Fanaa-Angad,Kripa,Nishant,Kanan

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Part-1…Nishant & Kripa in a moving boat.K has kept her face on N's shoulder.
N:I dunno why but I feel that this boat is going 2 sink
K is not reacting.
N:don't u feel anything?
K:no,bcoz u r there with me.so I'm not scared
N smiles.they both hold their hands 2gether.
The boat is about 2 sink.K screams.They both fall down into the water.K is drowning.
N swims in the river & saves K.K is unconscious.N gives her breath with his breath.K opens her eyes slowly.
K:nishant..once wen my life was sinking,u saved me & gave me a new life.now wen I was drowning & dying,u gave me breath.u r gr8
N keeps her finger on K's lips:now don't say anything more
K weeps.N sings:kuch na kaho…{1942 luv story}K smiles.N carries her in his arms.it rains.
K closes her eyes & thinks:why this rain is bringing me pain?why is it reminding me of my past that I want 2 4get?
A scene cums 2 her mind:Angad & kripa standing close 2 each other in rain.
Tears cum out of her eyes.N did'nt notice it

That night a big music show was taking place.The rock star Angad is on the stage.Ppl r jumping with joy.
Then cums Kanan 2 the stage.she has short hair.Has worn orange salwar kameez with a wonderful duppatta.
They both perform 2gether:rabba..{mujhe kuch kehna hai}
Kripa switches on the tv.she sees it's live telecast going on on tv.she gets angry & switches it ff & throws the remote control.it falls on nishant's feet.
K:I'm sorry nishant
N:suddenly what happned 2 b angry?
K:I wanted 2 ignore sum ppl in my life.but they r on tv 2 irritate me
N:who?
K:cant u guess?
N:Angad?
K:not only angad.kanan too
N is shocked.a flashback scene:Kanan feeding nishant with her hand.they both r laughing.
N wipes his tears. K:however we try 2 move far away from them,why r they coming close 2 us?
N is speechless.

CAN U PREDICT WHAT HAD HAPPENED IN THEIR PAST LIFE?Edited by jasminerahul - 17 years ago

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Part-2…Every1 enjoys Angad-kanan's show.

Angad-kanan in the room.
A:as we expected our show became a big hit
K smiles:its bcoz of u.if angad is there,wi the show b a flop?
A:but ur contribution cant b ignored
K:what did I do angad?
A:ur performance was rocking & u r my inspiration.if u were not there,the rock star Angad wud've finished long ago.wen I was completely lost,u were the one who brought me back 2 life
K:wen I was suffering,u saved me.otherwise I wud've gone mad.
K's eyes burn with anger:Nishant..u thot u can break me.but u cud'nt.bcoz angad is there with me.he gives me all the happiness of this world
A is angry:Kripa,u thot without u,I'm nothing.but wen kanan came 2 me,I became more lucky.while ur career shattered,kanan's career graph gone up
K:why r we wasting our time thinking abt our past.cant we think of our present & future
A smiles:u r right.we shud celebrate the success of our show
K:ofcourse.i'll arrange everything 4 the party


Party…Angad luks hot in his outfit.Kanan has worn a shining white tight frock.
All r enjoying the party.
A:guys,we r celebrating the success of our show
Press media ppl r after them.
1 guy with the mike:whats the secret of ur success Mr.Angad Khanna?
A keeps kanan 2 him:no doubt,its my beautiful wife Kanan.if she was'nt there with me,I dunno what wud've been my fate.she brought luck 2 life

Nishant-kripa who r watching this live on tv get irritated.K thinks:his wife kanan is his success?Kanan,taking my position,u r sitting happily with angad.what kind of a girl u r!u cheated on me as well as nishant
N thinks:snatching kanan from me,u r enjoying luck?this happiness won't last long

Angad:lets dance & rock guys
All the cuples r on the dance floor.A & K hold hands 2gether & dance.song:koi aap sa….

N & K get irritated seeing their romantic dance.
K thinks:Angad is nobody 2 me.i hate him.then also why I'm feeling uncomfortable seeing him with kanan?
N thinks:Kanan,how cud u go away from me?still I cant bear u with any other guy.i just neglect u.but why u r coming b4 me always?

Nishant cums & holds kripa from back.K:whats this nishant?
N laughs:see hat gift I've brought 4 u
N shows tickets:tickets 4 our trip 2 paris
K:wow!u r so sweet nishant
N:now only u realized that I'm sweet
K smiles:no,I new it b4 itself.that's why I caught ur hand & entered into ur life
N smiles.

