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Krazzy4u786

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Awesome update!!
Loved it, plz continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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beautiful update, glad they found out wat swamini is up2

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promise forever

manvi and viren were still guilty. virat took notice as the four were sitting on the bed and chatting that manvi and viren had been avoiding eye contact to viren.

virat: manvi bhai are you both angry with me.

viren and manvi both look up red eyes filled with tears looked at him.

virat: what happened. manvi is the baby ok. bhai something is bothering you. manvi is it the labour pain. bhai is there a problem in one of your cases.

jeevika watched virat as he shot continuous questions at viren and manvi and bursted in a loud laugh and with her manvi and viren.

virat: why are you all laughing.

they all continue laughing ohh now i understand by staying with this bandirya you all are also gone bad.

manvi(standing on the bed): aaahh chep how can you talk like that about my di and jeeju who gave you the right.

virat: (shocked)manvi you are pregnant you're not supposed to be standing on the bed.

manvi: virat nothing is going to happen to me hirishekesh ki chaki ka ata kha kar bari hui hoon.

virat: i know that nothing is going to happen to you iam worried about the baby and the bed breaking.

manvi stared opened mouth as virika went into fits of laughters.manvi bents down and pulls virat by the collar.

manvi: what did you say i am fat.

virat: well let me think yes.

manvi starting virat with a pillow. virat goes behind jeevika as the pillow slightly fits with jeevika's stomach virat commments.

virat: oh bandirya be careful you are hitting my princess.

manvi:sorry di chutki is fine na.

jeevika: manvi relax iam only four months pregnant and the pillow touched me and for heavens sake it is a pillow.

all four share a friendly hug.

suddenly manvi gets an idea and rums down virika and virat follow her as she near the statue of mata rani.

jeevika: manvi what happen.

manvi: di chalo hum ek promise lata hai ka hum humesha saath rahenga.

jeevika:marte dum tak.

viren:ek dosre ko protect karenga.

virat: aur agar moth nai humein juda kar diya.

manvi:if death finds one of us.

all four in unioun: the rest three shall die.

from this moment ownwards the four souls become one.

sorry my mom is calling i will try continuing later the chapter was meant to be long.

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Krazzy4u786

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Awesome!!
Loved it, continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

chandana123

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged

Great!!!

These four's love for each other is overwhelming!!!

Continue soon... Smile

sapphhire

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i love the foursome.

Sweety1234556

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged

very well written btw is jeevika pregnant? I read ur previous parts but didnt find anything like this,so was just aking.

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Aww love da foursome

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