FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 62

Well done you were building the suspense like the crest of  a wave & I kep wondering when the crash was gonna happen - when were they going to meet- wow - i loved this bit at the end - same as when it ends in the epi on a crucial bit

Before Khushi can open her mouth, Arnav covers the distance between them in two long strides and to her utter shock wraps his arms around her. He pulls her close in an embrace, his hands caressing her head. He takes slow deep breaths, almost as if he is sighing in relief, his face buried in the curve of her neck. Then as his weight sags on her, he whispers croakily, his voice awash with anguish. 

"Khushi... Tum theek ho?"

I love how you seamlessly drew a connection between the  safety instructions on the flight and Arnav's memories, how everything reminds him only of Khushi. Also loved  how you conveyed the sense of urgency by the way you write...I, too, was impatient for Arnav to get to the hospital. so I gobbled up this chapter really fast! I will read it again slowly and savour it this time...

loved it

You are one exceptional writer……love the way this story is progressing…….so far you have shown so many different emotions with each chapter…..just simply superb

Waiting for the next update eagerly