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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged

Guzaarish:Request

 

I dedicate this OS to Hridey.She wanted me to write a romantic update on Gurmeet-Sanaya in my SS Yaadein.But it was not possible for me as the story does'nt demand it.So I wrote an OS 4 Gurmeet Sanaya.

Yug reached home very late.
Y:My God!Today is our wedding anniversary and because of my work I reached very late.Tamanna will be very angry with me now.She will shout at me.Oh!
He entered their room.
It was dark.
Y:My God!Tamanna has already slept.In the morning when she gets up she willl be so angry with me.
Suddenly he heard her voice:How can I get angry with you on our wedding anniversary Yug?
He saw candle light.He could view her lovely face.
They both smiled at each other.

T:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

keh rahi hai kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon

She said in her mind:My heart is filled up with my love for you.I want to express my love through beautiful words.But how can I convey everything to you.Words are not enough to express my love for you.So listen to my silence.It depicts the beauty of our love.

He smiled.She smiled.Her eyes were sparkling.
She said in her mind:When I see you I become so shy that I cannot speak anything.So look at my eyes and understand the emotions I have hidden.

K:Tumse mujhe ye kehna tha
o kehna tha humdum
ho saamne to kya kahun
kya kehna tha humdum
kaise ye jazbaat hain
is dil mein to din raat hain
hoton pe kyun aane se ye sharmaate hain
aankhon mein kyun ye har ghadi aa jaate hain

(She rounded him with her soft romantic dance movements.Her hair was also dancing.Her hair strands fell on his face).

He smelled her fragrance.She closed her eyes.


K:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai
He stood very close to her.She moved away slowly and rhythmically.

K:Aa aa aa...

Suddenly because of the wind the candle light was blown and the room became dark.

Suddenly candle light was seen.Tamanna turned back.She saw Yug near the lit candles.He was looking at her deeply.

She felt that his eyes spoke a lot silently like her's.
His eyes spoke:Why should we struggle hard to express our love?Our hearts beat at the same time.So just listen to the silent heart beat.We feel the love,emotions,feelings,dreams we have for each other.Night is not for speaking out our love.It is for expressing our love silently.

She saw pure love in his eyes stored for her.

He was singing for her:
hum kyun kahein jo unkahi ek baat hai jaanam
dhadkan kahe dhadkan sune wo raat hai jaanam
dil bole bin, hain bolte
sab raaz hain, ye kholte
jab khwaab hain, jazbaat hain, ehsaas hai
to kehna kya, to sunna kya, hum paas hain..


She looked at him unbelievingly.


He came closer to her and pulled her towards him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

Y:Chahoon bhi to main kaise
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

He took her in his arms and caressed her hair.

keh rahi hain kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon(Force)

He carried her to their romantic heaven.


The next day Yug took Tamanna to a restaurant.

Y:How is my surprise?

T:Cool.

Y:Yesterday I could'nt surprise you.But today I want to complete our wedding anniversary celebration.

She smiled.

The waiter served them food.

Tamanna ate a bit.

T:Yuck'.what did you order Yug?
This is not a surprise.This is a shock.Good thing that yesterday you did'nt bring me here.Otherwise our wedding anniversary would have been spoiled.

Y:Come on Tamanna'don't come to a conclusion so soon.
This is something I ordered for myself.Your food will come now.

T:Really?

The waiter served her food.

T:Roti and paneer?Wow!Thank you Yug.

She started eating like crazy.

Yug became happy seeing her happy.

They reached home.Immediately she vomited.

Yug became upset:What happened Tamanna?The food did'nt go well with your body I guess.Oh!I should not have taken you to the restaurant.You ate too much.

Tamanna smiled.It was a naughty smile.

T:It's not because of the food.

Y:Then?

She was shy:We are going to be parents.

Yug was surprised:Really?Then why did'nt you tell me?

T:Today morning only it got confirmed.When I got the result itself I wanted to share this happiness with you.But when you reached home itself you asked me to get ready fast to go to the restaurant.So I did'nt get a chance to tell you.

