entered into the park 2 figured out who z dat. Bt due 2 dark he cn't be able 2 see dat's face. Suddenly by dat way a van passed & due headlight of dat vehcile he able 2 catch dat's face. Its a girl!! She is dancing in snow by holding her DUPATTA beautifuly. Arjun is mesmorized by her beauty & a word sliped frm his mouth, WOW!!! Suddenly some1 clapped at his back.

It was his frnd Mike.

What r u doing here? Mike asked

Arjun turned at his frnd.

Suddenly he cm out frm his thought & turned back 2 show that girl 2 his frnd.

But there is no1!!

**********************************</font>

So hw do u lyk it?? Hit the lyk botten & gv sm feed back, if u want me 2 continue it.

I'm a big fan of supernatural and horror fiction.

But your introduction is typical intro of supernatural stories..no offense.

But please continue..

sry bt i didn't get u'r words. Would u plz lyk 2 explain it.

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged

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Sounds gr8...Continue soon...

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