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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
     This is my first time writing any type of FF or SS thing. The concept of this FF is: "Everyone makes mistakes; some trivial, some life changing. What happens when I do exactly this? Change my life forever, all because of a mistake?"

     In this story, the following characters don't exist: Ovi, Vandita, Damodar, Varsha, Manjusha, Vinod, Punni, Sundari, Sulochana and any other charcters that disappeared after the leap.

     The storyline in this story is a bit different. Manav left 21 years ago, taking Sachin and his only daughter Teju with him. Arjun lives with DK. Arjun has a younger sister in this story, who's name isRiya. Ashana dies. Archana adopts Purvi,and raises her. When Purvi turns 4, Sulochana dies. In Canada, Damodar dies as well. (All clans in this FF have lost members...) Sundari returns to India to get a life. (:P) After 17 years, Varsha realizes her mistake when she finds out that Soham knew Varsha wasn't his real mom. Varsha returns Soham, runs away and commits suicide. (I know... Super... Eh?) Purvi learns the full truth about her Aai's life. The story starts off when Manav returns to India in pursuit of Archana. Teju and Sachin are there as well, but only to plan Arjun's birthday party. Arjun and Riya are flying in to manage the company DK put in Arjun's name. (Yes, I'm reviving the Arvi office scenes... :) Arjun doesn't know about his party happening the following week.


Big smileShall I continue?


Edited by eshaa_avrc - 30 September 2013 at 8:00pm

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Index: Smile
Intro: Above
Character Sketch: Pg 1 (Below)
Chapter 1: Pg 2
Chapter 2: Pg 2
Note: Pg 3
Chapter 3: Pg. 3
Chapter 4: Pg. 4
Chapter 5a: Pg. 5
Chapter 5b: Pg. 7
Chapter 6: Pg. 9
Promo for Ch. 7: Pg. 10
Chapter 7:Pg. 10
Chapter 8: Pg. 12
Chapter 9 Promo: Pg. 13
Chapter 9: Pg. 14
Note: Pg 16
Chapter 10: Pg. 17
Chapter 11: Pg. 19
Chapter 12: Pg. 21
Note: Pg 22
Chapter 13: Pg 22
Chapter 14 & 15: Pg 24
Chapter 16: Pg 26
Chapter 17 Promo: Pg 27
Chapter 17: Pg 29
Chapter 18 promo: 30
Chapter 18: Pg 32
Note: Pg 34
Chapter 19: Pg 35
Chapter 20: Pg 36
Chapter 21: Pg 38
Chapter 22a: Pg 39
Chapter 22b: 41
Chapter 23: Pg 42
Chapter 24: Pg 43
Chapter 25: Pg 44
Chapter 26: Pg 46
Chapter 27: Pg 47
Chapter 28: Pg 48
Chapter 29: Pg 49
Chapter 30: Pg 50
Chapter 31: Pg 51
Chapter 32: Pg 53
Chapter 33: Pg 54
Chapter 34: Pg 55
Chapter 35: Pg 56
Chapter 36: Pg 58
Chapter 37: Pg 59
Chapter 38: Pg 60
Chapter 39: Pg 62
Chapter 40: Pg 63
Chapter 41: Pg 64
Note: Pg 66
Chapter 42: Pg 67
Chapter 43: Pg 68
Chapter 44: Pg 69
Chapter 45: Pg 70
Chapter 46: Pg 72
Chapter 47: Pg 73
Chapter 48 Part 1: Pg 74
Chapter 48 Part 2: Pg 75
Chapter 48 Part 3: Pg 77
Chapter 49: Pg 77
Chapter 50: Pg 78
Chapter 51: Pg 81
Chapter 52: Pg 82
Chapter 53: Pg 85
Chapter 54: Pg 87
Chapter 55: Pg 88
Last Chapter: Pg 90


Edited by eshaa_avrc - 30 September 2013 at 8:00pm

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Wow, your fanfiction sounds really interesting! Very different from others I have read! Shocked Do continue! Smile

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
yes plz..do continue...!!

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged

Character Sketch:

Arjun DK Kirloskar: He is the only son of DK and Ashana. He is a very arrogant and rude sounding person, but it is only because of how he drowned himself in work after his horrible past.

Purvi Deshmukh: She is the adopted daughter of Archana. She is a very sweet, responsible, and mature person. She has a different perspective to life, and with this she carries beliefs of a brighter future for her loved ones.

Manav Deshmukh: He is the father Sachin, Teju, and Soham. He is the adoptive father of Purvi. He is an easygoing person that has strong beliefs in his children. He still loves his wife after all that had happened, is really hoping to help heal the wounds.

Archana Manav Deshmukh: She is the mother of Sachin, Teju, Purvi, and Soham. She is a really traditional woman with good beliefs. Her habit of being too nice and nave has led her to trouble in the past. She finds her life in her children and husband.

DK: He is a mellow and sensible person. He is the father of Arjun and Riya. He is also the best friend of Manav. He knows what had happened in the past, which is what has crafted his decisions for the future.

Riya DK Kirloskar: She is the younger sister of Arjun. She finds her friend in Arjun as well. She is an extremely bold person. She is really strong and mature. She has helped Arjun get through life, and vice versa.

Teju Manav Deshmukh: She is the sister of Soham, Sachin and Purvi. She is a childish person. She is very outgoing and bubbly. She has been terribly impacted by not having her mother around.

Sachin Manav Deshmukh: He is the oldest and most mature and sensible child of Manav and Archana. Or so he puts it. He is an accomplished lawyer. He has lived on the memories of his childhood and believes that what happened wasn't right.

Soham Deshmukh:  He is the brother of Purvi, Teju, and Sachin. He is uneducated and very lazy. He works as a mechanic and lives on his mom's cooking.

Savita Deshmukh: She is the mother of Manav. She is the sole evil reason for all the drama in everyone's life, she still is, and will be in the future.

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niceee start... i liked it... u should continue...

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Sounds like. Great start!! I love the description of Soham!!!

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