Y:No problem as you gave me the most wonderful news.

T:What will you give me for giving you a happy news?

He smiled.He went out and brought a lot of jalebies for her.

T:Wow!You are the sweetest hubby in this world.

Y:You decide whether I am sweet or not after I feed you.

He started feeding her jalebies with her hand.

Y:Did I feed you well?

T:Of course.

Y:How do you know?

T:Because the jalebies had a special taste.

They both giggled.Tamanna fed him jalebies with her hand.

Unknowingly their eyes got stuck up to each other's.A long passionate eye lock.
He said in his mind:Tamanna...I have a request.Be with me always.Only you can tolerate the crazy Yug.
Her eyes replied:I will be with you always.Promise.Because i love my crazy Yug.

The end




Edited by jasminerahul - 23 September 2012 at 3:34am

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged

Guzaarish:Request 

 I know that most of the people cannot digest Sanaya with Gureet.So I am posting the SaRun version of Guzaarish:Request

Yug reached home very late.
Y:My God!Today is our wedding anniversary and because of my work I reached very late.Tamanna will be very angry with me now.She will shout at me.Oh!
He entered their room.
It was dark.
Y:My God!Tamanna has already slept.In the morning when she gets up she willl be so angry with me.
Suddenly he heard her voice:How can I get angry with you on our wedding anniversary Yug?
He saw candle light.He could view her lovely face.
They both smiled at each other.

T:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

keh rahi hai kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon

She said in her mind:My heart is filled up with my love for you.I want to express my love through beautiful words.But how can I convey everything to you.Words are not enough to express my love for you.So listen to my silence.It depicts the beauty of our love.

He smiled.She smiled.Her eyes were sparkling.
She said in her mind:When I see you I become so shy that I cannot speak anything.So look at my eyes and understand the emotions I have hidden.

K:Tumse mujhe ye kehna tha
o kehna tha humdum
ho saamne to kya kahun
kya kehna tha humdum
kaise ye jazbaat hain
is dil mein to din raat hain
hoton pe kyun aane se ye sharmaate hain
aankhon mein kyun ye har ghadi aa jaate hain

(She rounded him with her soft romantic dance movements.Her hair was also dancing.Her hair strands fell on his face).

He smelled her fragrance.She closed her eyes.


K:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai
He stood very close to her.She moved away slowly and rhythmically.

K:Aa aa aa...

Suddenly because of the wind the candle light was blown and the room became dark.

Suddenly candle light was seen.Tamanna turned back.She saw Yug lighting candles.
W*F? Did i miss something? arnav lighting candles? Holy smokess whats going on? Lol i dont even know what to think anymore, but boy am i siked to find out!!!!He was looking at her deeply.

She felt that his eyes spoke a lot silently like her's.
His eyes spoke:Why should we struggle hard to express our love?Our hearts beat at the same time.So just listen to the silent heart beat.We feel the love,emotions,feelings,dreams we have for each other.Night is not for speaking out our love.It is for expressing our love silently.

She saw pure love in his eyes stored for her.

He was singing for her:
hum kyun kahein jo unkahi ek baat hai jaanam
dhadkan kahe dhadkan sune wo raat hai jaanam
dil bole bin, hain bolte
sab raaz hain, ye kholte
jab khwaab hain, jazbaat hain, ehsaas hai
to kehna kya, to sunna kya, hum paas hain..


She looked at him unbelievingly.


He came closer to her and pulled her towards him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

Y:Chahoon bhi to main kaise
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

He took her in his arms and caressed her hair.

keh rahi hain kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon(Force)

He carried her to their romantic heaven.


The next day Yug took Tamanna to a restaurant.

Y:How is my surprise?

T:Cool.

Y:Yesterday I could'nt surprise you.But today I want to complete our wedding anniversary celebration.

She smiled.

The waiter served them food.

Tamanna ate a bit.

