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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks fr a lovely update...increasing curiosity due to last paragraph...what could be d suspense...hope ram be ok...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yiipppiiieee...:) Finally Maine update padha... N itz Mindblowing di... Meri Ninni gayi.. N m jst smiling n smiling...:):):):):) Awesome update..:) loved priya-peehu scene...nd Pihu's exitement...:) woowww.. I loved it yayy.. but hey suspense m Daal diya na.. Whtz d breaking news... o_O ?? Plzzz cntinue AsaP..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Arti its a another superb part.. Ya, it was a gd surprise not for Peehu only but for us too. And same like Peehu i have lots of curiosity in my mind to know Priya's intention to enter to the school.. And i m still waiting 4 peehu, ram convo.. I hope i will get that by end of part 2..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiii  superb entry with a new FF ..welcome to the BALH forum

the intro was too good and hard to think peehu in her teens ..
and 1st part is good the you brought peehu's worry about her teacher ,really great and i some hw imagined priya will be the teacher ...
and the 2nd part yah she was the one and peehu try to get her mother's reaction
wow its just superb like AMAZINGGG ...
i can so imagine priya while grinning like that ...😆 😆

Now plz dont say Ram flight crashed  etc etc 😡 😡..thats why they were watching the tv ..
i dont have problem if the media shwd priya ram kapoor joined in school  😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rayaBALH

<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">anji tu kya hai tu kuch bhi soch sakti hai n ye wala idea na m loving it</font> 😉

dhek samsu mera guess ekdum sahi nikla, kabhi mere tere budhi se sidhe guess bhi nikal jaate hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautiful and intresting update, our peehu just rocks after all beti kisski hai... Once again am saying it very very nice and hatke track, am loving it. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
heheh .. oh god  it was her  first  day n how will she get a best  teacher award..

 dont  make  any bad  news

 thanku for the update  loved it..



plz  pm me  when u   update

 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear friends,
Presenting the third part...well, our golu is fine..I dont intend to cause him any harm! :)
Like one of you have asked, I made an attempt to include RAYA nok-jhok. :))
Please read on and tell me if you liked this part...hope you do! Thanks.
 
 
PART 3: The Apple of Our Eyes
 
At Sharma House

Shipra was watching TV. She was channel-surfing and stopped suddenly to read the FLASH NEWS. She immediately called Sudheer. He rushed there, read it and could not believe his eyes. He said "KYA!" Sudheer called up other family members. Within minutes, the Kapoors and Sharmas were glued to their TV sets.

At school
Priya was escorted into a car that was parked just outside the school premises. She reached the destination in 5 minutes. Reporters from the print media and television media had arrived. Priya made her way with into the hall with the help of security guards. She was constantly talking to someone over the phone.
 

At Kapoor Mansion

Peehu came home and obeyed her mother. She recalled her mother's words "…refresh karlo and watch TV". "Maa itne cool kab se ho gayi" she said to herself and happily turned on the TV. She started to switch channels and halted at one of them.

The Breaking News banner read:

"Priya Ram Kapoor Quits Business, Embraces Teaching. Live and exclusive interview with Mr and Mrs. Ram Kapoor coming up at 18:00 hours. Stay tuned!"

 

At the Media Conference Room

(It was a huge room with a seating capacity of 500 and was diagonally behind Kapoor Mansion. The entrance to it was from the road behind the mansion.)

Priya desperately waited for Ram. At 5:58PM, he arrived. He looked tired as he entered the hall. Priya was waiting for him near the entrance. He smiled at her and she smiled back. They both walked towards the dais.

Priya: "Kaise hai aap, tired lag rahe hai"

Ram smiled (he had not heard her): "You look gorgeous in this sari Priya."

Priya: "Sacchi?"

Ram: "Sacchi mucchi" 😃

They both exchanged a little glance and realized they were near their chairs by now. Ram pulled out a chair and offered her to sit. She thanked him and sat. Ram sat next to her and pulled out a handkerchief to wipe his swat. Priya pushed her bangle back, set her hair and set her bindi.

Reporter: "Sir, should we wait for Peehu?"

That didn't go well with Ram!

