#3 ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (ch20-32) - Page 4

both update r amazing...

jst awsome

luvd it...

Congrats 4 d new thread...

Try to update soon

thankx 4 d pm

Hey.. Congratulations for d third thread of ur ff bt u updated after lik ages!!
Was waitin n d update was worth waitin schi !!
N who said u lost d touch of writing... No Freaking ways!!

Sanjay slapped abhishek yay yay..
N kriyaansh fightin over a piece of cake.. Aww our innocent kriyaansh.. Always fights for no reason..
N seriously.. Lik fr d first time i hav seen rather read swayam laughing hard... N i really enjoyd dat moment+ sharon dialogue was fab.. Dat cat monkey one.. Hehe
Rey teasing kriya by calling her mrs reyaansh singhania... Awww but kriya always manages to get cranky rey out.. Hehe.. Loved dat sequence...
N when swayam took sharon to d route opp to their office i seriously thot tht he is lik gona shout on her as she was d one who somewhr touchd real swayam after rey... Bt tht doesnt hpn..
Oki now cumin to d lift scene.. Tht cheap,ba**#*d,dog abhishek was all their again.. Shameless creature.. He lik tried to harras kriya...looser!!
Thankgod rey cld pinky up fr kriya n got to know tht she has reachd...
N dat look of rey when he got onside d lift n d lift was closin.. Omg dat made me go gaga over him[ps obv i dint c it but i definitely was able to picturise d whole lift scene]...
On d other hand.. Swayam somewhere had started falling for sharon.. Eee excited!!

Aww kriya crying:( she really looks lik a baby when she cries but rey as always managed to lighten her mood..
Btw m lovin neha tantrums.. Haha
Poor swayam.. He did crime shoutin on neha.. N poor vicky.. He got dragged in without any reason...
N viha r as always cute :)
N ami love swayam-neha-rey bond!!
N sharon's que.. R u pregnant!! Haha
But she again succeeded in manaofying swayam's task!! But one thing is buggin me.. Shivam was tokin about some trump card.. Wht is dat about.. Bt jo b h it wud only help in increasin d bond of kriyaansh:)
At d whole.. I really enjoyed readin d update n
Do not forget to update it again :p
Tnx fr d pm :)
Waitin fr d nxt part!!

Finally u updated this ff...

Beautiful written dear...

Each nd every part was describe nicely... Big hug to u

aapko kisne bola ki u lost touch nd all.. Bahut jakas parts the

kriyaansh ... Hayee
falling in love with them again nd again..
They wasy rey was teasing kria by calling her Mrs. Reyaansh singhania.. Loved it
nd protecting her from that evil.. 😡
nd they way he said that mrs. Singhania ko mr. Singhania hi bach sakta hai.. Hayee

swaron were superb too..
Coffee date with swayam.. Hehe
swayam ka bhi kuch raaz hai toh pata chalna baaki hai..
Sharon hav power to change his decisions..
The way she was calling Swayu.. Was hillarious nd awesome

viha were as usual cute nd mind blowing
neha ke toh nakre bhade gaye hai.. 😆

update the next part soon..

Nd pls dnt stop writing it.. Its awesome

thnx for pm

p.s. Congras for new threadEdited by GayatriJethani - 11 years ago

finally...after ages...but the wait was worth it...fantabulous chapters...especially kriyansh scenes...even swaron scenes were cute and eccentric...well etched...

first of all
congrats for the 3rd thread

i was so happy when i saw e pm
cuz i loved this ff

both the updates were awesome
n chetu,ur writing skills werent different, who said u lost that best touch of urs?😉

hope u update regularly

Hey awesome update. U justified all characters. Update soon.

Originally posted by: frankyfio

first of all 
congrats for the 3rd thread

i was so happy when i saw e pm
cuz i loved this ff

both the updates were awesome
n chetu,ur writing skills werent different, who said u lost that best touch of urs?😉

hope u update regularly

first of all congos for third thread...

yay!!!!!! party!!!!!!!!!!

and finally u updated...

u know what i like ur this habbit...double updates...

and the story...

arrghhh!!!!!!! im gonna kill that abhishek...

and i loved it to core whenever rey called her Mrs .SINGHANIA

aaahhh!!!!!! i love him to core...

swayam ki kya past hai????

kk lemme check the cs again...

waise i loved the way sharon tried to ease him up...

and that sexy dimples...aahhh...i rofled...

seriously bechara...sabke saamne sexy dimples bola????

sharam se mar chuka hoga

Congratzz for the 3rd thread 🥳
the most awaited update(s) 😆
& trust me,, it was really interesting . . . . . . 👍🏼
u may feel that u lost the touch of writing but it gets better always 👏
ab tujhe kuch time tak tang nhi karenge . . . . . U can rest swtheart 😆
thanx for making that dedicating categories . . . . . I may come in 3rd category too . . . . But 5th me toh - I have a gud position . . . . 🤣'ajeeb prani' . . . . I love ur sense of humour . . . Last time u tagged me as a 'species' 😆
abhishek pe thappado ki bauchaar . . . .
my reaction- 👏
shivam wants to try sharon or wat? 🤔
lolzz . . . . KR fighting over choclate cake piece 😃
ofcourse . . . Who the hell will spare this yummy tempatation 😛
bahot idiot hai dono . . . . Itne close khade hai lekin fir bhi lad rahe hai
sharon gulped it . . . . Hahaha . . . Monkey . . . Mauke ka fayda utha liya 😃
seems like only sharon can make swayu laugh 😉
rey on his teasings again . . . . . He like to call her by that name . . . . . 😉
time constraints . . . . . Isse achha to rey ke sath hi baith jati 😛
gosh! . . . . This ba**@*d is back here 😡
achha hua jo rey ne kriya ka pata kar liya . . . . 😊
loved the way he cared 4 her 🤗
& beated him to death . . . . Bahar phenko 🤬 ko
sharon . . . . She knw very well how to get a reaction 4m swayam . . . . Itna heavy order . . . . . 10 logon ka lunch hai kya 🤣
seems like he did'nt get love 4m his dad or maybe he've lost him 😔
swaron hug
neha's tantrums . . . . . 🤣
awww . . . . She's crying . . . . Dantt jo pad gyi khadus se . . . 😆
orphanage trip . . . . Wanna see swayam's reactions there 😛
my lamba comment 4 u . . . . . Kya karun updates hi itni jhakkas thi 😃 Edited by yogini64 - 11 years ago

Nice update.. Want more of kriyaansh..,
Plz update soon this time