T:Yuck'.what did you order Yug?
This is not a surprise.This is a shock.Good thing that yesterday you did'nt bring me here.Otherwise our wedding anniversary would have been spoiled.

Y:Come on Tamanna'don't come to a conclusion so soon.
This is something I ordered for myself.Your food will come now.

T:Really?

The waiter served her food.

T:Roti and paneer?Wow!Thank you Yug.

She started eating like crazy.

Yug became happy seeing her happy.

They reached home.Immediately she vomited.

Yug became upset:What happened Tamanna?The food did'nt go well with your body I guess.Oh!I should not have taken you to the restaurant.You ate too much.

Tamanna smiled.It was a naughty smile.

T:It's not because of the food.

Y:Then?

She was shy:We are going to be parents.

Yug was surprised:Really?Then why did'nt you tell me?

T:Today morning only it got confirmed.When I got the result itself I wanted to share this happiness with you.But when you reached home itself you asked me to get ready fast to go to the restaurant.So I did'nt get a chance to tell you.

Y:No problem as you gave me the most wonderful news.

T:What will you give me for giving you a happy news?

He smiled.He went out and brought a lot of jalebies for her.

T:Wow!You are the sweetest hubby in this world.

Y:You decide whether I am sweet or not after I feed you.

He started feeding her jalebies with her hand.

Y:Did I feed you well?

T:Of course.

Y:How do you know?

T:Because the jalebies had a special taste.

They both giggled.Tamanna fed him jalebies with her hand.

Unknowingly their eyes got stuck up to each other's.A long passionate eye lock.
 
Rabba ve...Rabba...
 
He said in his mind:Tamanna...I have a request.Be with me always.Only you can tolerate the crazy Yug.
Her eyes replied:I will be with you always.Promise.Because i love my crazy Yug.

The end




Edited by jasminerahul - 23 September 2012 at 4:21am

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged

Guzaarish:Request

I know that most of the people cannot digest Gurmeet with Sanaya .So I am posting the Gurti version of Guzaarish:Request

Yug reached home very late.
Y:My God!Today is our wedding anniversary and because of my work I reached very late.Tamanna will be very angry with me now.She will shout at me.Oh!
He entered their room.
It was dark.
Y:My God!Tamanna has already slept.In the morning when she gets up she willl be so angry with me.
Suddenly he heard her voice:How can I get angry with you on our wedding anniversary Yug?
He saw candle light.He could view her lovely face.
They both smiled at each other.

T:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

keh rahi hai kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon

She said in her mind:My heart is filled up with my love for you.I want to express my love through beautiful words.But how can I convey everything to you.Words are not enough to express my love for you.So listen to my silence.It depicts the beauty of our love.

He smiled.She smiled.Her eyes were sparkling.
She said in her mind:When I see you I become so shy that I cannot speak anything.So look at my eyes and understand the emotions I have hidden.

K:Tumse mujhe ye kehna tha
o kehna tha humdum
ho saamne to kya kahun
kya kehna tha humdum
kaise ye jazbaat hain
is dil mein to din raat hain
hoton pe kyun aane se ye sharmaate hain
aankhon mein kyun ye har ghadi aa jaate hain

(She rounded him with her soft romantic dance movements.Her hair was also dancing.Her hair strands fell on his face).

He smelled her fragrance.She closed her eyes.


K:Chahoon bhi to main kaise kahun
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai
He stood very close to her.She moved away slowly and rhythmically.

K:Aa aa aa...

Suddenly because of the wind the candle light was blown and the room became dark.

Suddenly candle light was seen.Tamanna turned back.She saw Yug near the lit candles.He was looking at her deeply.

She felt that his eyes spoke a lot silently like her's.
His eyes spoke:Why should we struggle hard to express our love?Our hearts beat at the same time.So just listen to the silent heart beat.We feel the love,emotions,feelings,dreams we have for each other.Night is not for speaking out our love.It is for expressing our love silently.

