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FF: DIL HAIN KI MAANTA NAHIN... (ch2,Chp3 pg 5)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
guys i am a anari.. and dis is my first try to write an ff.. if u like it.. plzz give feed back.. i will continue..

In the ETF office.. ( rathore is engrossed in a file and shree, riya and chotu are whispering)
chotu : shree baata na...
shree: main kya batau.. arre yeh rathore sir ka kuch bharosha nehi hain.. pata nehi kab bharak jaye..
             riya tu baata.. he never scolds u.. Wink
riya : ha saare khatre waale kam main hi karoon.. aur and mein arjun sir aur rathore sir se bhi daant
          main hi khao.. na baba na..
shree : chodo tum dono se kuch nehi hoga lagta hain mujhe hi batana parega.. tum log ek choti
                si picnic k permission k lie aisa kar rahe ho to case kaise solve karoge... Angry sab kam
                 mujhe hi karna parta hain..
 (arjun enters at that moment.. riya galnced at him.. he was looking unresistably handsome today in that white shirt..)
arjun : yeh kya ho raha hain? tum 3 no hameesha kya khusur fusur karte rehte ho? ria?? maine
            jo tumhe data sheet nikal le k lie kahi thi woh tumne nikali?
riya : ( darr k ) woh sir... abhi nikal deti hoon.. woh sir hum mein aap 2 no se kuch baat karni hain..
(shree and chotu giving thumbs up to ria )
rathore and arjun: kya??
riya : sir woh sir woh... humare samne to abhi koi case nehi hain toh kya hum sab ek saath kahi
         ghumne chal sakte hain? i mean picnic sort...
arjun : hum skul k chote chote bacche hain kya jo picnic pe jayenge? statistically speaking ria
             agar yeh sab faltu cheez hum log karte rehenge toh humare case solve karna k chances
              90% kam ho jayegi.. samjhe ya samjhaoon.
rathore : ek min arjun.. i think its not a bad idea.. hum log police wale hain iska matlab toh yeh
                nehi dat we cant njoy..
(riya staring at arjun.. really hoping to change his decision.. agar woh hi nehi jayega woh mein ja k kya karungi)
arjun : watever i am not coming..
rathore : but we will go.. guys pack up hum saturday ko niklenge.. aur kaha jana hain yeh hum kal
                deceide karenge..
shree and chotu : yaaa  Big smile
riya and arjun stared at each other.. arjun realised by seeing the pain in riya's face and got out of the room smiling.. Smile


Edited by sigmundfreud - 30 September 2012 at 9:38am

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Great start...

Edited by Radhika Shah - 21 September 2012 at 11:23pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Nice start... do continue soon :)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
continue sooon.

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Contiue soon

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Gr8 start dear...update soon...

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Beautiful, so Arjun knows Riya has feelings for himWink
Continue dear

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