Angad tells kanan:I'm not satisfied with our celebration
K:why,u did'nt like the party?
A:yes.but my happiness is so much that one party is not enuf.so lets go 2 paris 2 hav joy
K smiles:angad,u r a real celebrity who wants 2 enjoy life 2 the fullest
A:life is 2 enjoy kanan.kripa did'nt allow 2 enjoy.so I dumped her
K becomes dull   A:now I enjoy,bcoz u r there with me
K smiles

Part-3….Nishant-kripa enter the flight.Wen they were busy talking,Angad-kanan enter.so they did'nt see each other.Both the cuples enjoy talking.
In the airport,also they walk close 2 each other.but they did'nt see each other.

Nishant-kripa go out.
K:wow!paris is so beautiful
N:that's why I brought u here


Angad-kanan go out.K:I never thot paris is such a beautiful place
A:but I new that pairs is beautiful.that's why I brought u here.bcoz since paris is beautiful,it needs only beautiful girls like u
K smiles:Angad…u…
A smiles:I'm serious ok
K smiles.They both laugh.
K:why don't we go 2 the church?

Suddenly a flashback scene cums into angad's mind.
Angad-kripa in goa.K in a shortskirt & short top.A is also in shorts without short.
A:u luk so hot
K:Angadddd.stop it
A:I'm serious yaar.tell,how do I luk in this dress?
K:I feel that u hav no dress.shirtless.a very short bottom
A is shy.
K:but still…
A is eager 2 hear:still…I no what u r going 2 say,still I'm hot & handsome
K:oh really?
A:I gave u such a wonderful compliment & u r not giving me any compliment
K:so u gave me a compliment 2 hear compliment from me?
A:yaaa
K:so u were simply telling that I'm hot?
A:ya    K:so u did'nt feel that I'm hot?
A pulls her close 2 him:u r very pretty
K smiles.
Both of them play in beach water.

They wear proper dress.K:we'l go 2 church.i heard that goa's church is very powerful
A:as u wish
They smile & go 2 church & pray
A:what did u pray?
K holds his hand:I prayed 2 bring us 2gether always.our relationship IS ETERNAL.NO ONE CAN BREAK IT

A thinks:but we broke.why each & everything reminds me of kripa?
A:no need of going 2 church.it irritates me.it reminds me of a person whom I hate
Kanan:but plz cum with me 4 my sake
A:ok

They go 2 church.Nishant-kripa also reach there.K thinks:its in a church that me & angad promised that we'l always remain 2gether.but…
K wipes her tears.

After the prayer,angad-kanan & nishant-kripa see each other

WHAT'L B THEIR REACTION 2 MEET AFTER A LONG TIME?

wow, just read your ff and it's great 👏
wonder what will happen to the four of them 😉 😊
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That was awesome part plz contiune soon

Part4…They r shocked.
Kripa thinks:after a long time…
Angad thinks:why did kripa cum b4 me after so much of time?
Nishant thinks:time passed,but the faces r not changed
Kanan thinks:nishant & kripa in the same place..
Both the cuples go from there without even speaking.


Angad is angry:how cum kripa & nishant here?
Kan:whats the use of getting angry?
A:then what can I do?
K:u r so angry 2 see them.u said u'l scream at kripa if u see her.but u did'nt open ur mouth wen u saw her
A is speechless.A thinks:why cud'nt I shout at her?what makes me avoid scolding her?
A:even u did'nt speak
K:I want 2 4get my past.i just want 2 ignore nishant.4 me he does'nt exist in this world
K's eyes get filled up with tears.K wipes it & thinks:I hate nishant,but still why my eyes r getting wet thinking of him?


Nishant is sitting quietly.Kripa cums near him with tears:nishant!
N luks at K:kanan with angad.i really cud'nt tolerate it
K:why?
N is soeechless.N thinks:what makes me think so?why shid I care whether she's with angad or not as she's already out of my life.i don't care about kanan
K thinks:there r certain things that we cant 4get however we try.it's the truth of our life

K thinks of her past.
A few yrs back..K in a village.she has worn a beautiful salwar.Long hair.Has a nose ring.She's singing & dancing: Des Rangila{Fanaa}

that was so sad...but it was also really good 😊
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-Amrit