Ram: "Gentleman, please address her as MISS Peehu Ram Kapoor (stressing each word) 😡

Priya was smiling to herself seeing how Ram was possessive not just about Peehu but even about her name. The reporter apologized.

Ram: "It's alright. She is too young to join us."

Cameras flashed. Video reels rolled. Lights beamed. A barrage of questions began…

 
Reporter: "Ma'am, why did you quit Kapoor Industries?"

Priya: "The company is under safe hands (looking at Ram), the momentum is good. So it's a perfect time to move on. I had been contemplating a career change in a while after thirteen years with the company."

 
A reporter interrupted: "Sorry but is it not 14 yrs?"

Priya smiled: "Please subtract one year. I took a year's sabbatical when our daughter was born."

 
Reporter: "Oh ok. Tell us about your experience."

Priya: "I have seen the company grow from strength to strength. Ram has carried it on well and built it to what you see today. I got to work closely with Ram and offer my 2 cents and he was ever so encouraging. So it's been a fantastic experience."

 
Reporter: "Why are you joining Peehu's…sorry Ms. Peehu Ram Kapoor's school?"

Priya: "My daughter needs my time and attention. About a month ago Peehu told us that her teacher Mrs. Jaya who mentored her was quitting the school shortly. We did not want Peehu to miss on guidance. So Ram and I visited her teacher the very next day and had a detailed talk to understand Peehu's needs. It was my chance to spend quality time with my daughter and I encashed on it. So I submitted my resignation to Ram that evening. He took care of the relieving formalities. I have been studying her syllabus since then. I hope to fill in for Mrs. Jaya. Time will tell."

 
Reporter: "Was Peehu aware of your decision?"

Priya laughed: "Peehu loves surprises so I hadnt mentioned a word. She was delighted to find me land in her classroom today. Only Ram, Vikram and I were aware of the plans."

(Peehu who was watching the live coverage on TV was in for another surprise. Her parents did all that ground work and she had no clue. She had assumed her parents to be too busy to pay her attention…)

 
Reporter: "You don't exactly have a teaching background, so how did you manage to get this job?"

Priya laughed again: "The school management told me I am over-qualified. I had to demonstrate Physics and Math lessons to the school authority. I must have done something right there to gain this job. Btw teaching is not new to me. I coach at our NGO in my free time. Plus have sincerely learnt high-school Physics and Math syllabus!"

Ram liked her response, he acknowledged it.

 
Reporter: "Wont you miss working with Mr. Ram? We know you both share an excellent rapport. Perhaps this is the last time you would be sitting in a conference with him…"

Priya's heart sunk. Yes, she would miss Ram dearly and clearly. Who else knew the pain better than her? She tried to answer but got emotional. Ram sensed her discomfort. It was a live telecast so Ram handed her a tissue from beneath the table and squeezed her hand slightly, as if to tell her he will take care. He drew a sheet of paper closer to her and signalled to her to read it. She bent her head and pretended to read. Ram cleared his throat and started to speak.

Ram: "Let me answer it. Trust me…I am extremely happy that Priya resigned." 👏

Priya was stunned and so was everyone else. 😲 She could not believe what she just heard. Her emotion changed from sadness to anger. The room became noisy as everyone started discussing among themselves. Ram remained composed.

Ram: "Let me complete. The company had to pay Priya a fat salary for 12 years for her brilliant ideas and contribution. Going forward I will get them for free! Isn't that a good thing? Our company is a family-run business and she is family. So nothing prevents me from discussing company matters with her - at home, at ease, unofficially. (He looked naughtily at Priya and continued) Every morning I can gather her ideas over a cup of tea, go to the office and present that idea as if it were my own. So there's nothing for us to miss." 😉

The room burst into laughter and Ram got a round of applause. An amused Priya looked at Ram. He was smiling at her, anticipating appreciation. Priya whispered "Not bad, my polar bear is smart." 👏

Ram: "Mota kaha tuu ne mujhe?" 😡

Priya: "Arre kab kaha mota? Waise Ram log dekh rahe hai, so please…" 😆

Ram thought of something. He put his tongue out, twisted it across his lips and smiled. 😛

Ram stood up: "Thanks all, that's all we had."