She saw pure love in his eyes stored for her.

He was singing for her:
hum kyun kahein jo unkahi ek baat hai jaanam
dhadkan kahe dhadkan sune wo raat hai jaanam
dil bole bin, hain bolte
sab raaz hain, ye kholte
jab khwaab hain, jazbaat hain, ehsaas hai
to kehna kya, to sunna kya, hum paas hain..


She looked at him unbelievingly.


He came closer to her and pulled her towards him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

Y:Chahoon bhi to main kaise
saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
leherein sapno ki kaise ginoon
dariya behta hi rehta hai

He took her in his arms and caressed her hair.

keh rahi hain kya ye suno
meri khamoshiyaan
raat se hain lambi kahin
dil ki ye daastan
kaise kahoon(Force)

He carried her to their romantic heaven.


The next day Yug took Tamanna to a restaurant.

Y:How is my surprise?

T:Cool.

Y:Yesterday I could'nt surprise you.But today I want to complete our wedding anniversary celebration.

She smiled.

The waiter served them food.

Tamanna ate a bit.

T:Yuck'.what did you order Yug?
This is not a surprise.This is a shock.Good thing that yesterday you did'nt bring me here.Otherwise our wedding anniversary would have been spoiled.

Y:Come on Tamanna'don't come to a conclusion so soon.
This is something I ordered for myself.Your food will come now.

T:Really?

The waiter served her food.

T:Roti and paneer?Wow!Thank you Yug.

She started eating like crazy.

Yug became happy seeing her happy.

They reached home.Immediately she vomited.

Yug became upset:What happened Tamanna?The food did'nt go well with your body I guess.Oh!I should not have taken you to the restaurant.You ate too much.

Tamanna smiled.It was a naughty smile.

T:It's not because of the food.

Y:Then?

She was shy:We are going to be parents.

Yug was surprised:Really?Then why did'nt you tell me?

T:Today morning only it got confirmed.When I got the result itself I wanted to share this happiness with you.But when you reached home itself you asked me to get ready fast to go to the restaurant.So I did'nt get a chance to tell you.

Y:No problem as you gave me the most wonderful news.

T:What will you give me for giving you a happy news?

He smiled.He went out and brought a lot of jalebies for her.

T:Wow!You are the sweetest hubby in this world.

Y:You decide whether I am sweet or not after I feed you.

He started feeding her jalebies with her hand.

Y:Did I feed you well?

T:Of course.

Y:How do you know?

T:Because the jalebies had a special taste.

They both giggled.Tamanna fed him jalebies with her hand.

Unknowingly their eyes got stuck up to each other's.A long passionate eye lock.
 
 
Mahi...Mahi...
Mahive...
 
He said in his mind:Tamanna...I have a request.Be with me always.Only you can tolerate the crazy Yug.
Her eyes replied:I will be with you always.Promise.Because i love my crazy Yug.

The end




Edited by jasminerahul - 23 September 2012 at 4:21am

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Wow... it was such a cute and awesome os...
loved it very much...
they celebrated their wedding annieversary.. Big smileBig smile
yug is late and tammana is not angry...
and the song is so nice... from which movie...
and next day they went for restaurent and tam's fav food... wow...
they enjoyed their annieversary with yug's surprise... Big smileBig smile
wow T is pregnant... cool... that is an awesome gift for yug and feeding jelabis is so nice...
and their passionate eye lock... mahiii for gurti and rabba ve for sarun... Big smileBig smile
awesome one dear... loved it a lot...

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
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omg am liking it ...!

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
it was awesome
yug abd tammana a new couple i will love to see them on television
thank you very much for writing it thank you very much...
and that was super cute...
i loved it...
the pregnancy surprise was awesome

thank you forr writibg it yr
thank you

u rock

and ya update yadien sooon...

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Awww !! It's truly Awesome ! 
Bdw i read the Arshi one Wink 

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Thanks for such a wonderful os
Loved it dear
Thanks for pm me

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