The reporters thanked the couple and left the room. Ram asked Priya to leave for KM and assured he will join her soon. She agreed.

 
At KM
Priya reached home, Peehu hugged her: "Saare jawab mil gaye maa…thanks so sooo sooo much!!"

Priya kissed her: "Most welcome beta. Ok let me change and come back. Papa thode der me ayenge, saath mein dinner karenge."

In about 30 mins from then Priya got a call from an unknown number. Someone said "Thanks Ma'am for your quick response. They will be published in our 'Frankly Speaking' column. You can read it tomorrow morning. I must tell you, we did not expect such replies." Priya was too tired to probe. She thanked the caller and ended the call.

Ram came home to a loud reception by Peehu. She screamed with joy, hugged him and kissed him. He reciprocated with an equal enthusiasm. Priya was smiling at the sight. Nothing new, she thought.

Ram: "Priya, woh 'Frankly Speaking' magazine se abhi koyi call aaya tha kya?"

Priya: "han but I dint understand head or tail of what he spoke."

Ram: "They are based in Delhi. They tried to call you this morning but your phone was switched off. So they gave me a questionnaire and asked me to get your responses. I wrote the responses on your behalf and faxed it back now. Kal subah padh lena internet par."

Priya sat on the bed and stretched her legs: "Hmm. Waise kya questions the? What did you reply…who bhi mere behalf par?"

Ram handed her a sheet of paper: "Padh lo"

Priya read the contents and jumped out of the bed: "Yeee…Don't tell me this…this non-sense will be published..now I can relate to what that guy said…RAAAM HOW COULD YOU?"

Ram smiled: "Polar bear kaha na mujhe madam…ab jhel lijiye" and sat for dinner.

Peehu: "Kya hua?"

Priya: "Ku…kuch…kuch nahi."

Priya read the contents again. (Here is what naughty Ram had written on her behalf)

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Qn 1: Now that you have a 6-hour job per day, how do you intend to spend spare time?

Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor: I'll ensure Ram comes home early every day. Then I'll load Peehu with lots of reading and writing, so she cannot disturb us you know…

Qn 2: Any plans for a vacation?

Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor: Of course. I wont disclose the location right now. Btw, Peehu wont accompany us. J

Qn 3: Tell us one thing about your husband that we do not know.

Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor: Is that important? Some things are best left unsaid.

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Priya was shocked. What had Ram done!

Ram: "Aao na Priya, dinner karenge."

Priya did not respond. She was fuming. She could not say anything – Peehu was there and the response was faxed to that company. She cried.

Ram rushed to her: "Oye oye Priya…yaar tum ro rahi ho…arre ro mat…you know I cant handle it dear…please please Priya"

Priya: "Get lost Ram, I hate you!"

Peehu was upset and helpless at the same time.

Ram: "Ok I'm sorry I'm really sorry…dekho I was lying to you ok? Mazaak kar raha tha darling…please don't cry."

Priya wiped her tears: "What? I don't believe you."

Ram: "Arre tumne mujhe polar bear kaha na tho I wanted to tease you…isi liye ye sab."

Priya: "Tho wo phone call?"

Ram: "Arre yaar maine STD booth se call kiya tha…Rahul se bath karwaya. You can ask him. Waise wo publication doesn't exist. And this questionnaire was made up…sirf tumhe chidhaane ke liye."

Priya: "Sacchi?"

Ram (wiping her tears and caressing her hair): "Sacchi mucchi"

They hugged each other.

Peehu: "Excuse me..pehle dinner kar lijiye then you can get back to this pose."

Priya: "Peeehuuu!!!"

Peehu: "Sorry"

The family had dinner and went to bed early. They had loads to talk but decided to sleep early.
 
<To be continued> Comments please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 1st..😃
hhhaaaiiiyyyee mera toh
"Sacchi mucchi" pe hi heart attack hogaya... hihihi oki agey padhti hu Edited by Anamika163 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hats off to u.. The way u r drawing the characters is just amazing. Uff!! Priya sher to ram sawa sher but priya ka ek ansu and ram flat. Just lovely and not to forgot peehu oops..! I mean miss peehu ram kapoor is also rocking in the ff. A big huggy and thank u for quick update.